nobita or dekisugi?
This story is based on pre wedding shivi. In this story gaura has a 13 year old daughter her name is tara means of the name of lord Shiva's wife. Tara and raavi shares a very sweet bond with each other Because raavi addressed her self as dhara's little sister so by default she is Tara's maasi . Tara is now teenager , and we all know that teenage is the age where every girl and boy starts developing mentally, physically . They starts getting attracting to their opposite personalites. Inshot this is the age of "barbaadi " bole toh "Oo maaa Gooo turu lob...!".
Present Time. (In "kaandya" nivas:)
Girl - RM please.... please nah... please tell me what's happening with me?
Girl 2 - Darling... listen! don't worry... it's a common!
Girl - Aap ghar aao RM that's it...yeh baat mujhe aapse akele mein karni hai...
Girl 2 - achha theek hai! Aaa rahi hoon..
She ends the Call .
Girl 2 - bol toh diya raavi tune ki tu aa rahi hai...but tu jayegi kaise? Woh Bhootnath tujhe ghar ke andar jaane hi nahi dega...but best maasi hone ka farz bhi toh tujhe nibhaana hai nah? Jaana toh padega...warna tu best maasi ke sath - sath best chachi kaise banegi?
In front of pandya nivas.
Raavi - jaau? Yaa Nah jaau? Ek kaam karti hoon chali hi Jaati hoon....Joh hoga dekha jaayega!
Saying this she entered the House. As soon as she enters inside the house, she collides with the man who has a muscular body. And she knew the feel of the man, she knew who he could be ....
Raavi - shiva....
Shiva - haan shiva...aur tuu fir mere ghar ke andar ? Tujhe Hindi aur gujrati samjh nahi aati kya?
Raavi - aati hai...
Shiva - haan toh kitne baar kehna padega ki iss ghar se aur iss ghar ke logon se durr reh???
Raavi - tu bas chupp kar...mujhse nahi raha jaata iss ghar se aur iss ghar ke logon se durr...issliye aaa jaati hoon.
Shiva - muhh utha ke ( irritatingly)
Raavi - kya kahan tune??? Zor se bol ....
Shiva - haan aa jaati hai muhh utha ke...aur main tujhse darta nahi hoon mami ki behen ki beti! Chal one two ka four ho jaldi...
Raavi - main nahi jaungi...mujhe meri Tara ne bulaya hai...yahan aur usse mile bina toh main kahin nahi jaaungi...
Shiva - ehh mami ki behen ki beti..khud ke dimag mein bhoosa bhara hua hai aur ab tuu meri bhatiji
ke bhi dimag mein bhoosa bharna chahti hai? Chal nikal yahan se...
Raavi - nahi jaaungi...
Shiva - bola nah tujhe nikal...warna tere iss khubsurat chehre ko bhutte ki tarah bana dunga...aur teri iss dress mein barf gole ka paani daal dunga..jaise bachpann mein daal diya tha....
Raavi - bas wahin toh aata hai tujhe....(angrily)
Shiva - haan bas wahin aata hai...ab nikal yahan se...kyuki main toh Nobita ki tarah stupid hoon nah?
Raavi - Dhara di!!!
Hearing this, Dhara comes running out from the kitchen.
Dhara - kya hua?? Raavi tu chillayi???
Raavi - dhara di apne iss devar ko samjha do..mujhse panga nah le warna iske upar do baalti paani daal dungi...waise bhi issey paani se phobia hai nah? Tabhi toh nahata nahi hai.
Shiva - ehh mami ki behen ki beti...main nahi bhi nahau nah? Toh bhi mere badan se itra ki khusboo aati hai samjhi ... badi aayi...
Dhara - tumdono kabhi nahi sudharoge nah?...mere aur gaumbi ki shaadi ko 14 saal hogye hai...tab se lekar aaj tak bas lad hi rahe ho donon...bade ho jaao shaadi ki umar ho gayi hai dono ki...(smiling)
Shiva - chipkali...bhabhi main dukan Jaaa raha hoon.
Dhara - Jaaa aur dopher ke khaane tak aaa jaana...
Shiva - Jii bhabhi....
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In Tara's Room.
It's lunch time shiva reached home and Directly goes to his room but stopped at the mid way because he listen something ...
Tara - wahin toh RM....mujhe ek ladka pasand aata toh samjh sakti nah? Mujhe toh adhir bhi pasand hai aur uska Bestfriend bhi...
And againn shiva is right! This Mami ki behen ki beti is comes to destroy his niece childhood .
Raavi - offfo...tara hota hai sab normal hai...mere sath bhi toh hua tha aisa....
