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Following are the judgements for all the nominated books of the genre "Best Blurb". Before we proceed further, we would like to thank ajmera_navya for giving unbiased judgements on time. The participants are requested not to unfollow either the community or the judge after the end of the awards as it was a permanent follow which was asked.
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Here you go with the reviews.
| W I N N E R |
As the number of slots were just 5, we had already informed you that there would be just one winner.
And the winner for the Best Blurb genre is a tie between "Redo Or I Do" by Khwaish1ย and "Adjustments?" by Nandini_001. Heartiest Congratulations to both of you on being winners of the Books' Category in the first edition of Suman- Ek Anokha Puruskaar.๐ฅณ
Here are the reviews of your Blurbs.
1) Redo Or I Do
ย ย ย by Khwaish1
GRAMMAR: 10/10
SPELLINGS: 10/10
PUNCTUATION: 4/10
INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: 9/10
WRITING STYLE & FLOW: 5/10
POWER TO EXCITE: 8/10
LENGTH: 6/10
QUALITY OF SENTENCES: 9/10
OVERALL OPINION: 6/10
FOLLOW: 10/10
TOTAL: 77/100
There were no spelling and grammatical errors in the Blurb but,ย There were noticeable number of punctuation errors because you have used double questions marks alot, and commas are also missing at many places. Also, the blurb was too short. It should be longer enough to understand the details of the book. Other than that, you can change your writing style a little to make the blurb more attractive.
2) Adjustments?
ย ย ย by Nandini_001
GRAMMAR: 7.5/10
SPELLINGS: 10/10
PUNCTUATION: 6/10
INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: 8.5/10
WRITING STYLE & FLOW: 8/10
POWER TO EXCITE: 6/10
LENGTH: 8/10
QUALITY OF SENTENCES: 7/10
OVERALL OPINION: 6/10
FOLLOW: 10/10
TOTAL: 77/100
There were some grammatical mistakes that I found. Other than that, there were some punctuation errors in the blurb. About the writing style and flow, they were good. Length was neither too long nor too short, but something more could have been added with better sentences.
| O T H E R |
| P A R T I C I P A N T S |
1) An Inevitable Intruder
ย ย ย by Diku1302
GRAMMAR: 10/10
SPELLINGS: 10/10
PUNCTUATION: 5/10
INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: 7/10
WRITING STYLE & FLOW: 6/10
POWER TO EXCITE: 4/10
LENGTH: 5/10
QUALITY OF SENTENCES: 7/10
OVERALL OPINION: 8/10
FOLLOW: 10/10
TOTAL: 72/100
There were no grammatical and spelling mistakes but there were punctuation mistakes in the blurb. You can make some changes in your Writing style to make the blurb more attractive although the flow was nice.
Length was too short. It must have more information about the story. Overall I want to say just write some more in the blurb and change your writing style a little.
2) Tujhse Hi Aashique
ย ย ย by _yesha_jain_
GRAMMAR: 8/10
SPELLINGS: 10/10
PUNCTUATION: 10/10
INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: 5/10
WRITING STYLE & FLOW: 7/10
POWER TO EXCITE: 6/10
LENGTH: 8/10
QUALITY OF SENTENCES: 8/10
OVERALL OPINION: 6/10
FOLLOW: 0/10
TOTAL: 68/100
There are not many grammatical errors in the blurb, but the ones which are there are quite noticeable. Spellings and punctuation were good. Although the blurb was also exciting, the length could have been increased with more information about the book. Quality of sentences needs to be improved as well.
3) Darling! Please Stay
ย ย ย by _yesha_jain_
GRAMMAR: 5/10
SPELLINGS: 10/10
PUNCTUATION: 7/10
INSIGHT INTO THE BOOK: 10/10
WRITING STYLE & FLOW: 5/10
POWER TO EXCITE: 10/10
LENGTH: 10/10
QUALITY OF SENTENCES: 5/10
OVERALL OPINION: 6/10
FOLLOW: 0/10
TOTAL: 68/100
There are so many grammatical errors in the blurb, especially in the use of tenses. Avoid using too many ellipses. Flow of the blurb was good, however writing style and quality of sentences need to be improved. Length of the blurb is perfect. Overall the blurb was quite interesting but you need to make some changes in your writing style to make it more attractive.
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