Book: Love's First Whisper
Author: IrenicJ_stories
Reviewer: Iamjustasapien
Chapters read: 10

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Cover:
The cover is simple yet beautiful. I love how the background is of a couple with the sunset behind them. It gives of a dreamy/romance vibe and sets the mood of the story. I, as a reader, instantly knew I was going to enter the realm of intricately woven romance. Not to mention, the font size and style is perfect. Although, in the word 'first',  the letter 'f' looked like the letter 't' due to the font style used, I have no complaints.

I do suggest you add a few fireflies or tiny dots of bright light to depict fireflies around the couple, to complete the dreamy/romance vibe and to enchance the cover. You are not obligated to do that, it's just a suggestion. Apart from that, you could maybe add a quote to the cover to attract readers. Except this, I have no complaints. Good job!

Title:
'Love's First Whisper', is a unique title yet intriguing title choice. It suits the storyline. I have no complaints, good job.

Blurb:
"Love's First Whisper" is a short comfort read for all those willing to dive into a tale that cuddles you with softness and love, without a hint of sadness. It dives you from a world with sorrow to merely heaven-like gardens.

Immerse yourself in the heartwarming story of Aashvi and Abhik as they reunite after years, unraveling the tension of their first meeting.

This beautifully crafted tale, though simple, boasts an intricately woven romance that transports readers to a world brimming with wonder, softness, and love...."

The blurb is literally perfect. I, as a reader, found it intriguing and made me want to explore your book more. It is simple yet impactful. The writing is just flawless. I could not find any grammatical errors or misspelled words. Not to mention, the words really evoke one's imagination and invites a reader to explore your book more.

I do have a suggestion, you could add a couple of dialogues from the chapters to give a insight to the readers on how adorable and love-filled story this is.

Plot:
The plot is really well-written and good paced. Although, it's a short tale between to lovers, the use of words really hooks the readers. And not to mention, the writing is just flawless. The way your describe emotions is a huge plus point in your book. Often, writers struggle to describe a emotion through words, but you never do struggle. For instance:

"A storm formed inside me- thoughts collided like crashing waves, emotions churned like the ships on sail. Inside the cage like ribs, my heart fluttered- desperate to escape and meet yours."

When one gets kissed by their partner, the emotions felt at that moment, are really described well here. As a reader, I could feel what Abhik felt here. And that is something, that made me hooked to your book.

Another huge plus point was the realistic characters of your book. Now, since, this book is about a Indian couple, others might not be able to relate. But the shyness one feels after meeting their lady after years, the teasing and the tension is just really relatable and well described.

This book really shows how true love feels like. I personally, craved for more chapters  even after completing reading the entire book, since, this felt like a lovely dream one would never wake up from. I have no complaints against your story's plot. It's perfect and well-written. Spectacular job!

Grammer and Vocabulary:
Admist such flawless writing, I could find one tiny mistake. Although, it does not ruin the reading experience nor is that visible but I recommend you to correct.

"As autumn unfolded, leaves began drifting to ground,..."

Correction: "As autumn unfolded, leaves began to drift to the ground...."

Improvements need to be done:
Your book is just perfect, it just needs no more additions. I do have a few suggestions, you can add Aashvi's pov as well, to know how she feels with her husband. Although, Abhik can read her well, I, as a reader, would love to know her pov as well.

Your book stands at a point where you need to enter more awards to expose your book to the public. It's perfect and a heart-melting tale of a match made in heaven.

Overall enjoyment:
Your book was really enjoyable. I loved reading it, and just wished there were more chapters. The writing, description of emotions, thought evoking imagery and realistic characters just make your book stand out. As a reader, I had no complaints and just craved for more chapters. My personal favorite lines where:

"Our souls became intertwined in a lovely melody created by the rhythms of our heartbeats together."

A symphony of true love and heart-felt romance is a accurate summary of your masterpiece. Never stop writing! Thank you.

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