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| W I N N E R |

As the number of entries were 7, there are two winners- first position and second position.

And the winners for the Best Nanu's Role are:
(1) Kaash Mai Hota 💔 by Doraashi
(2) FATE TWISTED BY LOVE... by Diku1302

Heartiest Congratulations to you for being a winner of the third edition of Suman- Ek Anokha Puruskaar.🥳

Here are the judgements of your books:

FIRST POSITION: Kaash Mai Hota 💔 by Doraashi

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: 1/1

COVER: (7/10)
• Creativity- (1.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1.5/2)
• Clarity of text- (1/2)
The choice of pictures in the cover are very good but the pictures which show their bonding (in the right corner) are not clear. The text is also in black background which doesn't highlight it. I will suggest changing the fonts of the text in the cover and making the cover more creative.

TITLE: (8.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (1.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (1/1)
The title is good, but you should not use emojis in titles. It is perfectly relatable and correct in terms of grammar, capitalisation and length. But, the status of the book is suggested to be written in the blurb not in the title.

BLURB: (8.5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2/3)
• Insight into the book- (3/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (2/2)
The blurb is finely well written, but some grammar, spellings and punctuation errors can be seen.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
Since there was no prologue, we haven't marked it, but it is highly suggested to construct and publish a nice prologue.

GRAMMAR: (6.5/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (2.5/3)
• Spellings- (1.5/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1.5/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
Some Hindi and English words are spelled incorrectly. The punctuation is not used properly in the story. The poetry part of the book is advised to write in a poetic format only and not in paragraphs.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (10/10)
• Uniqueness- (3/3)
• Prominence of Nanu- (3/3)
• Impact- (2/2)
• Execution- (2/2)
The plot is very much unique and simply revolves around Nanu and Sameer's craving for each other. What you intended to show has very well come out.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (7.5/10)
• Character Sketch- (0/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3.5/4)
• Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (4/4)
Character sketch is advised to be added, even though you have written this OS in a poetic form. Rest everything was well furnished as far as characters were concerned because even though it was a poetry, they were well used at perfect places.

FLOW OF STORY: (9.5/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (5/5)
• Flow of sentences- (4.5/5)

OVERALL OPINION: (8.5/10)
While everything else seems nearly perfect, I would highly suggest you two things-
1) Use very less to no pictures in your book because the more the pictures, the more the flow of reading tends to get disturbed.
2) Do edit and your piece once, it is very important.

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (76/90) = 84.45%

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SECOND POSITION: FATE TWISTED BY LOVE... by Diku1302

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: (50/52)

COVER: (8/10)
• Creativity- (2/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1.5/2)
• Clarity of text- (1.5/2)
The cover is looking good but the clarity of graphics and text should be improved.

TITLE: (8/10)
• Uniqueness- (1.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (0.5/1)
The title is nothing extraordinary, even if there aren't many books with the exact same name on Wattpad. Relatability is very good. Grammar and Capitalisation are also good. But the length of the title should not be more than three words. The use of ellipsis (...) in the title should be avoided.

BLURB: (7.5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2/3)
• Insight into the book- (2.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (1.5/2)
The punctuations should be used with more clarity. The blurb just gives the Insight to the beginning of the storyline. The sentences should be in paragraphs, the lines do not give clarity and distract the flow. Rest of the blurb is nice.

PROLOGUE: (8/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2/3)
• Insight into the book- (2.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (2/2)
Punctuation and Grammar are not perfect. Many dialogues are written in a paragraph, thus, disturbing the flow.

GRAMMAR: (8.5/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (2.5/3)
• Spellings- (3/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1.5/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
The Grammar is good but there are some minor errors in it. The sentences are not perfectly punctuated. There is overuse of Ellipsis.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (7.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (1/3)
• Prominence of Nanu- (3/3)
• Impact- (1.5/2)
• Execution- (2/2)
The plot is not 'very' unique but the sub-plots make it interesting, exciting and differentiate it from other stories at the same time. Prominence of Nanu is also very good as he acts as the main Cupid in uniting Samaina.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (7/10)
• Character Sketch- (0/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3.5/4)
• Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (3.5/4)
Character Sketch is not present but the characters' introduction is very well done in the storyline along with the Utilisation.

FLOW OF STORY: (8.5/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4.5/5)
• Flow of sentences- (4/5)
The Connectivity of scenes and Flow of sentences are good. Some paragraphs are very long which could have been split so as to make the flow smoother.

OVERALL OPINION: (8/10)
Overall the story is very good and interesting. Nanu's role is perfectly justified. The sub-plots are realistic and practical which is appreciable.

