Following are the judgements for all the nominated profiles of the genre "Best AshDeep Book". Before we proceed further, we would like to thank Superb_Giggles and bhsh22 for giving unbiased judgements on time. The participants are requested not to unfollow either the community or the judge after the end of the awards as it was a permanent follow which was asked.

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| W I N N E R |

As the number of entries were 15, there are four winners.

And the winners for the Best AshDeep Book are:
(1) Thinking of You by Fad_mugs
(2) Ummeedein by Fad_mugs
(3) TU HI AARZOO HAI MERI... ❤️ by
      Diku1302
(4) Roke Na Ruke Yeh Pyaar by
      ashdeepxforever

Heartiest Congratulations to you for being a winner of the third edition of Suman- Ek Anokha Puruskaar.🥳

Here are the judgements of your AshDeep Books:

FIRST POSITION- Thinking of You by Fad_mugs

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: 6/6

COVER: (7/10)
• Creativity- (1.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1.5/2)
• Clarity of text- (2/2)
The cover is looking very beautiful with the black and white theme, however it lacks creativity and uniqueness. The text and graphics are well clear with the sub-title and author's name. Just pictures should be more highlighted! And blending is unclear. Rest is perfect. Colour choices are very good.

TITLE: (8/10)
• Uniqueness- (1/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (1/1)
The title is not very unique but it relates with the story very well. Rest of the title is perfect.

BLURB: (8.5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (3/3)
• Insight into the book- (2/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (2/2)
The quote in the start of the blurb is very attractive and gives full insight into the mindset of character. However, the insight into the storyline could have been better. The blurb though very well describes the mindset of the protagonists as well. The blurb is very exciting which makes the reader read the story.

PROLOGUE: (9/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2.5/3)
• Insight into the book- (2.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (2/2)
• Power to excite- (2/2)
Very minor errors of grammar are seen in the count of one or two. The prologue does hold the power of attracting a reader towards the story.

GRAMMAR: (9/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (2.5/3)
• Spellings- (3/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1.5/2)
• Punctuation- (2/2)
No major grammatical mistakes are there. The spellings are also correct, along with punctuation.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (8/10)
• Uniqueness- (1.5/3)
• Prominence of Ashdeep- (3/3)
• Impact- (1.5/2)
• Execution- (2/2)
The plot was well thought of, but it wasn't very unique. If you compare it with your own Ashdeep story- Ummeedein, the basic plotline is the same. Prominence of Ashdeep is very good as the whole story was about them and their thoughts about each other. The real-life incidents with the author's twists seem like all the things that happened in reality. Well done. However, as much as the few open ends you left in the book were engaging, they somehow would have made some readers lose the hold they were having on the story.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (9/10)
• Character Sketch- (1.5/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3.5/4)
• Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (4/4)
Character development was very good. Introduction was awesome and their friends were also utilised very nicely. But, in the character sketch, only Ashdeep's introductions were given. Some more details about their friends would have made it better.

FLOW OF STORY: (9.5/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4.5/5)
• Flow of sentences- (4.5/5)
The Connectivity of scenes and flow of sentences were almost perfect.

OVERALL OPINION: (9/10)
Overall the story is very good. The description of their thoughts and their reel and real life with their friends too were very good. Keep it up!

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (87/100) = 87%

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SECOND POSITION- Ummeedein by Fad_mugs

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: All

COVER: (6.5/10)
• Creativity- (1/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2.5/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (2/2)
• Clarity of text- (1/2)
The cover is nice but can be more creative than it is. The choice of picture and the shades used according to it are very nice. Clarity of graphics is good as only one picture is used. Clarity of text can be better as the author's name is not visible properly, and the colour of the title looks dull with the bright background. However, the quote on the cover is very attractive and nice as well.

TITLE: (8/10)
• Uniqueness- (1/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (1/1)
The title of the story is very common, but nevertheless is a very good and relatable one. Rest of the things are perfect.

BLURB: (8/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (3/3)
• Insight into the book- (2/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (1.5/2)
The main events in the story are explained very effectively in the blurb. Grammar, spelling and punctuation are perfect. Overall the blurb is very good but more insight into the book would attract more readers.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
We have not marked for the Prologue since you haven't posted one. But, we highly recommend you to add a well constructed blurb so that your book gets a complete set made.

