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Following are the judgements for all the nominated prologues under the genre "Best Prologue". Before we proceed further, we would like to thank issabella_8 for giving unbiased judgements on time. The participants are requested not to unfollow either the community or the judge after the end of the awards as it was a permanent follow which was asked.
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| W I N N E R |
As the number of slots were just 5, we had already informed you that there would be just one winner. And the winner for the Best Prologue is "EVERESTing My Dream" by pahul_gpk. Heartiest Congratulations to you for being a winner of the second edition of Suman- Ek Anokha Puruskaar.๐ฅณ
Here is the judgement of your Book's Prologue:
โข GRAMMAR: (9.5/10)
โข SPELLINGS: (10/10)
โข PUNCTUATION: (10/10)
โข INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: (9/10)
โข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (9/10)
โข POWER TO EXCITE: (9/10)
โข LENGTH: (7/10)
โข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (10/10)
โข OVERALL OPINION: (9/10)
โข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โข TOTAL: (92.5/100)
If we take a look over the length of the prologue, it is a little long. The grammar, spelling, and punctuation are good to go. I cannot deny the fact that I was attracted to the storyline very soon. A unique and somewhat different plot it is, which is commendable. I didn't see any kind of crack when it was for the quality of lines, sentences and dialogues. And a thing more, the thought of writing the story prologue in 3 to 4 branches, was a good idea. It gives a great outline of what does the story actually contains inside. Overall, it was interesting enough and smoothly written.
| O T H E R |
| P A R T I C I P A N T S |
Blooming Hearts by Euphoric_18
โข GRAMMAR: (8.5/10)
โข SPELLINGS: (10/10)
โข PUNCTUATION: (10/10)
โข INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: (8/10)
โข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (7/10)
โข POWER TO EXCITE: (8/10)
โข LENGTH: (7/10)
โข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (10/10)
โข OVERALL OPINION: (8/10)
โข FOLLOW: (0/10)
โข TOTAL: (76.5/100)
The length of the prologue is a bit short. Although, the length could be a bit more, whatever the writer wants to depict can be received by the readers. Two or three grammatical errors can be noted. Spellings and punctuation are on point. The writing flow is good, clear, and readable except in some instances. At one or two places, I noticed that the paragraphs could have been spaced well. And, the dialogues also could be separated by paragraphs. Even if the dialogue is of just a line only, the dialogues of two persons in the same paragraph can jumble the readers. This requires just a little bit of editing. Overall, reading the prologue, the storyline seems to be neither so common nor that unique; but whatever is written, it is remarkable.
Kaisi Yeh Baarishein by pahul_gpk
โข GRAMMAR: (10/10)
โข SPELLINGS: (10/10)
โข PUNCTUATION: (10/10)
โข INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: (7/10)
โข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (9.5/10)
โข POWER TO EXCITE: (7/10)
โข LENGTH: (8/10)
โข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (10/10)
โข OVERALL OPINION: (7.5/10)
โข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โข TOTAL: (89/100)
The length of the prologue is ok. Not to take too much time for grammar, spelling and punctuation, as they are good and exactly on point. Pointing out on the insight of the book, the storyline is quite good and intriguing. But in my point of view, if I could find just a bit more explanation for the situation shown, then it would be a rather more exciting for me. Overall, the whole prologue is written near to perfect.
Lakeerein by its_rithya
โข GRAMMAR: (8.5/10)
โข SPELLINGS: (6/10)
โข PUNCTUATION: (9/10)
โข INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: (5/10)
โข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (6/10)
โข POWER TO EXCITE: (7/10)
โข LENGTH: (4/10)
โข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (7/10)
โข OVERALL OPINION: (6/10)
โข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โข TOTAL: (68.5/100)
The prologue is written in the shayari form which is quite amazing and different. But, there are a countable number of grammar and spelling errors. Punctuation is also shaky at one point or two. If we take an example, spellings like 'or' should have been 'aur', 'gya' should have been 'gaya', 'per' should have been 'par' as so on. And counting these factors, they do affect the quality of sentences. Since the writing style is a 'shayari' type, we all know that there is an important factor called 'qaafiya' in it, which means 'rhyme'. So, there are one or two rhyming errors too, which means the 'qaafiya' is a bit unsteady. This may result in the breaking of links while reading it. Rhyming is not just limited to a line and its succeeding or preceding one, but sometimes it can be for a line and its 2 lines prior too. And, it looks like a poem which gives it a smooth read. An ideal prologue must contain a minimum of 500 to a maximum of 3000 words. And, it is clear that the prologue written for this story is way too shorter. Talking about the excitement level, some words chosen to write down the prologue are really catchy ones. Readers can do sneak into the next chapter. Overall, if the errors are noted down correctly, the prologue can be turned into a good one. And lastly again, the method of 'shayari' is undoubtedly interesting.
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