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (81/100) = 81%

| O T H E R |
| P A R T I C I P A N T S |

😍Love Within Hate😡 by HimanshiGarodi7

We are so sorry, but we had to disqualify this entry because the entire book didn't have a single trace of Nanaji, or for that matter, any character named Jaiprakash Maheshwari. While filling up the forms, please be very careful of the genre you are entering in and the book you are nominating.

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Adhure Hum....Bin Tumhaare by nishi2695

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All

COVER: (7.5/10)
• Creativity- (2/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1.5/2)
• Clarity of text- (1/2)
The creativity of the cover is good and is very much relatable to the storyline. However, the graphics and fonts don't have enough clarity. 

TITLE: (7/10)
• Uniqueness- (1/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (1.5/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (0.5/1)
The title is good, but very common. Length of an ideal title is 3 words, so try to keep your title within that limit and don't use ellipsis in titles.

BLURB: (7.5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2/3)
• Insight into the book- (3/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1/2)
• Power to excite- (1.5/2)
The Blurb is nice and attractive with dialogues in it. But the sentences aren't in a very good flow. Punctuation needs work and it would have been better if more explanation would have been given along with dialogues. Also, never use emojis in a blurb or in your book. 

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
Since there was no prologue, we haven't marked it, but it is highly suggested to construct and publish a nice prologue. 

GRAMMAR: (5.5/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (2/3)
• Spellings- (1.5/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
The Grammar is correct at most places but still gets a little wrong at a few noticeable places. There are many spelling mistakes in Hindi words, because abbreviations are used instead of the whole word. Therefore it disrupts the quality of sentences. Punctuation can also be done better as ellipsis (...) are used more than required. 

PLOT & CONCEPT: (7.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (2/3)
• Prominence of Nanu- (3/3)
• Impact- (1/2)
• Execution- (1.5/2)
The plot is not very unique but is carried out differently. The arranged-cum-love marriage is shown but in a very different way which is appreciable. Prominence of Nanu is good as without him no one would have stepped further in uniting Samaina. 

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (9/10)
• Character Sketch- (2/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (4/4)
• Utilisation & screen space of the characters- (3/4)
The characters are very well described in the character sketch. Also, the characters are introduced effectively in the storyline too. Every character of the story is well described and developed. But there are a lot of characters which leads to some confusion. 

FLOW OF STORY: (8/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4/5)
• Flow of sentences- (4/5)
Again, more than required ellipsis (...) are used which disturb the Connectivity of sentences and thus affect the flow. 

OVERALL OPINION: (8/10)
Overall, I appreciate the Creativity of the story. Just need to focus on certain things mentioned above and improve them. Editing needs to be done in the area where Hindi is used as words are not properly spelled. 

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (70/90) = 77.78%

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Aashiqui phir se by Doraashi

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All 

COVER: (6/10)
• Creativity- (2/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2.5/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1/2)
• Clarity of text- (0.5/2)
The cover is creative but not clear. The colours are very vibrant therefore the main "Aashiqui pose" of Samaina is not visible clearly until you look at it closely because the colour of the picture is coinciding with the colour of the background. Nevertheless, the choice of pictures are very good. The text of the title is not even visible properly by zooming in too. Also, the name of the author is not present.

TITLE: (7.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (2/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (1.5/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (1/2)
• Length- (1/1)
Title is very attractive, a little unique and thoughtful too. Its perfect relatability can only be decided in further chapters only, till now it's looking quite good. But the capitalisation needs attention. 

BLURB: (7/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (1/3)
• Insight into the book- (2.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (2/2)
The spellings, grammar and punctuation need work. The blurb is very attractive, though you can include a lot more things to make it more interesting.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
Since there was no prologue, we haven't marked it, but it is highly suggested to construct and publish a nice prologue. 

GRAMMAR: (5/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (1.5/3)
• Spellings- (1.5/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
Many Grammatical mistakes are seen. Some spellings are also wrong. Punctuation is also missing or is used wrongly in some cases. These things do improve gradually in the last few updates but the initial chapters make the first impression on a reader.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (8.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (2.5/3)
• Prominence of Nanu- (2.5/3)
• Impact- (1.5/2)
• Execution- (2/2)
The plot is appreciatively unique, even though it's inspired from a film. Nanu's prominence is also good as he gets to know about Samaina's love even before they themselves could. 

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (10/10)
• Character Sketch- (2/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (4/4)
• Utilisation & screen space of the characters- (4/4)
Character Sketch is nice. The characters are greatly introduced between the storyline and are also developed well. 

