Here are the results of TS and FS

Thank you __wandering__ and __rosefreckles__ for judging this category for our contest.

1)Tashan Wala Love by YUDKBH_MUSINGS

Title: 3/5 (Title is nice but doesn't suit that well with the
storyline.)

Cover: 4/5 (Could have been little more attractive
though the pictures used were relevant to the scenes
of the story.)

Blurb: 5.5/10 (Firstly, I guess the description wasn't complete and there were errors in that too. Secondly,the description could have been more attractive and audience appealing. As we know, a reader first reads the description then the book. If description isn't appealing toh kaise koi padhega )

Grammar and spelling: 4/10 (Filled with grammatical errors)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 10/20 (Originality toh nahi hai, it is mainly the same sequence of the
show but the events taking place is different. So I give 10 for the scenes shown.)

Characterisation: 9/10 (Characters' introduction could have been little more elaborative, but never mind. The characterisation was good. )

Flow: 7/10 ( The scenes moved really fast and there were no elaboration about what happened. Detailing
was missing. According to me, the writer just wanted to end it ASAP and didn't put adequate effort on
content.)

Plot and character development: 11/20 (As I mentioned earlier, the speed of the story was quite
high. Things happened in just a blink, there was no time given to the reader to sync in what happened. The story
was quite confusing and very fast moving.)

Overall: 8.5/10

A short review:: I don't mind having the story as FS, the scene chosen couldn't have contented more chapters too. But in those 4 to 5 chapters also, one can show
many things. You can give longer updates but good and
clarified content. The short stories and the OS, TS and
FS aren't meant to be short but quite lengthy so that in less chapters you get the same detailing as that of the
longer ones.
I appreciate the effort and idea.
But I don't find any solid reason to accept the book.

So this book is Not Accepted.

2)Adhoore se Hum by RishikaShrivastava

Title: 5/5 (Perfect for the storyline)

Cover: 5/5 ( A cover should be a pictorial representation of the story. The cover has shown Samaina's picture which relates to the story as they meet in the story soon.)

Blurb: 9/10 (Though the description doesn't have any information about the story but the writer specified that
it can be two shot or three shot. She didn't create any confusion or give any false information to the reader.)

Grammar and spelling: 10/10 (There weren't any spelling error exactly. While u type sometimes u do fumble with the typos. So there were typoerror and don't spelling mistakes.)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 18.5/20 ( Though the situation where Naina lived was not so similar with
show. There were some extracts which resembles of show. But that can be neglected, the idea of in-laws making their daughter in-law comfortable and teach her to live for herself too, has been used in some other stories too.Nevertheless the writer had her own ideas applied and
made the story quite different from the other ones.)

Characterisation: 9/10 ( The way the characters were defined and their roles were well played. Though
character's traits could have been described little more with some more scenes or sequences, but that's not an
issue.)

Flow: 8.5/10 (The flow was neither too slow nor too fast. Though the scenes could have been explained
little more but jitna bhi tha, it did gave an idea of what happened and had a sync between the scenes.)

Plot and character development: 18.5/20 ( The story flowed really from one sequence to another. But I think
little more exaggeration was required. Overally i liked the concept and the efforts.)

Overall: 9.5/10

A short review:: The story is about a girl who kills her own wishes for family which most of the women in
our country do. Being a woman herself, the writer tried showing it to the readers and tried to hit those who
don't understand her sacrifices. Even though in my opinion, the story could have been little more longer and descriptive, but whatever has been done or would be done in the chapter coming up, I appreciate it.

So, this book is Accepted.

3)Apna bana lo mujhe by SamainaStoryBooth

Title: 5/5 (Perfectly fitted with the story)

Cover: 4.5/5 (Somewhat similar to the story)

Blurb: 9.5/10 (In very few words gave some information about the story, could have been little better.)

Grammar and spelling: 10/10 (None made intentionally,jaldi jaldi mein thode typos hogaye hai shayad.)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 19/20 (An unique one, haven't read such story till now. Appreciate the
idea.)

Characterisation: 8.5/10 (Though the details weren't given at the beginning of the story but during the story
reader can get a rough idea about the characters. )

Flow: 8/10 (Consistency is fine, but could have been little more exaggerated to make the presentation
better.)

Plot and character development: 19/20 (The changes of scene were quite interesting. Do appreciate the
relationship between Samaina and the way how Naina was brought out of agonies. )

Overall: 10/10 ( Great idea)

A short review:: An unique story on SAMAINA. Nicely presented, though the story could have contained more
parts or words. Great job done by writer.

