"It was flooding with life, but once again, if you took a closer look, life was losing meaning in the ways that the people built to feel alive."

— a half shadow, by nyxjeonie

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☼ TITLE (3/3 points): I love it! Original, different, appropriate to the story, I LOVE IT YES YES YES, I'd give you even more points here if that was possible :D Your book is easy to find as well, so I have nothing to say against the title. GOOD CHOICE

☼ COVER (5/5 points): I adore the cover. I love the colors, I love the picture (but how can I not love a picture of that handsome human being), I love how the font is a bit distorted, it fits your story perfectly, in my opinion.

☼ DESCRIPTION (5.5/7 points): I like the description, it left me intrigued and very excited to read your story, so I guess it's a great start! I'm sure it attracts other people and really make them curious to know what kind sorcery is going on in there hehe. Nevertheless, I honestly think you should include a bit more about the characters and/or maybe a question that will be explained to the reader throughout the book.

☼ FIRST IMPRESSIONS (10/10 points): The first chapter was so amazingly written and so interesting that I didn't want to stop reading. It doesn't start like most stories, like when the girl/guy wakes up late for school or work, or they meet because they bumped into each other AND ONE OF HER BOOKS FELL ON THE FLOOR AND THEY BOTH TRY TO PICK IT UP AND THEIR HANDS TOUCH AND- oh well, I ALREADY DID THIS ONCE DON'T JUDGE ME I KINDA LOVE CLICHÉS, but not going to lie, it's amazing and refreshing to read different stories, with different plots, with different personalities. I like it better than clichés; it would be boring if every story was the same. And even though your story WAS A BIT CREEPY FOR ME BECAUSE I GET SCARED EASILY, I loved the beginning of it with all my heart and for me to keep reading or being so interested in a creepy story, it really needs to be something memorable and unique.

☼ PLOT (23/25 points): The plot is captivating, but awkward things happening in college are very common in other stories and/or movies, so I had to take a few points out of the total for this one. Although it is something usual to read or watch, it really seems to me that the characters are not like the ones in most books with the same kind of plot and from what I've already read, I feel like you're bringing me and the rest of the readers to a whole new world, you're like taking us with you to an unknown place and we don't have any idea of what's going to happen. And that's what makes your book one of the best I've ever had the chance to read in this genre.

☼ CHARACTERS (13.5/15 points): I don't have a lot of information about the characters, but both of them seem very courageous and that's something I admire. Their relationship with each other is freaking cute and I'm hoping to see more of their personalities and how do they get along with one another. I can't wait to see how far Taehyung goes for her, but I'm loving his attitude so far.

☼ YOUR WRITING STYLE (20/20 points): The way you write is simply gorgeous. I seriously can't wait to read more of this book or maybe other works, because you're so fantastic at what you're doing. I hope you know how good you are because damn, girl, you are one of the best writers out there in my opinion. The descriptions are on point, you describe emotions, places, reactions, everything, in such an incredible way. The way you put your words is just... extraordinary, congrats.

☼ GRAMMAR (13.5/15 points): I couldn't find any writing mistakes or misplaced commas or periods, but you should definitely use the word "said" a bit more. It's a bit distracting for me to not see it at all, I don't know if I remember well or not but I'm almost sure I couldn't find a single chapter with the word "said". It's great to have different verbs, it's important for your texts to sound better, interesting, melodic. "Said" is a very simple word, but it works so well! My advice is for you to use it more often!

☼ TOTAL SCORE (93.5/100 points): THE BOOKS KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER, THIS IS THE HIGHEST SCORE SO FAR I'M SO HAPPY! Lovely, this book is MINDBLOWING and I can't wait for another update! I would love for you to write longer chapters :( but it's totally fine if you prefer not to. I'm so ready to read more of your beautiful writing and I'm so happy that you asked me to review your book, you're so freaking talented, don't ever doubt yourself. As promised, I'll be voting on your book from my other account!

Give this lovely person a lot of LOVE just like she deserves (and all of you deserve too hehe) and READ, VOTE, COMMENT ON THIS BOOK, PLEASEEEEEEEEE

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