Shiva clenches his fist in anger After hearing this, Shiva was about to enter the room, when again he heard something that caught his attention...
Tara looked at her shockingly.
Tara - aapke sath aisa hua tha? Kaun hai woh?
Raavi - chhod nah tara...ab puraani baaton mein rakha hi kya hai....tuu bas meri baat yaad rakh! Tuu abhi abhi teen age mein enter kar rahi hai...yeh sab normal hai kisi ka pasand aana...kisi ko dekh kar strong attraction hona...uske aas paas rehne ka mann karna...uski nazar mein rehne ke liye sajna sawarna...uska naam sunn kar mann hi mann muskura na....sharmana...sab!!! Sab normal hai. Jab main 9th class mein thi tab maine bhi yeh experience kiya hai...aur sirf main hi kya? Duniya ki saari ladki 13 - 14 ki age mein enter karte hi iss tarah ki cheezon ko feel karti hai...
Tara - waise...RM main aapse kuch puchh sakti hoon?
Raavi - offcourse!! Ismein darne ki yaa permission maangne ki kya zaroorat?
Tara - ahmm...woh...RM aapko dev chachu aur shiva chachu mein se dev chachu hi acche kyu lagte hai? I mean...shiva chachu bhi toh itne acche hai...sabse kitna pyaar karte hai...sabke liye hamesha khade rehte hai...toh aapko woh kyu pasand nahi aate?
As soon as shiva listened this from tara his curiosity increases Because he really wants to know that what will be raavi's answer?
Shiva (in mind) - yeh mami ki behen ki beti chupp kyu khadi hai? Kuch bol kyu nahi rahi? ...par tujhe kyu itni curiosity ho rahi hai??? Tera dil kyu metro train ki tarah chal raha hai....
Raavi - uss Bhootnath ko toh koi ladki pasand nah karein...sada hua sa hai bilkul....ladkiyon se baat kaise karni hai yeh toh ussey pata hi nahi hai....gadheda! Har waqt kaatne ko daudta hai...(angrily)
Shiva - eh mami ki behen ki beti!!! Tu yahan mere ghar mein ghoos kar meri hi bhatiji ke saamne meri bezzti kar rahi hai???
Tara - chachu aap chhup kar humari baatein sun rahe the?
Shiva - rukk!!! Aur tu...bola tha nah tujhe nikal mere ghar se? Abhi tak gayi kyu nahi?
Raavi - Jaaa rahi hoon mujhe bhi aisi jagah par nahi rehna...jahan tuu ho!!!
Saying this she immediately leaves from there.
Shiva too leave the Room in anger.
Tara - RM dinn bhar dev dev karti hai aur dev chachu bhi RM ke sath bahut sweet hai...but fir bhi mujhe RM aur dev chachu perfect nahi lagte....mujhe toh shiva chachu aur RM zyada achhe lagte hai...bhale hi kitni ladaiyaan kyu nah karein dono...but yeh log aise kyu hai? Pata karna padega Tara!!!
In Shiva's Room. ( At Night )
Shiva - samjhti kya hai khud ko? Mujhe tareeka nahi pata ladkiyon se baat karne ka?
Tara - chachu? Main andar aa sakti hoon?
Shiva - aajaa.....
Tara - chachu kya kar rahe ho aap?
Shiva - padhai kar raha hoon...kal exam hai nah mera ....
Tara - accha!!! Waise chachu..aapko RM kaisi lagti hai?
Shiva - nikal....nikal mere kamre se...agar tu yahan apni uss RM ke baarein mein baat karne aayi hai nah? Toh pehle hi patli gali se nikal le...
Tara - chachu!!! Achha theek hai...sorry nahi puchhungi....but mujhe aapse yeh puchhna hai ki aap college mein ho ..toh sabki tarah aapki bhi koi girlfriend toh hogi hi...
Shiva - dhara bhabhi ko batau? Ki tuu aajkal kya kya puchhne lagi hai?
Tara - chachu please....dekho aapne hi mujhe kahan tha nah ki aap mere chachu hone ke sath sath ek bestfriend bhi ho? Toh fir btao nah...
Shiva - Nahi hai....
Tara - what aapki koi girlfriend nahi hai???? Chachu you are so handsome...aapki girlfriend kaise nahi hai??? Ohhh my God!!! RM sahi bolti hai aap ekdum boring ho...issliye aapki koi girlfriend nahi hai....
Shiva - eh uska naam mat le haan ...warna tujhse baat nahi karunga...
Tara - achha theek hai... second last sorry....but chachu kyu? Aapki girlfriend kyu nahi hai???
Shiva - woh..woh kabhi inn sab cheezon mein dhyan hi nahi gaya issliye....
