LS(Long Stories)-First Round Results
Thank you aakritisinghh02 ,TheChocolateGirlx and Samaina_loverzz for judging this categories.
1)Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam by Doraashi
Title:3/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:8/10
Grammar and spelling :10/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :18/20
Characterisation:9/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :18/20
Overall:9/10
A short review:
Title seems a bit long and too common. Cover is nice but by adding double exposures it can be made eye catchy. Add some eye catching description too. Work on grammatical errors and I noticed in your every book you used to write long paragraphs.You can change that and break long paragraphs into short ones. Create some suspense and mystery to make readers curious, it also helps them to keep interested in story.
So this story is Not Accepted.
2)Expectedly unexpected by MagicalMe207
Title:5/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:10/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :20/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :18/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:
Everything in the book is perfect but your cover is too simple.It can be more presentable. There are some grammatical mistakes. Your starting plot is unique but seems to be a little common later. The story's catch, it's pace with time is too good. Nice, keep going.
So this story is Accepted.
3)Love in Mt.Abu by MagicalMe207
Title:4/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:9/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :20/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:
Except your title and cover,your storyline is great. Work on cover it as it seems too simple. Title coupd have been more catchy one. Description is nice. Your stoey is written beautifully but you need to work on some grammartical errors. Proofread once and also edit the story. Good job.
So this story is Accepted.
4)Aashique phirse by @Doraashi
Title:4/5
Cover:4/5
Blurb:9/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:10/10
Flow:9/10
Plot and character development :19/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:
Title is good.Cover could have been more presentable and also can add author's name in it. Add little more description so that readers could get idea of the plot. You can cut down long paragraphs into short one. You should do some editing at few places. Make it a bit more mysterious to make readers curious. Overall your work is great. Keep going.
Accepted.
5)Love Modernized by Yudkbhffslove
Title:4/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:8/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:8/10
Flow:8/10
Plot and character development :17/20
Overall:9/10
A short review:
Book is well written but needs some editing work.Proofread it once. Put space between two character's dialogue also the pace is too high. You can slow your storyline pace.
Accepted
6)While walking by shambhavisontakke
Title:3/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:8/10
Grammar and spelling :8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :17/20
Characterisation:8/10
Flow:7/10
Plot and character development :16/20
Overall:8/10
A short review:
Description could have been better. The yellow colour in the cover is too much. Do structural and developmental editing. Also do proofreading. You can be better than this. Good luck.
Not Accepted.
7)Rishtey by mansi0809
Title:3/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:7/10
Grammar and spelling :8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :17/20
Characterisation:7/10
Flow:8/10
Plot and character development :17/20
Overall:8/10
A short review:
Make title more creative as it looks a little common also your plot can be more creative. Grammar and spellings in some places need to be checked. You can add prologue in the story. You have added author's note more in the book instead of chapters. Half of the book is with it only. Cutdown on it.
Not Accepted.
8)Love to be arranged by Yudkbhffslove
Title:5/5
Cover:5/5
Blurb:9/10
Grammar and spelling :9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :20/20
Characterisation:8/10
Flow:9/10
Plot and character development :18/20
Overall:9/10
A short review:
Storyline is great. Amazing work. Somewhere I was speechless but you need to work on the grammatical errors.Put space before jumping on the next character dialogue. It looks messed up without spaces and can create hindrance for readers while reading.
Accepted.
9)Tales of immortal love by Doraashi
Title:4/5
Cover:3/5
Blurb:7/10
Grammar and spelling :10/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is :19/20
Characterisation:9/10
Flow:10/10
Plot and character development :19/20
Overall:10/10
A short review:
Cover is too simple. Work on it and add author's name on it. You can cut down long paragraphs into short ones. Do proof reading once. Keep going.
Accepted: Yess
10)MY RESPONSIBLITY BECAME LOVE by Muskanganguli22
Title:-3.5/5(Good And Simple)
Cover:-4.5/5(It was attractive)
Blurb:-7.5/10(Descriptive was upto the mark)
Grammer and Spellings:-9.5/10(In some chapters mistakes were there)
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot:-18/20(Unique Concept)
Characterisation:-10/10(Perfect)
Flow:-10/10(Perfect)
Plot and Character Development:-18/20(Beautifully Written)
Overall:8/10
A SHORT REVIEW:
This concept was unique and a bit common one since it is also a love triangle type. The best part of this story which I liked is that Sameer realizing his mistakes and he was guilty about it as he (kind of) tortured her(Naina)
Topic:-Sameer had to marry his love(sunaina)'s sister (Naina) due to the promise he gave to his love
Also i liked this part where Sameer is moving on in his life.
