The Shadows Of Nickview by ScaryandTrue07
Title & Blurb

Title is unique, and definitely attention grabbing. I love how the blurb is extremely fitting to it. The story line and the plot from what I could tell is amazing. However, the build of the blurb could be improved.

First, I would put the cover credits and that it's not a fanfiction all the way at the bottom. Then, I would change the very opening of it. I didn't find it as intriguing as I would've wanted it to be. You might want to start it off similar to this:

Who knew Nickview had monsters lurking in the shadows? Certainly not Allison. And, if she did know she would have stayed in that dammed club longer.

When a new, club opens up in her hometown, Nickview, she has no desire to go. However, she is dragged anyway by her sister...

And then you can continue with what you have. I think the first sentence I made as an opener would fit well because your title in itself has "Shadows." However, I would recommend you to not just tell the blurb but show it to the readers and leave questions especially because the plot is so suspenseful. With an edit of the blurb, you can easily pull the readers in and make them fall in love with your book.

Another advice is that you could end the blurb with a question such as, "The real question is will all of them stay alive until the sun rises? Will they swallow their fears or will the fears swallow them?"

That's just an idea, of course you could end with something else but the questions are always a good option to engage a reader and convince them to keep on going.

If you would like, you can PM me and I can help you fully edit the blurb and fix some things up if these advices aren't enough or if there are any questions! This a good base that you could work off on.

However, I'm really intrigued by the book especially because I love the genre and I would want to know more so your book is in my reading list. I'm excited to see where it goes. ❤️❤️