1)LOVE HURTS AND LOVE HEALS by MagicalMe207

Title: 4/5
Cover: 1/5
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar and spelling: 9.5/10
Originality of plot/uniqueness: 18/20
Characterisation: 10/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 19/20
Overall: 9/10

A well-written story though based on a slightly common track. The blurb is truly well-written and exact. Perfect Characterisation, to the point emotions and good use of humour.
It would be great if you could get a cover done for your story.
But a great job at the TS indeed. It made me frown, made me a bit sad, made me happy and made me laugh as well. I personally loved this one.

Accepted.

2)The Unexpected Match by SamainaStoryBooth

Title: 3.5/5 (can be more catchy)

Cover: 4/5

Blurb;7/10 (can be more descriptive)

Grammar and Spelling: 6/10

Originality of the plot or how unique it is: 15/20

Characterisation: 5/10

Flow: 7/10

Plot and character development: 14/20

Overall: 6.5/10

A short review:

Plot seems like a bit unrealistic. Feelings seems to be rushing like Sameer proposed Sunaina and as a result faced a heart break. But the  another day he proposes Naina. Feelings require time to develop for anyone and you have shown it in a very quick manner. Also you can put the dialogues and quotation in inverted commas and use commas so that readers don't get confuse between the dialogues of two people. The concept is good just look into the above points.

Not Accepted.

3)ZIDD by shivu-930901
Title: 4/5
Cover: 2.5/5
Blurb: 4/10
Grammar and spelling: 6/10
Originality of plot/uniqueness: 11/20
Characterisation: 5/10
Flow: 7/10
Plot and character development: 15/20
Overall: 5/10

Short description:
The title is apt but could have been better.No proper blurb is written.The flow of story was bit rushed.There are some grammatical errors which you can rectify by proofreading.Good luck next time.

Not Accepted.

4)Adhoore Se Hum by RishikaShrivastava

Title: 4/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar and spelling: 8/10
Originality of plot/uniqueness: 11/20 Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 5/10
Plot and character development: 15/20
Overall: 7.5/10

Short Description:A well written story but I felt that you had rushed the plot.The transition phase was not well explained or written in detail.Even the plot was a common one.I liked the way you developed the characters of the story.

Accepted.

5)Lost and Found by Doraashi
Title: 4/5
Cover: 2/5
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar and Spelling: 9/10
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot: 19/20
Characterisation: 10/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and Character Development: 19/20
Overall: 8.5/10

A Short Review: So far, one of the most beautiful storylines based on the 'paper stealing issue'. The title is really apt but is a bit common. I would recommend you to get a beautiful cover made for this piece of work as a simple image with not so good font of title will make you lose marks. The blurb was quite nice but could have been more intruding and more exciting. The writing portion was all okay with no grammatical error, but there were punctuation errors at certain places with wrong spacing as well. Each and every character was utilised properly and none of it seemed to be there just for the sake of including them. The flow of events one after the other was very fluent with a proper pace maintained throughout. All in all it was an amazing book to indulge in which will keep you bound to it till the end, and you'll still crave for more. The only places to work upon are the cover and blurb with a little attention on punctuation.

Accepted.

6)Kindling Hope by MagicalMe207

Title: 4/5 (fits with the story but could have been better)

Cover: 1/5 (you can add the cover of the story)

Blurb;7/10 (can be more descriptive)

Grammar and Spelling: 9/10

Originality of the plot or how unique it is: 17/20

Characterisation: 9/10

Flow: 9/10

Plot and character development: 18/20

Overall: 9/10

A short review:

Plot is good but a bit common though. You can add cover for the book to make it attractive. Blurb can be more descriptive. The way you describe each and every emotions and feelings is really appreciative. There is a minor grammatical mistakes which are negligible though. The ending of the story is really nice. Overall the story is very well written. All the best for further.

Accepted.

7)Apna Bana Lo Muje by SamainaStoryBooth

Title (3/5): It's apt but many authors used it.

Cover (3/5): Author name/username is not written and the cover is nice but it needs some works.

Blurb (7/10)

The blurb itself is incomplete and it needs an edit with an extra sentence to make it attractive.

Grammar and spelling (6.5/10)

I found so many errors, use the punctuation marks on the right place, for conversation/names start it with the capital word.
In between highlight the words instead of writing it fully with capital letters.

The originality of the plot and how unique it is: (18/20)

Characterization: (8/10)

Flow (7.5/10)

Flow is moderate but it breaks somewhere.

Plot and character development (16/20)

I love the plot and about character development for me, it lacks.

Overall (7/10)

Overall I love the story twists and turns but the book needs some editing, also do add characters sketch in prologue page, complete the blurb and make a new cover.

Not Accepted.

8)LOVE IN LOCKDOWN by Khamoshdil

Title: 3/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 8.5/10
Grammar and Spelling: 8.5/10
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot: 19.5/20
Characterisation: 9.5/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and Character Development: 19/20
Overall: 9/10

A Short Review: A unique concept with lots of beautiful moments, but the title could have been more interesting. All the characters were utilised properly. Dialogues were quite nice. Certain grammatical errors in the blurb but rest everything was quite nice.

Accepted.

9)ZINDAGI KE CROSSROADS by Doraashi
Title: 4/5
Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar and Spelling: 10/10
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot: 12/20
Characterisation: 10/10
Flow: 9.5/10
Plot and Character Development: 18.5/20
Overall: 6.5/10

A Short Review: Was a good concept taken with a good flow of events. But, this was completely similar to an incident from the Colours Show 'Zindagi ke Crossroads' (which might be a mere coincidence). I felt that some modifications would have made this even more beautiful. However, the thing which I found the best was the way the words were chosen to express the dilemma.

Accepted.

10)Tashan Wala Love by YUDKBH_MUSINGS

Title: 3/5 (Title is nice but doesn't suit that well with the
storyline.)

Cover: 4/5 (Could have been little more attractive
though the pictures used were relevant to the scenes
of the story.)

Blurb: 5.5/10 (Firstly, I guess the description wasn't complete and there were errors in that too. Secondly,the description could have been more attractive and audience appealing. As we know, a reader first reads the description then the book. If description isn't appealing toh kaise koi padhega )

Grammar and spelling: 4/10 (Filled with grammatical errors)

Originality of plot or how unique is it: 10/20 (Originality toh nahi hai, it is mainly the same sequence of the
show but the events taking place is different. So I give 10 for the scenes shown.)

Characterisation: 9/10 (Characters' introduction could have been little more elaborative, but never mind. The characterisation was good. )

Flow: 7/10 ( The scenes moved really fast and there were no elaboration about what happened. Detailing
was missing. According to me, the writer just wanted to end it ASAP and didn't put adequate effort on
content.)

Plot and character development: 11/20 (As I mentioned earlier, the speed of the story was quite
high. Things happened in just a blink, there was no time given to the reader to sync in what happened. The story
was quite confusing and very fast moving.)

Overall: 8.5/10

A short review:: I don't mind having the story as FS, the scene chosen couldn't have

Not Accepted

Accepted Stories

⏺Lost and Found by Doraashi

⏺Kindling Hope by MagicalMe207

⏺Love Hurts and Love Heals by MagicalMe207

⏺Adhoore Se Hum by RishikaShrivastava

⏺Love in Lockdown by Khamoshdil

⏺Zindagi Ke Crossroads by Doraashi

Not Accepted Stories

⏺Zidd by shivu-930901

⏺The Unexpected Match by SamainaStoryBooth

⏺Apna Bana Lo Muje by SamainaStoryBooth.

Congratulations to all the writers whose books have been qualified for Round 2❤.