GRAMMAR: (9/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (2.5/3)
• Spellings- (3/3)
• Quality of sentences- (2/2)
• Punctuation- (1.5/2)
The Grammar is almost perfect. Rest is also fine.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (8.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (2/3)
• Prominence of Ashdeep- (3/3)
• Impact- (1.5/2)
• Execution- (2/2)
The plot is unique. Prominence of Ashdeep is good. Whole story stays around the reel and real lives of them and also their admiration and complaints towards each other. The whole story is very interesting and exciting as it connects to the real-life events of Ashdeep. Since it had a neutral (neither happy or sad) ending, it did waver a little in impact because most readers of your book are Ashdeepians and from a reader's perspective the end got a bit more open.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (6.5/10)
• Character Sketch- (0/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3.5/4)
• Utilisation & screen space of the characters- (3/4)
Character sketch is not present, though it was needed. Introduction is done well but can be done better and for some characters, the utilisation of their role and the screen space could be better.

FLOW OF STORY: (9/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4.5/5)
• Flow of sentences- (4.5/5)
The flow of scenes and connectivity of sentences is up-to-date with slight ignorable breaks here and there.

OVERALL OPINION: (9/10)
Overall the story is very nice and interesting. I suggest a re-make of the cover with some more pictures related to the storyline in it which will make it attractive. It is an enjoyable story and gives a new angle to the Ashdeepians.

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (74.5/90) = 82.78%

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THIRD POSITION- TU HI AARZOO HAI MERI... ❤️ by Diku1302

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: 1/1

COVER: (8/10)
• Creativity- (2.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2.5/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (1/2)
• Clarity of text- (2/2)

TITLE: (7/10)
• Uniqueness- (0.5/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (2/2)
• Length- (0.5/1)
The title is not unique at all. However, it relates well to the storyline. Grammar and capitalisation is perfect but the length should not be more than three words. Strictly avoid using ellipses and emojis in titles.

BLURB: (3.5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (2/3)
• Insight into the book- (0.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1/2)
• Power to excite- (0/2)
The blurb is there, but only to introduce that it's an Ashdeep OS. There is literally no description of what's going to be inside apart from the fact that it's on Ashdeep. There is no insight into the book and therefore doesn't excite readers much because there are already hundreds of Ashdeep books on Wattpad now. Do create a new and catchy blurb for this book.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
We have not marked for the Prologue since you haven't posted one. But, we highly recommend you to add a well constructed blurb so that your book gets a complete set made.

GRAMMAR: (7/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (2/3)
• Spellings- (2.5/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1.5/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
The grammatical portion is quite good. However, the sentences are not well punctuated. The ellipsis are used more than required and question marks are used in the quantity of three.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (8/10)
• Uniqueness- (1.5/3)
• Prominence of Ashdeep- (3/3)
• Impact- (2/2)
• Execution- (1.5/2)
The plot is good but not very unique. The prominence of Ashdeep is very nice along with all the characters who help them to unite. The ending was very good and interesting. It could have been made slightly more impactful, though being an OS, it covers all the parts needed.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (6.5/10)
• Character Sketch- (0/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3/4)
• Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (3.5/4)
No character sketch is present which is highly recommended. Introductions are well done of each and every character that plays a role in OS.

FLOW OF STORY: (7/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (4/5)
• Flow of sentences- (3/5)
In a few areas, the sentences in mid-dialogues got detached and continued to the next paragraph, this confuses the readers. Many dialogues are written continuously in a paragraph which disturbs the flow as the narration and dialogues are seen to be mixed.

OVERALL OPINION: (8/10)
Overall I suggest editing the punctuation and flow of the sentences and paragraphs respectively. The story was nice and interesting, ready to go.

FOLLOW: (10/10)

TOTAL: (65/90) = 72.23%

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FOURTH POSITION- Roke Na Ruke Yeh Pyaar by ashdeepxforever

NO. OF CHAPTERS READ: 5/5

COVER: (9.5/10)
• Creativity- (3/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (3/3)
• Clarity of graphics- (2/2)
• Clarity of text- (1.5/2)
No doubt, the cover is very beautiful and creative. It relates well with the story completely. Just, the size of the author's name is very small, zooming of the cover is needed to see the name of the author. Rest is perfect.