Accepted.
11)KARZ by Muskanganguli22
Title:-3.5/5(Short)
Cover:-5/5(Beautiful Cover)
Blurb:-8/10(Descriptive was upto the mark)
Grammer and Spelling:-10/10(Perfect)
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot:-18/20(This was an unique concept (but it also contained a little bit common topic(love triangle))
Characterisation:-10/10(Perfect)
Flow:-10/10(Perfect)
Plot and Character Development:-19/20(Beautifully Written)
Overall:8.5/10
TOTAL:92/100
A SHORT REVIEW:The story was about Sameer loving his best friend Naina but didnt confessed it to her due to her father's blackmail and ended up marrying Sunaina (since he was blackmailed by her father he started to love Sunaina but due to some conditions he was forced to marry Naina)Best part according to me is the misunderstanding between samaina gets cleared up and they both start a fresh new life.
Accepted.
12)MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTHA HUN by alisha19_
Title:-4.5/5(Perfect)
Cover:-4/5(Simple but can be more decorative)
Blurb:-9/10(Descriptive was upto the mark)
Grammer and Spelling:-10/10(Perfect)
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot:-19/20(it was a unique concept plus the flow of writing was also good)
Characterisation:-10/10(Perfect)
Flow:-10/10(Perfect)
Plot and Character Development:-19/20(Beautifully Written)
Overall:9/10
A SHORT REVIEW:This was a unique concept about a charming and handsome Sameer loving his girl Naina but she is blind due to this she tells him to love someone else . He loves her at first sight.The best part which I liked is Sameer And Preeti's nok jhok waali fight and as always Naina Interfering in their fight was just hilarious.
Accepted.
13)PYAAR HUA TUMSE by alisha19_
Title:-4/5(Can be more catchy)
Cover Page-4/5(Can be more attractive)
Blurb:-9.5/10(Descriptive was upto the mark)
Grammer and Spelling:-10/10(Perfect)
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot:-19/20(it was a unique concept with lots of suspense,mystery and thriller one)
Characterisation:-10/10(Perfect)
Flow:-10/10(Perfect)
Plot and Character Development:-19/20(Perfect and Beautifully Written)
Overall:9/10
A SHORT REVIEW:This story is about Sameer being an undercop,hides his identity and acts as a student to complete his mission And Naina being his chemistry teacher but Mystery in this story is that Naina being a suspect of Sameer's mission.
Accepted.
14)ZINDAGI GULZAR HAI by NeeSaj79
Title:-4/5(Eye-catchy title)
Cover Page:4/5(Attractive Cover)
Blurb:-9.5/10(Descriptive was upto the mark)
Grammer and Spelling:-10/10(Perfect)
Originality/Uniqueness of the Plot:-19/20(it was a unique concept with lots of mystery and suspense)
Characterisation:-10/10(Perfect)
Flow:-10/10(Perfect)
Plot and Character Development:-19/20(Perfect and Beautifully Written)
Overall:9/10
A SHORT REVIEW:This is also a unique concept where a girl Naina is an orphan who is a big fan of bollywood movies meets a lonely, arrogant and rich boy Sameer . Sameer starts to love her at first sight The best part of this story which I liked was Naina always going against Sameer's will , Naina being a positive and chirpy girl , and also their (samaina's) moments were also lovely.
Accepted.
15)Samaina - love by samaina_fan_samaina
Title: 3/5 ( it can be more interesting)
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 8/10 ( it can be bit more interesting so that reader could get interest in the story)
Grammar and spelling: 6/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 15/20 ( starting is very common but after some chapters it became interesting)
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 9.5/10
Plot and character development: 17.5/20
Overall: 7/10
A short review:
Starting of the story is common but after few chapters the story became interesting. Writer should take care of some spelling mistake and some grammatical mistakes. Overall the plot is good and the description of the story is also good.
