Following are the judgements for all the nominated books of the genre "Best Mumbai Phase". Before we proceed further, we would like to thank naivedya_2004 for giving unbiased judgements on time. The participants are requested not to unfollow either the community or the judge after the end of the awards as it was a permanent follow which was asked.

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Here you go with the reviews.

| W I N N E R |

The winner for the Best Mumbai Phase genre is "Chal Adhure Ko Pura Karein" by issabella_8. Heartiest Congratulations to you on being the winner of the Storyline Category in the first edition of Suman- Ek Anokha Puruskaar.🥳
Here is the review of your Book.

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All

COVER: (9.5/10)
•Creativity- (4.5/5)
•Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
•Clarity of graphics- (2/2)

TITLE: (10/10)
•Uniqueness- (3/3)
•Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
•Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
•Capitalisation- (2/2)

BLURB: (9.5/10)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (3/3)
•Insight into the book- (3/3)
•Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
•Power to excite- (2/2)

PROLOGUE: (0/10)
•Suspense created- (0/5)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (0/3)
•Writing style or flow- (0/2)

GRAMMAR: (9/10)
•Grammatical Portion- (4/5)
•Quality of sentences- (3/3)
•Punctuation- (2/2)

PLOT & CONCEPT: (9.5/10)
•Uniqueness- (5/5)
•Impact- (2.5/3)
•Execution- (2/2)

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (9/10)
•Character sketch- (2/2)
•Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3/4)
•Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (4/4)

FLOW OF STORY: (9/10)
•Connectivity of scenes- (4.5/5)
•Flow of sentences- (4.5/5)

OVERALL OPINION: (8.5/10)

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (84/100)

The cover is very attractive but the font used for author's name in the cover is very small hence the author's name is not quite visible. A prologue is a very important element of a good book which was missing here, so try and write a catchy prologue for yout book. The grammar is quite on point, though there a few mistakes were noted. The plot is something very unique and different. All the characters are given equal justice but at times it felt as if the introduction of the characters between the storyline was rushed.

| O T H E R |
| P A R T I C I P A N T S |

1) Zindagi Ke Crossroads
     by Doraashi

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All

COVER: (8.5/10)
•Creativity- (3.5/5)
•Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
•Clarity of graphics- (2/2)

TITLE: (9/10)
•Uniqueness- (3/3)
•Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
•Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
•Capitalisation- (1/2)

BLURB: (9/10)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2/3)
•Insight into the book- (3/3)
•Writing style or flow- (2/2)
•Power to excite- (2/2)

PROLOGUE: (0/10)
•Suspense created- (0/5)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (0/3)
•Writing style or flow- (0/2)

GRAMMAR: (9/10)
•Grammatical Portion- (4.5/5)
•Quality of sentences- (3/3)
•Punctuation- (1.5/2)

PLOT & CONCEPT: (10/10)
•Uniqueness- (5/5)
•Impact- (3/3)
•Execution- (2/2)

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (8/10)
•Character sketch- (0/2)
•Introduction of characters between the storyline- (4/4)
•Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (4/4)

FLOW OF STORY: (10/10)
•Connectivity of scenes- (5/5)
•Flow of sentences- (5/5)

OVERALL OPINION: (9/10)

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (82.5/100)

The cover relates with the storyline just perfectly but it is a bit simple. The title is not capitalised as needed. Having a prologue and a character sketch is very important, even if it is a One Shot, and both these things were missing. There were punctuation errors in the blurb as well as in the book, otherwise the grammar is perfectly on point with some minor ignorable errors.

2) Sapno Ka Shaher: Samaina
     Journey
     by Fad_mugs

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All

COVER: (7/10)
•Creativity- (2.5/5)
•Relatability with storyline- (2.5/3)
•Clarity of graphics- (2/2)

TITLE: (9/10)
•Uniqueness- (2.5/3)
•Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
•Grammar or spellings- (1.5/2)
•Capitalisation- (2/2)

BLURB: (7.5/10)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (3/3)
•Insight into the book- (1.5/3)
•Writing style or flow- (2/2)
•Power to excite- (1/2)

PROLOGUE: (6.5/10)
•Suspense created- (1.5/5)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (3/3)
•Writing style or flow- (2/2)

GRAMMAR: (9.5/10)
•Grammatical Portion- (5/5)
•Quality of sentences- (2.5/3)
•Punctuation- (2/2)

PLOT & CONCEPT: (8/10)
•Uniqueness- (3.5/5)
•Impact- (3/3)
•Execution- (1.5/2)

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (6.5/10)
•Character sketch- (0/2)
•Introduction of characters between the storyline- (2.5/4)
•Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (4/4)

FLOW OF STORY: (9.5/10)
•Connectivity of scenes- (4.5/5)
•Flow of sentences- (5/5)

OVERALL OPINION: (8.5/10)

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (82/100)

The cover is pretty but it does not have the username/name of the author and also lacks creativity. The blurb does not give the insight of the book a lot and isn't exciting enough and even the prologue is pretty much the synopsis of what happened in the show. Character sketch is missing and the introduction to all the characters can be better.

3) Just Another Day
     by Aarika1312

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All

COVER: (0.5/10)
•Creativity- (0/5)
•Relatability with storyline- (0.5/3)
•Clarity of graphics- (0/2)

TITLE: (8/10)
•Uniqueness- (1.5/3)
•Relatability with storyline- (2.5/3)
•Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
•Capitalisation- (2/2)

BLURB: (8.5/10)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2.5/3)
•Insight into the book- (2/3)
•Writing style or flow- (2/2)
•Power to excite- (2/2)

PROLOGUE: (0/10)
•Suspense created- (0/5)
•Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (0/3)
•Writing style or flow- (0/2)

GRAMMAR: (9.5/10)
•Grammatical Portion- (5/5)
•Quality of sentences- (2.5/3)
•Punctuation- (2/2)

PLOT & CONCEPT: (7.5/10)
•Uniqueness- (3.5/5)
•Impact- (3/3)
•Execution- (1/2)

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (6.5/10)
•Character sketch- (0/2)
•Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3/4)
•Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (4/4)

FLOW OF STORY: (10/10)
•Connectivity of scenes- (5/5)
•Flow of sentences- (5/5)

OVERALL OPINION: (7.5/10)

FOLLOW: (0/10)

TOTAL: (58/100)

The cover is just a simple image of Samaina which is not even cut properly, making the faces of both Sameer and Naina not completely visible. The title could have been a little more creative. The blurb does not provide a proper insight in the story. There is no prologue and character sketch given which is very important, even in a One Shot. The plot is very simple, yet well constructed and the grammar is on point.

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