Advice from Lo-

Look at the stair steps if you're going up or down on them. Trust me. There might be more steps left than you think.

This sketch is called Seeking

 :)

**Not done yet**

Okay, I know her head's bigger than proportionate.

Here's why: I start with drawing the base pose first. Everything's perfectly fine at that point. But when I add hair and other head accessories, the head looks bigger and that throws off the proportions >..<

I have to work on that ;-;

Any feedback?

k I need some advice here. Comment on one: (for overall artwork)

~Too much detail (LOL IS THAT HER DRESS OR HER HAIR? I CAN'T TELL. MAYBE IT'S HER NECK)

~Detail's just right (STOP RIGHT THERE, HANDS UP)

~More detail (MORE MORE, MAKE ME PLAY I SPY)

Also:

~More chapters, less drawings per chapter (1-2)

or

~Less chapters, more drawings per chapter (3-6)