Let The Words Flow By ScaryandTrue07
Whole package - (Chapters 2, 5, 7, 8)

The cover is something I haven't seen before on Wattpad and I love it. The vibrant colors pull readers in which will go a long way. The title of the book is fitting to the blurb and fits the feel of poetry. The blurb is original and I wouldn't have thought of all the different fonts for each word but I like it! Extremely creative, good job with that. However, I would like the Nature to not be capitalized and the And more as well. Also, since you gave me specific chapters and they are poems, I'll be reviewing each one separately.

Human Nature was beautifully written. The title matched the poem and truly created this sense of compassion between a reader and the nature itself. I wouldn't change anything about it other than it had small grammatical errors. For example, "And take the animals home" should be "And take the animals' home"

The second poem you told me to review, is the name Risk? (I can't read it because of the font you chose I'm sorry about that, I would recommend you changing it to something that could be read easier) But anyways, it's so perfect. I don't have anything to say because it truly couldn't get better. It left me speechless. I'm unsure how you came up with that but it's amazing. Thank you for letting me review your poems because otherwise I probably wouldn't have found it.

The Same Story Different Web poem wasn't something I could predict. To be honest, I was wary of how you will incorporate a web into your poem and leave the readers mindblown, but you managed to do it and more. I can see that you have a talent for writing poems and this one is specifically good because I love how you created this amazing metaphor with the web and a fly to describe the feeling of being stuck. Amazing job, however the only thing I would change is possibly not having every word start a new line in some cases.

For example,

I'm done,

With your web of lies.

Done with,

The Repetitive Story.

Instead, how I would write it is,

I'm done with your web of lies,

Done with the repetitive story,

Done being a fly.

It's looks nicer this way but also when readers read it sounds better.

The last poem was As The Storm Grows and like the other ones before it was a masterpiece. I don't have any mistakes to point out other than some of the grammatical errors because other than that, there aren't any. You definitely have a talent for this and I encourage to write more and more. It'll go a long way and I mean this 100% I can't help but put this in my reading list as well. Poetry isn't my forte and I never found it so impactful but I loved yours. Can't wait for more❤️