International Fanfiction Results
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Name: Another Life
By: VictoriaLachac
Title: The title is definitely relevant, and very catchy 4/5.
Cover: The cover is not the best, but i can't really have high expectations for fanfic covers, so 3.5/5.
Blurb: The blurb does give a general idea of the story without spoiling too much. It definitely captured my attention. It's a solid 9.5/10.
Characters: The author definitely changed Loki's character and put a twist of her own. We can definitely see how she imagines Loki in her mind and it's kinda adorable. The main female protagonist is a typical " I'm not like other girls" kinda person. But she doesn't stick to that personality trait the entire time and has some depth in her character which I like. 8.5/10.
Flow: The flow was perfect. It was not to rushed, not too dragged. It was just perfect. 10/10.
Plot: The plot was kinda generic. The typical giving the character a love interest. But the way she handled it and arranged it was very well done. 9/10
Grammer: The grammar was explainable since the author mentioned that he/she wrote it in their native language. However the incorrect punctuation marks kinda irked me so I'll give it a 9.5/10.
Overall Enjoyment: Overall it was a fun and engaging read and I recommend it to anyone who wants to enjoy a good long Loki Laufeyson fanfic. A solid 9/10.
Total: 63/70
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Name: The Legend of Zelda: Dark Tombs
By: Alchemy_savatar
Title: The title is very eye-catching. I loved it 5/5
Cover: It is very relevant. Looks like it was custom drawn for this book. 5/5
Blurb: I have nothing much to say about it. It looks like an average description. 8/10
Characters: I am not a part of this fandom, so I do not know how the character's actually are, but the way the author portrayed the characters was done in a fantastic way. 9/10
Flow: I personally felt it was too dragged, but that could just be me I guess. 8/10
Plot: It was a very engaging and very interesting read. I don't have much to say about it but yeah, I liked it a lot. 9.5/10
Grammer: There were a few minor mistakes here and there but nothing too major. 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: I really enjoyed it and I'm really considering joining the fandom after reading this. 10/10
Total: 63.5/70
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Name: Resident Evil: Spirit of Vengeance
By: QuillWeaver
Title: I really liked it, and it was super catchy. Overall nothing bad to say about it. 4.5/5
Cover: The cover is not the best..... I think it could be better. 3/5
Blurb: The cover had the main idea of the story but it wasn't exactly curiosity gripping. 8.5/10
Characters: The characters were written wonderfully and were not cardboard cutouts which is something I'm really picky about while judging. And you could practically feel the chemistry of the two MC's through the book. 10/10
Flow: The flow was not rushed or dragged. It was perfect. 10/10
Plot: The plot was good but the way the author presented it was done in an amazing way. 9.5/10
Grammar: There were a few mistakes here and there but it was nothing major. 9.5/10
Overall Enjoyment: I really enjoyed the book and out of these three that I read, this must be my favorite. And im a really hard person to impress so a 10/10
Total: 65/70
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Name: Rogue and the warrior
By: Noyam_Cups
Title: 4/5 (Unique but not apt)
Cover: 3/5 (since it's a female centric book, the female protagonist should be highlighted)
Blurb: 5/10 (There is no blurb)
Characters: 6/10 (One side character get apt in his part very well!)
Flow: 7/10 (a little dragged in 10th chapter)
Grammar: 8/10 (No errors but a few sentences are a little complicated)
Plot:5/10
Overall: 7/10 (A typical werewolf story but the rogue is unique)
Total: 45/70
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Name: In another life
Title: 5/5
Cover: 2/5 (I think you should blend the images more)
Blurb: 10/10 (It's really attractive)
Characters: 10/10 (I really like how you mentioned every character neatly)
Flow: 7/10 (In the starting it was really good!! But I felt it was a little dragged later)
Plot: 9/10 (Damn! It's beautiful but somewhere I felt there's routine plot too)
Grammar: 10/10
Overall: 8/10 (I would suggest you to change the cover and add cliffhangers in the end of chapters)
Total: 61/70
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Name: Shrouded in Mystery
By: SkullantacySmith
Title: 4/5 (The title sounds really interesting. The Meaning will be difficult to understand Shrouded - A cover for some things. She tried to be unique here but title can be little easy)
Cover: 4/5 (The cover holds her previous awards stickers.. I knew she had awards but only one rose doesn't define the story according to me.. Maybe she thought that A rose is the Phantom of Opera's symbolic representation. But at least there is no mask of Eric, it is reasonable expectation in this Phantom of Opera's fiction.! The four pics attached as MCs' [1 point for this only because Eric has his mask on.])
