A/N:

Hello lovelies. (:

I love this story, I really do, but this work isn't my best writing. That's why I'd been in the process of editing the chapters and making them better since I originally wrote this as a smol child.

But lately I've been thinking...

What if I started over?

What if I completely started from scratch again — got rid of everything as it stands (it would be in my drafts, or I could publish a new version of this book) and built something better in its place? I love Sebidwen and all but everything about this book just screams of my adolescence from when it was written.

I want to be better.

I would publish a separate version with:
- a new title (perhaps something like 'David and Goliath' or 'Violent Delights')
- a slightly improved cast (with possible name changes)
- maybe a different main character?
- or at least me giving Seb a different name because I love it and all but damn she needs a new name, something more befitting of her character
- better writing
- better, clearer plot
- better villains
- new style, setup, etc.
- and probably more, I'm just tired of making this list.

So...

What do we think?