Tara - chachu you know nah? Jab bhi aap jhooth bolte ho apni ankhein neeche jhuka dete ho?
Shiva - hmmm...
Tara - iska matlab aap jhooth bol rahe ho?
Shiva - hmmmm ...
Tara - iska matlab yeh hai ki meri chachi aur aapki girlfriend hai....
Shiva - Nahi...woh kisi aur se pyaar karti hai....
Tara - aree yaar...KYA HAI YEH???
Shiva - joh bhi hai yahin hai... chal ab Jaaa sone... Good Night!
Tara - Good night! But I know aap RM ko like karte ho....haina?
Shiva - eh aisa kuch nahi hai...
Tara - toh fir aap unke baarein mein kyu soch rahe the? Kahin aap RM ko hi toh pyaar nahi karte nah?
Shiva - eh chal nah... puri duniya mein itni acchi ladkiyaan hai...mujhe teri RM kyu pasand aayegi? Aur pyaar? Woh toh durr ki baat hai...
Tara - theek hai fir...but agar aap meri setting adhir se kara dete ho toh main aapki setting RM se kara dungi... promise!!!
Shiva - tuu abhi chhoti hai tara...tujhe pyaar ke baarein mein nahi pata...tujhe setting attraction yeh sab pyaar lagta hai....par ismein teri bhi koi galti nahi hai...iss umar mein yeh sab normal hai!
Tara - aree yaar SAME DIALOGUE!!! Subha RM bhi yahin bol kar gayi aur abhi aap bhi....kuch hua tha kya aapko donon ko iss age mein???
Shiva - Good Night! Mujhe abhi jag kar padhai karni hai...Jaa jakar soja....
Tara - Fine Jaa rahi hoon...but aapko aur RM ko hi meri setting adhir se karani hogi....
Saying this she leaves from there.
Shiva - gadhedi!!!
In shah nivas:-
"Tara - waise aapko dev chachu aur shiva chachu mein dev chachu hi acche kyu lagte hai?".
Raavi - kaise btau tujhe tara....
Flashback:-
Lil shiva - eh chipkali jaldi kar...warna teri woh masi maa aa jayegi aur fir tuu humare sath patang nahi udaa payegi....
Lil raavi - shiva main gir jaaungi sambhal mujhe....
Lil shiva - mere rehte huye tuu kaise giregi chipkali??? Aankh bandh kar aur kud Jaaa neeche...main sambhal lunga...
Lil raavi - haan shiva..tujhpar toh bharosa hai par khud par nahi hai...agar galat jagah par kud gayi toh?
Lil shiva - aree tuu kud nah...main hoon!!!
Raavi closed her eyes and jumps because she trusts Shiva that he will save her And just like always he againn saved her.
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In Shiva's Room.
Shiva - bachpan mein sab kitna sahi tha nah chipkali...mami se narazgi toh thi...par humare beech ki dosti bhi bahut gehri thi...tuu mujhpar aankh bandh kar ke bharosa karti thi ...lekin uss dinn tune apni dost se joh kahan....
Flashback:-
Shiva and Raavi are playing "ghar ghar" together when her friend daksha comes.
Lil Raavi - shiva aap aaj office se jaldi ghar aaa jaana...aaj humdono sath mein dinner par jaayenge....
Lil shiva - gadhedi! Main bada hokar office thodi jaaunga...main toh pandya store sambhalunga...
Lil raavi - toh tuu bada hokar mujhse thodi shaadi karega shiva....yeh toh jhooth muth ka game hai...
Lil shiva (in mind) - main toh tujhse hi shaadi karunga....fir humdono sath sath rahenge humesha....
Daksha - hello! Hy shiva...kya khel Rahe ho tumlog?
Lil shiva - humlog ghar ghar khel rahe hai...
Daksha - main bhi khelungi....
Shiva - theek hai tuu meri behen ban Jaaa fir...
Daksha (in mind) - nahi! Main toh shiva ki wife banungi....behen toh raavi ko banna chahiye...
Daksha - Nahi! Shiva mujhe banna hai teri wife...raavi ko toh kaam bhi karne ke liye nahi aaa raha hai....
Lil raavi - kyu? Tum kyu banogi? Main banungi shiva ki wife....haina shiva?
Lil shiva - aree yaar tumdono lado mein chala office...mere aate tak decide karlena...
Saying this he leaves from there...
Daksha (in mind) - raavi meri bahut acchi dost hai...but mujhe banna hai iss game mein shiva ki wife...idea! ek kaam karti hoon.
Daksha - raavi..."tujhe Nobita pasand hai Ya dekisugi?".
Raavi - matlab?