This book is Accepted.

4)Love in Lockdown by Khamoshdil

Title: 5/5 ( Couldn't have a better title for the story)

Cover: 5/5 ( Simple yet appreciative )

Blurb: 9.5/10 (Gives a fair idea of the story really well.)

Grammar and spelling: 10/10 (None )

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 20/20 (The topic is surely very unique, nobody has thought of this idea I guess till now)

Characterisation: 10/10 ( We get a fair idea of each character through the story. )

Flow: 9.5/10 (Though the story content is less but the writer didn't rush it. )

Plot and character development: 19.5/20 (Slowly and beautifully, the writer made us travel through the sweet story of Samaina. )

Overall: 10/10 (The concept has impressed me so much that the flaws could be overlooked.)

A short review:: A sweet and unique story about Samaina during lockdown. I guess couldn't have been better. Though I do feel that the content could have been extended but never mind, jitna bhi tha I loved it.

So this book is Accepted.

5)The Unexpected Match by SamainaStoryBooth

Title: 4.5/5 ( Suitable title for the storyline)

Cover: 4.5/5 (Contains the characters but could have been more attractive like the storyline )

Blurb: 8.5/10 (No specification of what the story is about, just specific about Three shot or two shot. )

Grammar and spelling: 9/10 ( There were some grammatical errors .)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 19.5/20 (The plot is quite different, as till now we have seen Samaina falling for each other only till now, but here they come together after Sameer's heartbreak)

Characterisation: 8/10 (Could have been more appealing )

Flow: 8/10 (Too quickly things happened)

Plot and character development: 17/20 (There was a lack of stillness, scenes got changed soon and story moved fast. )

Overall: 8.5/10 ( it is very fast moving story but I d9 like the idea behind it.)

A short review:: Unique concept but writer made the story move very fast which could have been little slow downed. But it's OK.

So this book is Accepted.

6)Zidd(you are my obdurate) by shivu-930901

Title:4/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :18/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :20/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:

Your plot is good. The only thing is if in the starting you make it a bit more mysterious than it can be more eye catching. Overall, it is good. Keep it up. Just try to create some suspense, it will help readers feel urge to read story more. Also add description so reader get the idea of the plot. Grammar is good but still can be improved.

Accepted: Yes

7)Zindagi ke crosswords by Doraashi Cover:4/5
Blurb:9/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:9/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :19/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:

Title is nice but can be more interesting according to the plot. Starting is good, well depicted. But then when story came to its mid point I think there is an up and down. Although end is amazing. Story's flow is smooth. It's turning point is also nice but can be more interesting. You can do better than this. Grammatical errors are common. Work on it. Good luck.

Accepted: Yes

8)Lost and found by @Doraashi

Title:4/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and spelling :10/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :19/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:

Well written, nice plot. Touching words. Starting is preety good but you can make it more versatile.. Done Justice with each character that is what I found interesting. Well going. Smooth flow of story but somewhere are loopholes which you have to fix. Proofread it once and find out error. Keep going.

Accepted: Yes

9)Kindling hope by MagicalMe207

Title:5/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and spelling :8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :18/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:9/10
Plot and character development :19/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:

Your plot,pace of story, starting, turning point and ending is amazing. Just cut down long paragraphs into short one. By this reader will remain hooked up with the story. But in middle the pace is just a little fast. You have to work on your cover as sometimes it provides a great urge of reading. Good luck

Accepted: Yes

10)Love hurts and love heals by @MagicalMe207

Title:4/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:8/10
Flow:7/10
Plot and character development :18/20
Overall:9/10
A short review:

First you have to work on your cover. The description is good. Well depicted. But the plot seems a bit common. Can be more interesting. Instead of long paragraphs write shortones.. Work more on the story pace. It's flow sometimes looked ups and downs. Work on it. Good going.

Accepted: No

Not Accepted Stories

1)Tashan Wala Love by @YUDKBH_MUSINGS

2)Love hurts and love heals by @MagicalMe207

Accepted Stories

1)Adhoore se Hum by RishikaShrivastava

2)Love in Lockdown by Khamoshdil

3)Zidd by shivu-930901

4)Lost and Found by Doraashi

5)Apna bana lo mujhe by SamainaStoryBooth

6)The Unexpected Match by SamainaStoryBooth

7)Zindagi ke crossroads by Doraashi

8)Kindling hope by MagicalMe207