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Following are the judgements for all the nominated epilogues under the genre "Best Epilogue". Before we proceed further, we would like to thank naivedya_2004 for giving unbiased judgements on time. The participants are requested not to unfollow either the community or the judge after the end of the awards as it was a permanent follow which was asked.

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Here you go with the reviews.

| W I N N E R |

As the number of slots were just 5, we had already informed you that there would be just one winner. And the winner for the Best Epilogue is "Tum Dena Saath Mera" by ishqdinoorhai3. Heartiest Congratulations to you for being a winner of the second edition of Suman- Ek Anokha Puruskaar.๐Ÿฅณ

Here is the judgement of your Book's Epilogue:
โ€ข GRAMMAR: (10/10)
โ€ข SPELLINGS: (9/10)
โ€ข PUNCTUATION: (9.5/10)
โ€ข CONNECTIVITY WITH THE COMPLETE STORYLINE: (10/10)
โ€ข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (10/10)
โ€ข POWER TO EXCITE: (9/10)
โ€ข LENGTH: (7.5/10)
โ€ข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (9/10)
โ€ข OVERALL OPINION: (8.5/10)
โ€ข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โ€ข TOTAL: (92. 5/100)
The grammar of the epilogue is so on point, though there are a few typos or minor spelling errors here and there like 'Mya' should be 'Kya' and so on, but the whole epilogue is well punctuated with just a very few minor errors. Looking at the length, it's a bit short, it could have been a bit longer but the epilogue connects with the story perfectly and gives the needed conclusion. The flow of the epilogue is smooth and it holds the power to keep the readers interested till the end. There are many catchy words used which attract the readers more and the writing style keeps the readers hooked till the end. Overall the epilogue was short yet interesting.

| O T H E R |
| P A R T I C I P A N T S |

@Intekaam se Pyaar tak by riyuuu_33

โ€ข GRAMMAR: (7.5/10)
โ€ข SPELLINGS: (6/10)
โ€ข PUNCTUATION: (8.5/10)
โ€ข CONNECTIVITY WITH THE COMPLETE STORYLINE: (10/10)
โ€ข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (8/10)
โ€ข POWER TO EXCITE: (8.5/10)
โ€ข LENGTH: (6.5/10)
โ€ข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (8/10)
โ€ข OVERALL OPINION: (6/10)
โ€ข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โ€ข TOTAL: (79/100)
The epilogue connects with the storyline well, but the length could have been a little longer. There are quite a few grammatical errors, like 'All come towards her' should be 'All came towards her' and so on. The punctuations are not on point at some places. Also refrain from using ellipses (...), as it disturbs the flow of the content, especially when your epilogue is in dialogue form. There are many noticeable spelling errors like the 'Tho' should have been 'Toh', 'Frist' should be 'First' and so on. Though the epilogue is written in 'third person' pov, yet at some places the author's narrative like 'Yes you all guessed it right....' somewhat disturbs the flow. As Sameer had missed the phase of Naina's first pregnancy, showing that side of Sameer in the epilogue could keep the people hooked to the story till the end. Overall the epilogue completes the storyline well and was fun and interesting to read.

I Can't Love You by Doraashi

โ€ข GRAMMAR: (9/10)
โ€ข SPELLINGS: (8.5/10)
โ€ข PUNCTUATION: (8/10)
โ€ข CONNECTIVITY WITH THE COMPLETE STORYLINE: (10/10)
โ€ข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (10/10)
โ€ข POWER TO EXCITE: (9.5/10)
โ€ข LENGTH: (6.5/10)
โ€ข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (9/10)
โ€ข OVERALL OPINION: (7/10)
โ€ข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โ€ข TOTAL: (87.5/100)
The epilogue connects and completes the storyline perfectly. There are a bit of punctuation errors noticed and a few grammatical errors, for example 'She spoke little nervously' should have been 'She spoke a little nervously' and a few more. There are a few spelling errors as well like 'm warning you Vicky' should have been 'I'm warning you Vicky' and 'Chiye' should have been 'Chahiye' and so on. The Length is too long, the ideal length of an epilogue should be between 500 to 7000 words, while your goes over 9000, but the flow of the story is really perfect. The epilogue has the capability to keep the readers hooked till the end and it does complete justice to the storyline. Overall the epilogue was very interesting to read.

Can Broken Heart Be Mended by Diku1302

โ€ข GRAMMAR: (8.5/10)
โ€ข SPELLINGS: (10/10)
โ€ข PUNCTUATION: (9.5/10)
โ€ข CONNECTIVITY WITH THE COMPLETE STORYLINE: (10/10)
โ€ข WRITING STYLE & FLOW: (7/10)
โ€ข POWER TO EXCITE: (8/10)
โ€ข LENGTH: (6.5/10)
โ€ข QUALITY OF SENTENCES: (9/10)
โ€ข OVERALL OPINION: (8/10)
โ€ข FOLLOW: (10/10)
โ€ข TOTAL: (86.5/100)
The epilogue is well punctuated but the use of ellipses (...) at certain places disturbs the overall flow. However, the spellings are on point. There is a shift of tenses in the epilogue every now and then which affects the grammar. The use of different POVs enhance the effect of the plot but while changing the povs, the flow seemed to be mismatched which can slightly confuse the readers. Some paragraphs could have been split into two so as to avoid a bit of confusion between the dialogues and to make the flow even smoother. The epilogue is not too unique but it gives a proper conclusion to the story. The length is a bit too long as the ideal length should be of 500 to 7000 words, while your goes over 8000 words. Overall it connects well with the storyline and as every detail of the rituals were given it was fun and interesting to read.

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