Disclaimer: I tend to be judgmental and a bit picky, and also point out the slightest details. If I offended you in any way, please let me know and on advance, my sincere apologies.

Beginning with the title and book cover,

Tittle is just okey-dokey. I didn't find it very appealing or magnificent. Its not bad or the worst either! 

The cover, hmm. Being straight forward and honest, its not the best out there. The font in it matches the vibe, and it looks too cartoonish and, yeah, not the best.

I would rate this a 3/5

The blurb,

Honestly, I liked the blurb. I would call it perfect. Although it looked short, it has all the details needed, with perfect amount of information and questions, enough to make the reader curious. The best adjective for your blurb is short and crisp. Keep up the good work!

It's a 5/5!

Chapter 1 

As the famous proverb goes, "Never judge a book by its cover," I actually judged your book by its cover, we all does, don't we? I thought I should push myself through the book, and my lord! You literally surprised me! By the first chapter, I was hooked and amazed by your writing style and and the perfection. No matter how much I tried, I just couldn't find a flaw in it. The first thing came to my mind was, dang this authors words flow like a slow river, I kid you not miss.

The best part was the way you portrayed things; the feelings, the atmosphere, the surrounding, to be frank, I couldn't find the best word to describe it. Good job!

CHAPTER 2&3

In chapter two, I noticed something unusual. First, the doctor was not being 'The doctor'. Let me put it clearly. As a doctor, she is supposed to ask her questions, talk to her and examine her more politely than she had, instead of 'speaking quickly or impatiently'. If that's how you wanted to build the character, then it's fine. Another thing, a doctor, let it be any kind of the person, I really don't think these medical staff would just 'turn of the lights' and speed away closing the door where the patient is. The doctors or nurses, knows that, such a person, who is, obviously got beatings and got awful injuries all around their body, isn't in a good mental state. Knowing that, they won't just 'turn the lights off, close the door and storm of'. Hope you get where I'm going.

In the same chapter, I noticed you had introduced a new character, a nurse I suppose. I like the way you described her, but, I'm not sure about the 'messy ponytail'. She'd be looking cute; but a cute nurse, right in the morning with cute physique, in a...messy ponytail...? I mean, its all good, no problem with that. Jus' sayin'...

There was a lot of description and needed information, which is my most favourites. Again, good job! I liked your writing style, and is having an obsession over it. Excellent! 

CHAPTER 4&5

In the fourth chapter, where Riley comes to call Leyla for dinner, 

"You ready for dinner."....She asked..

Change it to,

"You ready for dinner?"...

Another good thing I noticed is you are trying to make a connection with your readers, again, Good job!

I can see now why you had mentioned 'Trigger warning' in your blurb. I'm sorry because personally, I find myself very disturbed upon reading the scenes. I skipped some part in your first chapters and some horrific scenes, and I skipped most of the scenes in chapter five. I'm extremely sorry for not being able to write an proper review. My apologies for that.

Ending me review, here is my final remarks,

Grammar- 5/5

Writing style- 5/5

Paragraph spacing 3/5

Clarity-4/5

Storyline-4/5

Plot-4/5

Chapter length-5/5

Character development-3/5

Sentence construction-5/5

Final remarks- 48/50

I'm once again extremely sorry for not properly writing your review. I wish I could, really. Anyway thank you for choosing me as your reviewer.

I enjoyed working with you, looking forward,

~Azra Abdul