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Short Stories Result

First of all, thank you novahsnow for taking part in judging. We really are very grateful to you♥️😁.

So, here are your results dear participants.

Judge: novahsnow

Book: The Earth's Longing

Author: fly2live

title - 5/5

cover - 3/5

blurb - 9/10

characters - 10/10

flow - 9/10

plot - 10/10

grammar - 8/10

overall enjoyment - 10/10

Total - 64

Review: The book was a very pleasant read, the deep and meaningful story had me enjoying the way it was written. The cover could be somewhat made a little better and the only other thing would be the grammar, there are a few misplaced punctuation marks in the story, especially in the dialogues which could be edited out. Overall, I really enjoyed reading it and would definitely recommend it to people.

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Book: And that's how a killer is bred

Author: TheEnigmaticJesse

title - 5/5

cover - 4/5

blurb - 8/10

characters - 9/10

flow - 9/10

plot - 10/10

grammar - 8/10

overall enjoyment - 10/10

Total - 63

Review: The title intrigued me to read the story, and I also loved the plot immensely. It was such an intriguing and philosophical read. The characters, the plot, and the flow of the story were described wonderfully. I would definitely recommend it to others. There are a few spelling errors that could be edited out while rereading the book.

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Book: The plan

Author: angiexvi

title - 4/5

cover - 4/5

blurb - 8/10

characters - 9/10

flow - 8/10

plot - 9/10

grammar - 8/10

overall enjoyment - 8/10

Total - 58

Review: This was a really enjoyable read, the way the characters were described was great and intrigued a reader. Although there was too much description, the things which are important to mention at the time would be more suitable but even then it was enjoyable yet had me reading more. One more thing that could be improved would be the blurb, it could be made more intriguing and gripping.

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Book - Dragon: myth of the Bermuda triangle

Author - CroodsGirl

title - 4/5

cover - 5/5

blurb - 8/10

characters - 7/10

flow - 8/10

plot - 9/10

grammar - 8/10

overall enjoyment - 8/10

Total - 57

Review: The title itself draws a person in, and makes the person curious to read more. I loved the story, the way the boy from an island enters a yacht-filled with humans. Thrilling indeed. This was indeed a refreshing read, the grammar could be corrected after editing and the blurb of the story could be made more intriguing. Even though it was something I would love to read more of.

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Book - Maybe Baby

Author - Roxydog05

title - 4/5

cover - 2/5

blurb - 7/10

characters - 8/10

flow - 9/10

plot - 8/10

grammar - 9/10

overall enjoyment - 9/10

Total - 56

Review: It was a great read, something that did straight look out of the '50s. I would love to read more of it, but the cover needs a lot of improvement. It was a great story along with the plot, but the cover needs to be as good so as to draw readers in and not miss out. The blurb also could be a bit more descriptive.

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Book - Searching for meaning

Author - PatricktheGecko

title - 5/5

cover - 3/5

blurb - 6/10

characters - 9/10

flow - 8/10

plot - 8/10

grammar - 6/10

overall enjoyment - 9/10

Total - 54

Review: The title itself does give a bit of an insight into how the story would be, and it was really amazing. The mysterious aura surrounding the plot was intriguing and something refreshing. I really couldn't predict what was going to happen next and that's what makes a story seem more amazing to read. There are a few things that could be improved, like the cover. I loved the font but there could be a better picture used to emphasize the story. Section breaks in the chapters would make it easy to read and understand, there were a lot of missing and misplaced punctuations that should be edited out. Other than that, it's a great read and recommendable.

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Book - Dead Eye Angels MC

Author - Zuleika

title - 4/5

cover - 5/5

blurb - 8/10

characters - 6/10

flow - 8/10

plot - 8/10

grammar - 7/10

overall enjoyment - 7/10

Total - 53

Review: The story is something that I have read before, although the characters could be described a bit more in-depth. It was a good read and something that is recommendable. There were a few punctuation errors that could be edited out while rereading or going through the chapters thoroughly.

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Book - The Rebellion

Author - LohedamiMOGBOLU

title - 3/5

cover - 3/5

blurb - 8/10

characters - 8/10

flow - 7/10

plot - 9/10

grammar - 6/10

overall enjoyment - 8/10

Total - 52

Review: I would like to start with the blurb, the title made it seem like action or adventure kind of story but as I read the blurb it blew my mind. The plot was totally unexpected and was something fun to read. There were many grammatical errors, the first one was the use of emoji. Emojis are never used in stories and descriptions are supposed to be enough to get the point across. There was also a misuse of ellipsis, which is only to be used as a pause and when needed. Editing the book is recommendable and the story behind the plot was intriguing and did feel relatable.

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Book - Josephine

Author - Leon1692

title - 3/5

cover - 3/5

blurb - 8/10

characters - 7/10

flow - 7/10

plot - 7/10

grammar - 8/10

overall enjoyment - 7/10

Total - 50

Review: The title of the story is unique and something that is relatable to the story, although the cover could be improved by adding a better picture and a better font so as to look intriguing and relatable to the story, The few spelling errors could be edited out, but overall I loved the writing style and the way everything was described. Although the plot did seem to move normally, it suddenly seemed to be going fast towards the end which could be edited and rewritten.

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Book - Must be love

Author - Rinuesha

title - 4/5

cover - 3/5

blurb - 7/10

characters - 7/10

flow - 7/10

plot - 8/10

grammar - 6/10

overall enjoyment - 7/10

Total - 49

Review: The story though seen before had me wanting to read more, I loved the descriptions and the reactions, although they could be written more in-depth. The pace of the story could be improved by not describing things that aren't important at the moment. The grammatical errors involved a few misplaced punctuations which could be improved after a thorough read. Although, a plot seen before, the story is unique like every other story and I would like to read more of it. It does have a lot of potential and was a good read.

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3rd place goes to....

The plan by angiexvi


2nd place goes to...

And that's how a killer is bred by TheEnigmaticJesse


1st place goes to..

The Earth's longing by fly2live


We do not want to disappoint the participants, so here is a sticker for you too!

Congratulations to all the winner! We hope you get higher and higher in the future... and the others who didn't get the top three, don't worry... show your best next time 😁

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