Random Paragraphs for my upcoming book [Vi]
Book: Random Paragraphs for my upcoming book
Author: S160902
Reviewer: WarmCupofSparkles12
Chapters read:
Pacing: 10/10
It was a nice pace for me. I don't have much to say, to be honest. Other than that it was a steady and good pace for one to read.
Characters: 8/10
Sure this may just be an excerpt of a book you plan to write in the future, but I'm curious about the character's past. But in all seriousness, I feel bad for the woman and her miscarriage.
World building: 9/10
I imagined a slow beginning, but no; we jumped right into it. Nice! I felt like I was there with the character. I also enjoyed the fantasy-like environment.
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