Daksha - aree budhhu! Matlab tuu sabse zyada kisko pasand karti hai?
Just then Shiva comes back because Dhara sends him to take raavi with him, dhara has made home made pani puri for Raavi, so he wants to feed her.
Raavi - waise toh mujhe shinchan pasand hai...but Doremon mein nobita pasand hai, but dekisugi bhi achha hai....
Daksha - aur tujhe shiva aur dev mein kaun kya lagta? Kaun ho sakta hai ...?
Raavi - ahmmm...Nobita stupid hai but...shiva stupid nahi hai...but fir bhi main nobita shiva ko kahungi....aur dev dekisugi jaisa hai...smart aur ladkiyon se acche se baat bhi karta hai.
Daksha - aur shiva aur dev mein smart kaun hai?
Raavi - dono Hai!!!
Daksha - aree budhhu!!! Dekh tu aur dev ekdum mast dikhte ho sath mein...aur shizuka aur dekisugi bhi toh sath mein acche dikhte hai? Tuu nahi chahti tuu jiske sath rahe woh smart ho?
Raavi - hmmm...baat toh sahi hai, but...
Daksha - aree but wutt kya??? Tuu ek kaam kar dev ke sath ..
Just then dev comes..
Dev - hy kya kar rahe ho tumdono?
Raavi - dev humlog ghar ghar khel rahe hai....
Daksha - haan dev ..
Dev - Wow...mujhe bhi khelna hai...kya main bhi khel sakta hoon raavi?
Raavi - haan dev tum aur daksha partner ban jaao...
Daksha - aree nahi raavi...dekho mujhe toh abhi iss game ka rule pata hi nahi hai... tum aur shiva dono ko pata hai..ek kaam karo nah tum aur dev partner ban jaao...aur main aur shiva partner ban jaate hai....
Raavi (in mind) - kya karoon? Shiva ko bura lagega nah...ek kaam karti hoon pehle shiva aa jaaye fir usse puchh lungi....
Shiva is waiting for Raavi's answer, but Raavi remains silent, seeing this Shiva gets very angry and thinks that Raavi thinks him stupid.
Shiva - kya kar rahe ho tumdono...chalo bhabhi ne pani puri banayi hai....
Raavi - shiva yeh dono bhi humlog ke sath ghar ghar khelna chahte hai...toh kya main aur dev-"""
Shiva - haan main aur daksha sath partner banenge....(angrily)
Raavi also gets angry that how can Shiva decided to play with Daksha? When they are already partners in this Game.
Raavi - haan shiva sahi kahan tune...waise bhi dev aur main sath mein bahut achhe lagenge...haina dev?
Dev - chalo chalo Game baad mein khelenge...pehle dhara bhabhi ke haath ke bane huye pani puri kha kar aate hai....
Raavi angrily walks towards the house holding Dev's hand, and seeing Raavi holding Dev's hand, Shiva also holds Daksha's hand. Even at home, both are fighting with each other, after eating paani puri, they plays the "ghar ghar" game, As they decided , Daksha - Shiva, Dev - Raavi.
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Next Day!
Shiva - bhaiyaaa ek kala khatta....aur...-""
Raavi - hi dev!!! Hy krish!!! Aur hy shiva!!!
Shiva (in mind) - pehle dev ko hi kahan...haan main toh nobita ki tarah stupid hoon nah...
Dev - hi raavi...
Raavi - dev meri dress kaisi lagi tumhein?
Dev - bahut acchi hai raaavi!!! Tum ekdum cute lag rahi ho ....haina shiva?
Shiva - haan ekdum iss gole ke jaise....
Shiva throws barf gola on Raavi, due to which Raavi's clothes get ruined.
Raavi - shiva!!! Tune meri puri dress kharab kardi....
Dev - sorry raavi shiva ki taraf se....chalo main tumhein ghar lekar chalta hoon..dhara bhabhi tumhari dress saaf kardengi....
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As the time passed, both of them now came to the teenage stage... A small misunderstanding increased the distance between Shiva and Raavi.
Daksha is increasing the distance between Raavi and Shiva just to stay close to Shiva, she always used to tell Raavi about Dev so that Dev will replace Shiva from her heart, Raavi's love for Shiva did not end, but being in a teenage state, Raavi started to feel that she loves Dev, not Shiva.
Something similar started happening with Shiva as well, but in teenager stage, boys and girls start getting attracted to each other, Shiva also starts getting attracted to Raavi. As being a teenager it's common .Shiva liked Raavi since childhood,but one childhood misunderstanding separated both of them. On the other hand, Raavi started liking Dev's calm nature, but only liked him, she did not love him because of all that things which Daksha put in her mind.
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