RaimaJeon

- Reviewer May -

𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 8/10

The red colour is attractive but the cover doesn't look that attractive overall when I scan it closely.

It's contrast is too high for my liking and saturation too low. It gives a light greyish colour to the cover but I would suggest going with silver.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 4.5/5

It's unique and attractive but it should be written in normal fonts. The font you used is not visible to every device out there.

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 8.5/10

It's a bit long for me but it's nearly perfect. Maybe use a different border because the one you

used isn't aesthetic. Also, add a "Copyrights Reserved by me, RaimaJeon/Author RJ" or

whichever nickname/name you prefer, it will look nice.

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 20/25

It's a developing plot, so I can't rate the twists yet. However, the plot is nice though the concept is cliché and common, so you need to be pretty unique with your scenes, dialogues and twists.

It's okay to use common scenes but don't fill the book with them. The pace is quite slow and the chapters are really long and they are interesting but I would suggest not keeping long chapters, it might make readers blank out or get bored;

keep it 1000 to 2000 words including the first chapter. Sometimes it might exceed, that's okay but don't exceed it by too much.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 9/10

Your vocabulary is simple but the way you use your simple words and portray the feelings are good. It's a nice change to see in the characters. Usually, people make Jin the "eomma" of the group when the female lead meets him but here, you gave him a dangerous vibe, so, thank you for that. If you can break that stereotype then I can say your characters are unique.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 13.5/15

It's beautiful and attractive. Keeps the story alive and fun but you can make better sentence structures I believe. Try not to repeat the forms. Your tenses are good.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 18/20

Your grammar is really good, I barely found any mistakes at all but you need to enrich your vocabulary. It's only fair for this great book, it deserves better vocabulary.

Read New York seller's books because they have good English most of the times with rich vocabulary and use "Word Coach(?)" by Google. I personally use it and they send a new word everyday and yeah, your vocabulary will increase like that.

Reviewer's thoughts:: 4.5/5

I personally loved the book but the vocabulary, the book needs advanced vocabulary.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 86/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 :: You have a lot of strengths like your writing style, title, cover, etc. but your only weakness would be a good plot twist. I don't know what you have in store for this story, so, I'll stick around to find out.

SeokJins_Yeonin_rh

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