[note]

please don't take the reviews personally, your entries have been judged by an experienced designer so that you can receive the correct encouragement and remarks for your betterment.

(i.) ShinigamiSolosQ

• visual attraction: 8.5/10
the glowing headphone and electric sparks are attractive as well as contemporary. the poster is congested in the left side with an overload of text

• typography: 6/10
the "Season End Sale" text could be cleaner and more uniform with the rest of the poster. the pricing and discount text stand out well, but the font choice for the tagline feels slightly disconnected.

• composition: 7.5/10
the headphones are placed prominently and command the design they should. the logo placement and too much information about overpriced details break the overall flow.

• clarity of Message: 9/10
the purpose of the poster (advertising a sale) is clear and compelling. the tagline reinforces the message effectively.

• creativity: 8/10
the lightening effect is dramatic and very innovative for a tech ad. the peeling corner is a nice touch but feels a little disconnected from the theme.

• total score: 39/50

(ii.) the_lonely_pi

• visual appeal: 7/10the luxury feel is there, but the background is too busy and fighting with the focal elements. the streaks of glow are creative but overpower the product's prominence a bit.

• typography: 6/10the logo and product name are strong, but the tagline is almost illegible due to poor contrast and thin font weight. there is no hierarchy in the choice of fonts that could better guide the eye of the viewer.

• composition: 6/10
the perfume bottle and the model are very aligned but the layout feels crumpled. the streaks glowing don't give the focus but instead a slight distraction.

• message clarity: 7/10the luxury message is understandable, though it is not very easy to understand because of the readability issue of the tagline.

• creativity: 8/10
the lines that glow are a very bold move and can be done only in a modern perfume advertisement. the work does depict a feeling of storytelling effort.

• total score: 34/50

reviews by _KimAes_

so the winners are!!!!

°•~ 1st place holder-
ShinigamiSolosQ

°•~ 2nd place holder-
the_lonely_pi