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𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 06/10

The cover didn't intrigue me that much, however it was still better than many. The font that you used wasn't exactly what is usually required for it. You could've used a different font. Along with that, your face claims aren't visible enough. You made them too transparent. Along with that, the cover doesn't seem that neat as it should be. Try to make it as neat and presentable as possible.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 02/5

The title isn't that intriguing either. You see, its too common. Something that you can find in every other book of the same genre. You can add some vocabulary to the cover, perhaps, use some more relatable words which resonate the story directly.

I would suggest you to change the title into something more exciting and intriguing.

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 07/10

Your blurb was really interesting. Except a couple of grammatical and punctuation errors, it really increased my curiosity.

You just have to edit the grammatical mistakes and your blurb is all good to go.

I would also suggest for some spaces between the sentences to make them look more presentable.

 𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 21/25

There were a number of plot twists in the story which made it even more intriguing. Honestly, I really enjoyed reading it as it was comparatively unique than other stories with the same title as "Masked".

Your plot is great and unique and deserves more attention.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 07/10

The characters were quite understandable. Along with that, the emotions were elaborated too. However I believe that a bit more description is required for the emotions. There were times when I couldn't quite feel the emotions, hence, I believe that you should add a tad bit more explanation to the emotions.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 09/15

Your writing style is acceptable, however I still believe that you can do better. You can add some banners for your chapters to look more aesthetic and presentable. You should also equal the length of all the paragraphs.

I would suggest for you to make your book a bit more presentable so that more readers get attracted to it. And that can only be possible if you add more banners and some appropriate font styles and indications.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 14/20

Your vocabulary is really great. It is exactly the decent amount of vocabulary a book needs. However, you need some work on your grammar. There are many places where you switched in between the tenses and made some mistakes in punctuation which really need a severe editing.

You should go through the book again and edit the grammatical errors in it because they really effect the book on a large scale.

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 4/5

The plot of your book is really underrated. However, you should try to focus on the book presentation too. Nowadays, everyone judges a book by its cover. And on Wattpad, a book is judged by its cover, along with its blurb, title, style, and whole presentation. After that, the reader focuses on the grammar and then the plot. You should edit your book - basically revamp it and increase its presentation.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 70/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 ::

Strengths :: Strong vocabulary, Creativity, Interesting plot and plot twists.

Weaknesses :: Poor presentation i.e. blurb, cover, title, writing style. Grammar and punctuation

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