"Shall I be rendered blind to the sins I have committed in the name of love, or settle for the anguish that comes coupled with never gazing upon your face, lest I see that sorrowful glint in your eyes? Sweet, darling, Naomi. Don't ever doubt what I would do for you."

— Possession by ihaneulee

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☼ TITLE (2.5/3 points): I love the title, it fits the story perfectly since Taehyung is well... THE WAY YOU KNOW HE IS, but it's also a title that a lot of people here have already used too many times, which makes it hard for people to find your story :(

☼ COVER (5/5 points): I love black and white covers, I LIVE FOR BLACK AND WHITE COVERS! The font used in the title is beautiful and the blurred picture (as well as part of the title) makes it even better and in my opinion it fits the cover perfectly, as well as your story line. I absolutely love it.

☼ DESCRIPTION (6.5/7 points): The way you wrote your description left me speechless and very excited to read the rest of the story. You have a quote, you have a small introduction, but I'd suggest you include something about Naomi as well, since she's one of the main characters. It's not really needed though, it's already amazing as it is.

☼ FIRST IMPRESSIONS (10/10 points): That first chapter is everything. I remember I was so excited when I read it for the first time, I read it twice on the same day. I really hope everyone felt the same way as I did, because I was so amazed by each and every single aspect of it... The descriptions, the way they meet and their dialogue, the innocent (or not-so-innocent) flirt that immediately made me realize what kind of person Taehyung was, as well as what kind of person Naomi was. I was hooked. I fell in love with every trait of Taehyung's personality even though he's the way he is, I feel in love with Naomi's charm and I wished I could read the next chapter and the next one and the one after that and so one. I was definitely waiting for more and every time your name showed up on my notifications, I was always praying, "Please tell me it's a new chapter for "Possession", PLEASE GOD I NEED THIS"

☼ PLOT (24/25 points): Your plot has definitely been used before but the way to write every chapter, with so much love, affection and attention, makes your story unique and an amazing read for anyone who loves angst, drama, romance and a bit of psychological thriller. I can't help but think of Joker and Harley Quinn while reading this, even though it's not something evident, I can find some similarities between both. Your book clearly stands out from the others, from the way you write your descriptions to the way you create your characters and you connect these two together, along with mind-blowing scenarios and events. One of my favorite books ever, that's for sure.

☼ CHARACTERS (15/15 points): What's not to like about them? AHH THEY'RE SO AMAZING! There's a reason behind everything they do. Either it's lust or loneliness, love or hate, despise or admiration, there's a reason behind every reaction, every thought, every feeling. AND IF YOU'RE COMING HERE TO CRITICIZE NAOMI FOR HAVING FEELINGS AND ENJOYING SEX THEN GOOD BYE BECAUSE UGHHHH. Oh well, I'll keep going 😠 Their relationships with each other are very well described and I honestly felt like I was part of the story as well (especially when something was happening with Jungkook) and I love feeling like that towards a book! My favorite character has to be Taehyung; I know he has a different personality but there's a reason behind that as well, I love his complexity and I can't wait to see what happens to him and to his relationship with Naomi! Namjoon is just so stupid in this story UGHHHH

☼ YOUR WRITING STYLE (20/20 points): Girl. What the hell. You are one of the best writers in wattpad. The descriptions are simply perfect, I wouldn't add anything or take anything from them. Perfect. Every dialogue is well written, every scenario is described in a way that I can feel like I'm there with them. You describe every feeling in an incredible way and I don't think there is a single sentence that doesn't sound good, I'm honestly IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING, TEACH ME YOUR WAYS.

☼ GRAMMAR (15/15 points): Ah Haneul, after reading your story, every single chapter of it, three times, I couldn't find a single mistake or misplaced period or comma. There isn't much to say here to be honest since in my opinion everything's perfect and I really admire that. It shows how dedicated you are to your stories, to your works and to us.

☼ TOTAL SCORE (98/100 points): AHH BABY YOUR BOOK IS THE BEST BOOK SO FAR AND I'M SO HAPPY IT'S YOURS! You know how I feel about your book, YOU KNOW I LOVE IT WITH ALL MY HEART! And I'm so happy you asked me to review it because it's always a pleasure to read a masterpiece like this again. I love you, thank you ❤️

EVERYONE, FOLLOW AND READ HER BOOKS! You'll understand why I love this book so much and I'm sure you won't be disappointed. Give it a try, it's so freaking amazing... REALLY AHHH I LOVE YOU HANEUL

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NEXT UP: First Times by SofiaLoveWolf

See you soon, my lovelies ♡