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- Reviewer Nyx -

Cover - 4/10
The cover was good, but it was messed up. The color scheme being blue, a lot of things in the cover were invisible. If I scrutinize it thoroughly, I'll see other elements of the book, but just a passing glance will only show me Tae, the wolf, and the book title. The titles you have written, either decrease its size, or shift it to somewhere where you can give it space to expand, rather than divide the word into two halves. Add a few attractive elements to the cover, and make it eye-catching, not just a dark blob of the color blue.

Title - 3/5
I liked the title. You'll never receive a perfect score from me, because there is always room for improvement. Using "Cryptic Growl" as a title related it to the genre of your book, yet again, it was not unique, or enthralling in any way. If I read the words 'Cryptic Growl', I'll just think that this is another werewolf book and most probably ignore it. There should be an element which captivates the reader to read the book the moment they read the title.

Blurb - 6/10
The bad grammar in your blurb ruined whatever you were trying to convey. For beginners, please capitalize your I's.

For two,
"Do you know why y/n?"
This line is confusing. I have no idea whether you are actually trying to reach out to us, or are sending the book y/n a cryptic message.

"Do you know the red moon's grace on us?"
Another confusing line. Do we know about the red moon's grace on us? Or do we know about the fact that the red moon is showering its grace on us?
Reduce the usage of ellipsis in your sentences. They are all very unnecessary.

Plot and Twists - 22/25
I loved the twists you were able to incorporate even in such a small portion of the book.
● Jimin's appearance
● Y/N death plan
● Taehyung's appearance
● Bodyguard's death
● Jimin's disappearance
All of these came as a shock to me. I enjoyed imagining what might happen next in the book.

Characters and Emotions - 4/10
This needs a lot of improvement. I need you to work upon their emotions, so that the readers can feel them better. Y/N's fear, Tae's carelessness and dom attitude, Jimin's tenderness and sorrow, Y/N's parents' malice, they all need to be enhanced. It feels as if you took a pillow and muffled everything down to a minimal quantity. Work upon them well enough that they reflect out of the book.

Writing Style - 10/15
Well, I just read 8 chapters. I need you to update the book a lot for me to decide how good your writing skills are. Nevertheless, I liked what I read. You took a mysterious side in this book. Every other sentence was revealing something new to me.

Grammar and Vocabulary - 15/20
Now this is where you messed up big time. Every small portion of the book had a grammatical error. Even the blurb, and the prologue had flaws.
When people stutter, they do not repeat letters, they repeat words.
Instead of saying W-what, they'll say what twice.
Please capitalize your I's.
There is a difference between down and beneath.
● Down - a direction, up and down.
● Beneath - in a lower position.
● Underneath - used when being obscured by another thing.
● Below - in a lower position (with materialistic things, like a building or paper).
Omo is an informal word. I'd recommend not using it in a book.
Again, those ellipses need to go. They are very unnecessary and irksome.

Reviewer's Thoughts - 3/5
This book was immensely captivating for me. I loved the way you had framed everything, and I hope you will continue writing this book. I just request you to work on the minor flaws I had faced above, and then your book will be very impressive.

Total - 67/100

Strengths and Weaknesses -
Strengths→
● Ability to make scenes appear enthralling and mysterious.
● Imagination.
● Ability to make the reader relate to the character.
Weaknesses→
● Inability to make the reader feel the emotions of the character.
● Grammar.
● Addition of excessive elements.

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