I appreciate the writer's hard work.
Accepted.
16)Humnava mere by Khamoshdil
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 3/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 20/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
This is a unique story and I must say that proposal is very interesting.Overall the plot is very good. And one can imagine the whole story in front of their eyes.
Accepted.
17)Roomates- book1 by chocolategirlj26
Title: 3/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 3/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 7/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 15/20
Characterisation: 7/10
Flow: 8/10
Plot and character development: 15/20
Overall: 8/10
A short review:
Title is common. Writer should use bold letters for highlighting the words. Plot is common at starting but when readers read the further chapters it becomes intersting. I appreciate the work of writer.
Accepted.
18)The Groom's Choice by RishikaShrivastava
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 18.5/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
I must say that the plot is very unique and portrait of each character is done very well. Writer should add some description of the story in the blurb so that reader can understand what the story is about. Also the cover of the story also describes the story.
Accepted.
19)My Innocent PA by chocolategirlj26
Title: 3/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 3/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 7/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18/20
Characterisation: 7/10
Flow: 8/10
Plot and character development: 15/20
Overall: 7/10
Total: 73 /100
A short review:
Title is common but the story is unique. The way you bring the twist in the story is appreciative. The grammatical mistakes make a bit confusing but overall it is good.
Accepted.
20)Chahenge tumhe Zindagi Bar by shivu-930901
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 3/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 8/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and character development: 19/20
Overall: 8/10
A short review:
Story contains lots of suspence and tragedy. Portration of character is very good and also it is related to reality. Writer should add description of the story. It is a very interesting story and a unique one.
Accepted.
21)Shaadi hai arrange humari story hai strange humari by Khamoshdil
Title: 5/5
Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 4/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 19/20
Overall: 9.5/10
A short review:
Story is unique and contains twists and turns. I appreciate the writer for describing emotions in such a beautiful manner. Writer should add the description of the story. Else the story is very good.
Accepted.
22)Hum Anjaane Ek Duje Ki Jaan Bane RishikaShrivastava
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18/20
Characterisation: 9.5/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 19/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
The simplicity of the story only makes it a unique one. Every character is portrayed very well and can be related to reality. This story is not only concentrated on love but other relations too which makes it different from others.
Accepted.
23)Samaina at Hogwarts by RishikaShrivastava
Title: 3.5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 4.5/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18/20
Characterisation: 8/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 18/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
It's really a unique concept but writer should add the description of the story so that readers can get the idea about the story. Each and every scene is described so well that one can imagine it in front of their eyes.
Accepted.
24)Sameer ki dulhaniya by the_fantasy_world__
Title: 3.5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18. 5/20
Characterisation: 8.5/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and character development: 18/20
Overall: 8.5/10
A short review:
The story contains suspense and drama. The story is unique because of its past sequence. The past and present situations is described very well.
Accepted.
25)Love is a beautiful feeling by the_fantasy_world__
Title: 3.5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5. 5/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8.5/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18/20
Characterisation: 8/10
Flow: 8.5/10
Plot and character development: 18.5/20
Overall: 8.5/10
A short review:
Story not only revolves around the leads but also around the other characters. Writer has a great sense of humour which is depicted in the story. It shows the importance of friendship and love. Writer should focus on her grammatical mistakes.
Accepted.
26)Isaqzaade by the_fantasy_world__
Title: 3.5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4.5/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 8.5/10
Flow: 8.5/10
Plot and character development: 18.5/20
Overall: 8.5/10
Total: 83 /100
A short review:
The story contains lots of suspense, drama, twists and tragedy. It's fun reading the story. It is a unique story and an interesting one. Writer should focus on her grammatical and spelling mistakes.
Accepted.
27)The world of love by the_fantasy_world__
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 5/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18/20
Characterisation: 8/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and character development: 18.5/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
A story filled with suspense. Both Sameer and Naina are working as a normal person instead of belonging from a wealthy family. It tells about the importance of a relation. The story deals with the friendship and love. The plot is quite interesting and a unique one.
Accepted.