Blurb : 6/10 ([ I can't give 5 Because she holds the curiosity in first 2 chapters] The Story's description will be tempting But the first few chapters itself dragged one. I think she uses many words. The blurb will be gone as the
Characters: 7/10 (The Characters explanation is not very good. As it's a historical fiction she needs to explain clearly. Main lead - Annika She is a typical girl with inferiority complex, but her expressions change is not suitable. This girl belongs to the 21st century and also surviving in the late century but doing the future postures in that historical period is little not-nice at all. Erik's expression is acceptable as an old historical man. Madame Giry's postures are good as well.. Beth - MC' s sister was shown by dark nature and she is not really explained in the story.. [ Beth was shown in pics along with main characters like Annika, Erik, Raylen ]..So she also holds the story at some point.. After 10 chaps maybe the author decided to explain to her.. But it's not acceptable. Many Characters are unexplained.[ Ethan but Annika saying his name often - what readers will think friend or boyfriend or even cousin NOT EXPLAINED]
Flow: 6/10 (The flow is dreadful.. now only Annika survived 2 days in Opera populaire [After 10 chaps] So much of words. This kind of affected it's blurb** People will surely feel tedious. She herself admitted that the story is under editing.)
Plot: 6/10 (The plot is not unique if we have known the idea of getting into our favourite world [ The story is turned out as HISTORICAL NOVEL] But in description the author said that Mc will turn the history (100chaps) may be it have some plot twist in its upcoming chaps. Maybe the events will change. Actually there is a hole in the story where Annika thinks Erik loves Cristine according to the original story of Opera's populaire. But Erik and Cristine didn't have one on one conversation or any encounters like that. It's affecting the story's plot when Annika is just doing exactly like Cristine[Original Opera story] by going to Erik's lair and being lured by his musical etc. She even loves Erik but denies it.)
Grammar: 7/10 (The Author seemed to be good in English. She uses many words like tumultuous, whilst, shrouded etc., and so on.. But at the same time excessive words lead to boredom. Even Some sentences were left unexplained. Like "the girls are sleeping "Said by Madame Giry.. You can't understand whether she is referring to ballet girls or maids or some others.. [I understand lately])
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10 (The story has a blurb at start but that doesn't last long-lasting. Reading many words leads to tedious, people won't read after a few chaps. Too much of explanation was given to places and things instead of characters. If she gives a character explanation the story will get its grip.[I thought] Even though the explanation is needed, here it's longer than necessary.)
Total: 46/70
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Name: Kiss Me If You Can
By: Roxydog05
TITLE: 4/5 (The title is describing a romantic Chick Flick, but the story is actually about the original show with an MC created by ROXYDOG05 [ I think so and verified with the author itself ] the story is revolving around the teenagers gang.)
COVER: 4/5. (It contains every one, with simple design.)
Blurb: 6/10
Characters: 8/10 (The every Characters are from original series. Only MC(Helen) is Author's. Helen is a bubbly girl and perfectly blended with the series. Even though every Characters are in drama series, some need explanation for their presence in scenes. I like how she blended the OC [MC] in her story. Literally She have pics for every SCENES. The MC is witty and only one chick of the boys gang but really kind and good. Relatable in some movies where one girl in boys gang and have good fun with them.)
Plot: 7/10. (The plot is based on the series.. it's a hit series so no argument here. But title scene is only one that too LI kissed her ears, he was drunk. may be the author will hold the story and it's title in upcoming chaps Plot hole is when u can't understand the ending scenes in every chaps.. it ended and started completely without connection. Eg: because, the missed part contains the curious part like whether they kissed or not??The police station scene ended like everyone in one room with a policeman and next started in their home. )
Grammar: 9/10. (She handles the grammar of the story in the best way.. I mean explanation where simple English and it's quite understandable. But some boys' language needs to be noted and explained in that particular chap itself.. Because it is a 70's[1974] Sitcom she tried best but neglected the few ones. So one point detected as grammatical mistakes and one point decreased so 9.)
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10. (IT'S A REALLY HILARIOUS STORY. More comedy scenes will make sure to be humor for READERS. But the enjoyment contains everything but spoiling the Curiosity by cutting the scenes and time lapse is really not acceptable when it comes to Story.. A story needs good explanation in every aspect and a good completed scene is only acceptable. It's the main prompts for a good story.)
Total: 52/70
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Name: Keeper of the lost Olympics
Title: 4 (The title is really giving fantasy vibes but I think you should use something apt for the story)
Cover: 2 (I really suggest you to change the cover. The font isn't that attractive)
Blurb: 7(It looks damn aesthetic but I think you should add more details of the story)
Characters: 10 (Come on! It's Percy Jackson !)
Flow: 7 (I guess you dragged a little)
Plot: 10! (It's soo cool!)
Grammar: 8 (I suggest you to give space between paragraphs as the whole thing strains one's eyes)
Overall: 7 (A good read for all the Percy Jackson Fans and fantasy fans)
Total: 55/70
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WINNERS OF INTERNATIONAL FANFICTION:
First Place: Resident Evil; The Spirit of Vengeance by QuillWeaver
Second Place: The Legend of Zelda: Dark Tombs by Alchemy_Savatar
Third Place: Another Life by VictoriaLachac
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Congratulations to all the winners!! We hope you go higher and higher in the future....and the others who didn't get the top three, don't worry... show your best next time.😁
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