"That's why I have so many reservations to let people in because I'm afraid of loving them and being hurt by them. But you... you make me wanna risk my heart once again."

— first times, by SofiaLoveWolf

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☼ TITLE (3/3 points): The title is totally appropriate to the story, not only because of Somin and her list, but also because of Yoongi and some other characters. In a way, Yoongi never thought he would like her so much to the point that he actually starts loving her. And more than that, all the other things that happened between the other characters, like Jimin, Taehyung and even Namjoon. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but your story was full of "firsts" for each and every character and that, to me, is just amazing, so the title obviously fits the story perfectly. I don't think I've ever seen another book with the same title as well hehe

☼ COVER (4.5/5 points): I really like the cover, the clock on the background has a connection with the story as well, Yoongi's picture has AN OBVIOUS connection with it AND CAN I JUST SAY THAT HE LOOKS SO GOOD WITH TATTOOS? Ahhh! However, I'm not tbe biggest fan of the font you used for the title, that's why I took 0,5 from the total score.

☼ DESCRIPTION (7/7 points): I LOVE IT! It's so so so good! It has a small introduction about Yoongi, about Somin, it has a quote, it doesn't say too much, it's perfect! Exactly how I (THIS IS MY OPINION OKAY NOT EVERYONE HAS TO AGREE) think it should always be!

☼ FIRST IMPRESSIONS (10/10 points): The first chapter was so interesting!! The way she approached her was so funny and I absolutely loved her and Namjoon hehe, JOONIE IS SO CUTE AHHH I LOVE HIM! I loved the beginning of the story and I screamed and giggled like a weirdo when Yoongi saved her NENDNSMMAMS HEHEHE I immediately wanted to read more and more of it, to see how would their relationship be from that moment on!

☼ PLOT (23.5/25 points): Ever since the day I found your profile and your story, I really wanted to start reading. It's amazing to find an amazing completed book here in wattpad. A book that makes me and probably other readers, feel lots of emotions at the same time. Who should I believe? Who should I feel sorry for? What's going to happen with her/him? I have to say that your plot really is a bit common. I read a lot of fanfics in which Yoongi acts and behaves like this, just like some others where the girl is or were sick. However, you were so successful in the way you thought about everything, in the way you created every character and their story, it makes me feel like I couldn't find a single hole in your story. I wasn't expecting it to end like that and honestly, you did it in a very cute and different way. Good job 💖

☼ CHARACTERS (15/15 points): The characters are all so different from one another and all of them are so freaking amazing 😭 Of course, the main characters are Somin and Yoongi, but all the other people that are a part of the plot are very important for different reasons and are perfect to justify some events that occur throughout the story. All the things that happen to them and between them are explained and the explanation makes sense. Most of them change drastically in a very positive way and Somin's story really touched me, just like Yoongi's and even Jimin's, our special baby 😭 My favorite character has to be Yoongi. He looks so scary but he's actually so sweet and once he starts to understand his feelings towards Somin, he tries to act all tough and not think about her but HE JUST WASN'T ABLE TO DO THAT SJENDMSMSMS

☼ YOUR WRITING STYLE (18.5/20 points): You're really good at describing places and scenarios, but I'd like to see a bit more of the characters' emotions. I can see you tried doing it sometimes and it was GREAT, so I'd only recommend you talk a bit more about how they feel. Nevertheless, I know you tried doing it quite often and I really appreciate that <3 I like the way you build your sentences and to be honest, I don't see any problem in that, the biggest problem on your writing is your grammar, but we'll get there!

☼ GRAMMAR (7.5/15 points): Some misplaced commas and periods but not too much. As I said, the way you write is amazing, I can see that you know lots of words that sound good and make sense, you try to use different verbs and not be too repetitive, but unfortunately you have some mistakes throughout the book, especially when it comes to the verbs. If and when you use the verb "do" in the past tense, "did", you can't use a verb in the past tense after it. I noticed this happening quite often, but I also noticed that sometimes you write it correctly. For example, "Did you liked the tattoo?" it's not correct. To be correct, it has to be "Did you like the tattoo?". "Did you had lunch?" it's not correct as well; "Did you have lunch?" is the correct way of writing it. Do you understand? :) Besides this situation, you often write, for example (this one taken directly from your book), "Explained, smiling at the boy as he rubbed the blond's hand." or "Clarified, widening her eyes...". You can't use a verb without using the name of the character or without using at least a personal pronoun, it isn't correct in english. It has to be, "She/Somin explained" and "Somin/she clarified". And I guess that's it! I couldn't find any other big mistake that I think it's important to refer.

☼ TOTAL SCORE (89/100 points): Hello sweetheart! IT'S A REALLY GOOD SCORE HEHEHE YEY I'm so happy you asked me to review your book because I loved it so much! I was dying to read it and this way I was able to read it, which is GREAT, and to try to give you a small help. AND I REALLY HOPE I DID VGJDFRCS. I hope I wasn't too harsh because I really really really loved it and it will be forever be considered one of my favorite books ever!

Make sure to give her lots of love and read her books, I TOTALLY RECOMMEND THIS ONE, GUYS YOU N E E D TO READ THIS. I want to see everyone following her and supporting her ♡

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And it was finally the end of round one! And it was such a fantastic way to end it! I loved every single one of the books and I can't wait to start reading and reviewing the ones from the second round!

See you soon, my lovelies ♡