FLOW OF STORY: (5.5/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (2/5)
• Flow of sentences- (3.5/5)
Connectivity of the scenes is not good at all. The quotations are not used properly and hence get mixed with the other sentences. Flow of the sentences is also affected through this. It all looks very basic.

OVERALL OPINION: (7/10)
Overall, I will suggest editing the chapters and using perfect grammar and punctuation. Capitalisation and spellings are also advised to be corrected. 

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (66.5/90) = 73.89%

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Arrange Marriage by alisha19_

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: (15/15)

COVER: (3/10)
• Creativity- (0/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (1.5/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1.5/2)
• Clarity of text- (0/2)
There's no creativity in the cover. Only three pictures of the same type are put in a grid. The story's name and the writer's name are also missing from the cover.

TITLE: (6/10)
• Uniqueness- (0/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (1/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (1/1)
The title is very common hence I would suggest keeping a unique title. The Grammar is not correct, it should be "The Arrange Marriage" or "Arranged Marriage". Relatability is good along with Capitalisation and Length.

BLURB: (5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (1.5/3)
• Insight into the book- (1.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1/2)
• Power to excite- (1/2)
There are some words in between the sentences which are capitalised therefore need to be correct in terms of grammar. The blurb is written very simply with simple and common words. I advise you to make it interesting and exciting in different ways.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
Since there was no prologue, we haven't marked it, but it is highly suggested to construct and publish a nice prologue.

GRAMMAR: (7/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (1.5/3)
• Spellings- (2/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1.5/2)
• Punctuation- (2/2)
Again, the words between the sentences are unnecessarily capitalized hence the grammar is impacted. The spellings and plurals are not perfect.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (7.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (1.5/3)
• Prominence of Nanu- (2.5/3)
• Impact- (2/2)
• Execution- (1.5/2)
The plot of arranged marriage is very common but this story can make its position in further updates by unique concepts so all the best for that!

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (7/10)
• Character Sketch- (2/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3/4)
• Utilisation & screen space of the characters- (2/4)
The character development can be done better. The character sketch is good but the character utilisation needs to be improved.

FLOW OF STORY: (8/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4/5)
• Flow of sentences- (4/5)
The flow is very good as the dialogues are very clear.

OVERALL OPINION: (7/10)
Overall I will suggest you to put a creative cover with highlighted title and writer's name. You can also change the title of the book into a unique one without changing the storyline. And add some unique sub-plots so as to not make a common Arranged Marriage story which I am sure not would be.

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (60.5/90) = 67.23

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THE GROOM'S CHOICE by RishikaShrivastava

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: 30/34

COVER: (8/10)
• Creativity- (1.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (2/2)
• Clarity of text- (1.5/2)
Text fonts and style need some attention and creativity can be done better. But the cover is attractive and classy.

TITLE: (9/10)
• Uniqueness- (2/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (1/1)
Though there aren't many books with the exact same name on Wattpad, there's nothing extraordinary in the title. Rest of the title is fine.

BLURB: (5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2.5/3)
• Insight into the book- (1.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (0.5/2)
• Power to excite- (0.5/2)
The blurb should be improved. There is an error in paragraph spacing. The insight is good but can be done better because the vague mention of "boy, another boy" makes it all confusing. The blurb is not that interesting to excite the reader and is giving unnecessary information in place of the required information or introduction needed. The Writing style is also very simple.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
There is no Prologue present so we didn't mark for it. But it is highly recommended to add one.

GRAMMAR: (5/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (1.5/3)
• Spellings- (1.5/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
There are a lot of capitalisation errors in sentences. The names' first letter itself are not in Capitals. Many spellings are incorrect. Sentences are not punctuated well. The chapters need to be edited!

PLOT & CONCEPT: (8.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (2/3)
• Prominence of Nanu- (3/3)
• Impact- (2/2)
• Execution- (1.5/2)
The plot and concept are nice. The sub-plots are also good. Nanu's role is very prominent in the story because he was the only person through which Sameer and Naina were connected and without him they would have never met again.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (7/10)
• Character Sketch- (0.5/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (4/4)
• Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (2.5/4)
The character sketch is nice but some errors are there in Grammar. The spellings of the description in the Character Sketch are wrong at some places. Plus there are no images of the characters. Introduction of the characters is very good and informative but there's a lack of Nanu's character sketch. The characters could have developed more smoothly in the story.

FLOW OF STORY: (7/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4/5)
• Flow of sentences- (3/5)
The Connectivity of the scenes can be done better. The sentences don't have a very smooth flow.b

OVERALL OPINION: (7/10)
Overall the story is interesting and the concept is also new. In my opinion, chapters need to be edited and Prologue is recommended to be added.

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (66.5/90) = 73.89%

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