28)Silent love by the_fantasy_world__
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4/10 ( you can add the description of the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8.5/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 8.5/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and character development: 18.5/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
Writer brings a new concept and plot with humour. I must appreciate the writer for bringing the unique plot in front of us. Writer has a great sense of humour.You need to work on the blurb of the story.
Accepted.
29)Main tumse pyaar karta hu by alisha19_
Title: 4/5
Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar and spelling: 8.5/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19/20
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and character development: 18/20
Overall: 8.5/10
A short review:
This story tells real meaning of love. Really nice plot and description of each scene is good. It also tells us about the true meaning of friendship. Writer should focus on some spelling mistakes.
Accepted.
30)Mujhse dosti krogi by NeeSaj79
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 6.5/10
Grammar and spelling: 10/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19.5/20
Characterisation: 9.5/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 19.5/20
Overall: 9.5/10
A short review:
Really a unique concept. It tells us about that social media has a place in our life but true friendship is important. It also tells us about the depth of the word love which readers can feel in this story.
Accepted.
31)Zindagi Gulzar hai by NeeSaj79
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 9/10
Grammar and spelling: 10/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 19.5/20
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Plot and character development: 19.5/20
Overall: 9.5/10
Total: 96 /100
A short review:
This is a simple story with lots of twists and turns.It's simplicity makes it unique and beautiful. The characters are quite interesting and the description of each and every scene is quite realistic. We can imagine the whole story in front of our eyes. The story also gives the message of being positive in all the circumstances.
Accepted.
32)Life ho to aisi by khushibhatt15102
Title: 3.5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5.5/10 ( you can morebdescription about the story)
Grammar and spelling: 8/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18/20
Characterisation: 7/10
Flow: 8/10
Plot and character development: 17/20
Overall: 7/10
Total: 75 /100
A short review:
Writer can add some drama or twists as it feels plain while reading without any twists. Writer should also focus on the character development. Plot is quite interesting but due to loss of tragedy it feels like plain story.
Accepted.
33)Pyaar hua tumse by alisha19_
Title: 4.5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 6 /10
Grammar and spelling: 9/10
Originality of plot or how unique it is: 18.5/20
Characterisation: 9/10
Flow: 9/10
Plot and character development: 19/20
Overall: 9/10
A short review:
It's a story with suspense,lots of drama,twists and turns. With a message to all the citizens that nothing is greater than patriotism. Really a new plot. Just focus on some spelling mistakes and make the cover more attractive.
Accepted.
Not Accepted Stories
1)Waqt ne kiya kya haseen sitam by Doraashi
2)While walking by shambhavisontakke
3)Rishtey by mansi0809
Accepted Stories
1)ZINDAGI GULZAR HAI by NeeSaj79
2)MAIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTHA HUN by alisha19_
3)Tales of immortal love by Doraashi
4)Love to be arranged by Yudkbhffslove
5)Aashique phirse by Doraashi
6)Expectedly unexpected by MagicalMe207
7)PYAAR HUA TUMSE by alisha19_
8)KARZ by Muskanganguli22
9)MY RESPONSIBLITY BECAME LOVE by Muskanganguli22
10)Love Modernized by Yudkbhffslove
11)Love in Mt.Abu by MagicalMe207
12)Samaina - love by samaina_fan_samaina
13)Humnava mere by Khamoshdil
14)Roomates- book1 by chocolategirlj26
15)My Innocent PA by chocolategirlj26
16)The Groom's Choice by RishikaShrivastava
17)Chahenge tumhe Zindagi Bar by shivu-930901
18)Shaadi hai arrange humari story hai strange humari by Khamoshdil
19)Hum Anjaane Ek Duje Ki Jaan Bane RishikaShrivastava
20)Samaina at Hogwarts by RishikaShrivastava
21)Sameer ki dulhaniya by the_fantasy_world__
22)Love is a beautiful feeling by the_fantasy_world__
23)Isaqzaade by the_fantasy_world__
24)The world of love by the_fantasy_world__
25)Silent love by the_fantasy_world__
26))Main tumse pyaar karta hu by alisha19_
27)Mujhse dosti krogi by NeeSaj79
28)Zindagi Gulzar hai by NeeSaj79
29)Life ho to aisi by khushibhatt15102
30)Pyaar hua tumse by alisha19_
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