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𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚙𝚛𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚢-𝚐𝚒𝚛𝚕 𝚖𝚊𝚗𝚝𝚛𝚊, 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝚏𝚕𝚊𝚞𝚗𝚝 𝚢𝚊,
𝚓𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚝𝚘𝚞𝚌𝚑𝚎𝚍 𝚍𝚘𝚠𝚗 𝚒𝚗 𝙻.𝙰.​

𝐌𝐀𝐍𝐓𝐑𝐀 .ᐟ ────── 𝚊𝚗 𝚊𝚌𝚌𝚘𝚞𝚗𝚝 𝚛𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚜𝚑𝚘𝚙

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𝐓𝐇𝐄𝐌𝐄

10/15 . . . theme and bg are pretty af separately but it does not go well together. it contrasts and clashes like neon green and yellow

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𝐃𝐈𝐒𝐏𝐋𝐀𝐘 𝐍𝐀𝐌𝐄

8/15 . . . im sorry but it just doesnt look that good, it looks sort of overdone if im being honest. change the font, remove the ' 彡 ' from both sides and it'll look good. the ideas good but im sorry it doesnt match

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𝐁𝐈𝐎 + 𝐋𝐎𝐂𝐀𝐓𝐈𝐎𝐍

5/15 . . . look babe dont get offended but its wayyy too loong. the fact that i cant even fit it in once screen shot says that perfectly. there are too many fonts, too many random symbols and emojis its just an overload of everything. if you'd like you could remove the welcome part and whatever those emojis are after that. and instead of entering new info in another line you could do 

𝐝𝐚𝐧𝐜𝘪𝘯𝘨 ┊┊ 𝐛𝐢 ✴ 𝚜𝚎𝚡𝚞𝚊𝚕

also there is no need to mention your exact birth date if you've mentioned your age and vicea versa. yes you should play around with fonts but not that much... also since you've linked your insta why exactly would you put in on yout prof again? and instead of copying six or seven verses of miroh onto your profile you could just

𝄞⨾𓍢ִ໋  𝕄𝕀ℝ𝕆ℍ 

▶︎•၊၊||၊|။||||။၊|။• 3 : 38

or you could 

🎧ྀི  ⋆ . ˚ ⋆ 𝕄𝕀ℝ𝕆ℍ ᶻ 𝗓 𐰁

── 𝚛𝚞𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚛𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚖𝚊𝚣𝚎 𝚕𝚒𝚔𝚎 𝚊 𝘣𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘵

i should make a bio shop

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𝐁𝐎𝐎𝐊𝐒

5/20 . . . bhai, you only tell me what i should rate here. bc babe this is js random images and there are no titles on them what exactly am i supposed to rater here? points only for the titles

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𝐑𝐄𝐀𝐃𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐋𝐈𝐒𝐓𝐒

10/15 . . . you should keep one font or one aesthetic for all the lists bc it looks like you did them- actually the whole acc in a hurry. you went to a site, wrote, copied it, over. thats what it feels like. babe, want me to redesign it for you?

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𝐎𝐕𝐄𝐑𝐀𝐋𝐋 𝐀𝐄𝐒𝐓𝐇𝐄𝐓𝐈𝐂

15/20 . . . first impression is good 

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𝙿𝚛𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚢 𝚐𝚒𝚛𝚕𝚜 𝚍𝚘𝚗'𝚝 𝚍𝚘 𝚍𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚊 '𝚕𝚎𝚜𝚜 𝚠𝚎 𝚠𝚊𝚗𝚗𝚊,
𝚒𝚝'𝚕𝚕 𝚋𝚎 𝚍𝚎𝚙𝚎𝚗𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚘𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚍𝚊𝚢

𝐓𝐎𝐓𝐀𝐋 !

53/100 !!

YOUR ACC IS HALF STAR APPROVED!! ILY <3