TITLE: (7.7/10)
• Uniqueness- (2/3)
• Relatability with storyline- (2/2)
• Grammar or spellings- (2/2)
• Capitalisation- (1.5/2)
• Length- (0.2/1)
The title of the story relates with the storyline very nicely. A minor capitalization error is present. The length of the title should not be more than three words.

BLURB: (7.5/10)
• Grammar, spellings and punctuation- (1.5/3)
• Insight into the book- (2.5/3)
• Writing style or flow- (1.5/2)
• Power to excite- (2/2)
A number of grammatical and sentence construction mistakes are present. Also, Ellipses are used where full stops are needed. In the very beginning, it should be NIGHTY instead of NIGHT. Nevertheless, the blurb gives complete insight to the book and also has the power to excite the readers and make them read the book, but more details would be appreciated.

PROLOGUE: (-/10)
We have not marked for the Prologue since you haven't posted one. But, we highly recommend you to add a well constructed blurb so that your book gets a complete set made.

GRAMMAR: (5.5/10)
• Grammatical Portion- (1.5/3)
• Spellings- (2/3)
• Quality of sentences- (1/2)
• Punctuation- (1/2)
There were a number of grammatical and capitalisation errors in the story. Many words are spelled incorrectly; the word "their" is spelled as "thier" in almost all places. In punctuation, some sentences need to be punctuated well and punctuation space is missing. In many places, the words are repeated. Therefore the chapters need a proper editing.

PLOT & CONCEPT: (9.5/10)
• Uniqueness- (3/3)
• Prominence of Ashdeep- (3/3)
• Impact- (2/2)
• Execution- (1.5/2)
The plot is quite unique; the idea of showing a BTS of a romantic scene is very appreciable. Prominence of Ashdeep is very good as all of the five chapters revolve around them completely. Impact and execution was good as well as all the Ashdeep sequences were covered well in the chapters.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: (7/10)
• Character Sketch- (0/2)
• Introduction of characters between the storyline- (3.5/4)
• Utilisation or screen space of the characters- (3.5/4)
No character sketch is present. The characters are very well explained. Being a short story, utilisation of all the characters is done very nicely.

FLOW OF STORY: (7/10)
• Connectivity of scenes- (3.5/5)
• Flow of sentences- (3.5/5)
The scenes are not perfectly connected as in some places the scene changes abruptly which can confuse the readers. The dialogues need to have a separate paragraph or separate line. The paragraphs are written but the space between them is missing which separates the paragraphs. Therefore the flow of sentences is either disturbing or it confuses the readers.

OVERALL OPINION: (7/10)
Overall the story is very good and interesting. It just needs editing in terms of grammar and capitalisation. The work is needed in the writing style of paragraphs as well. Rest is fine.

FOLLOW: (0/10)

TOTAL: (60.7/90) = 67.45%

| O T H E R |
| P A R T I C I P A N T S |

Since there are 11 other participants apart from the winners, we are not publishing the reviews of all of them as the chapter will get very lengthy and people would find it difficult to find their reviews. So we are just publishing the final marks of the rest of the participants and the reviews would be sent to them via pm if they ask for them.

Mile Ho Tum Humko🤗😍 : An ASHDEEP STORY ❤💞 by Miss_Dona :
(57/90) = 63.34%

Ashdeep Os - After marriage by Radhika__10
(37.5/90) = 41.67%

💞 Starting Of Love : Ashdeep Ts 💞 by Radhika__10
(36.5/90) = 40.56%

Meri P A by shivu-930901
(54/90) = 60%

Saathiya Tune Kya kiya by Doraashi
(58.5/90) = 65%

Home sweet Home❤️ by Doraashi
(56/90) = 62.23%

Holi ke din dil mil jate hai❤️ by Doraashi
(52.5/90) = 58.34%

Its destined❤️ by Doraashi
(57/90) = 63.34%

Shayad wo pyaar tha by Doraashi
(60.5/100) = 67.23%

ASHDEEP DRABBLES by Doraashi
(57.5/90) = 63.89%

Sharing the same pain by Doraashi
(58.5/90) = 65%

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We, at FamiliaDeYUDKBH congratulate all the participants and the winners of Best AshDeep Book and wish them a brighter future, both on Wattpad and in their lives.

The prizes would be distributed soon. Please check the chapter "Punctuality" to get the timeline of the awards.

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Thankyou YUDKBHians.
We await your participation in the next edition as well.❤️