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- Reviewer Blossom -

𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 2/10
The title placement is off center, the font color of the username causes it to almost camouflage with the picture and the fonts used aren't attractive, the author should fix or replace them. Overall, the cover doesn't look appealing and appears plain. I suggest the author maybe add a subtitle and replace the current pic with something attention-grabbing. I also suggest the author add some elements of the story to the cover.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 3/5
Though the title has relevance to the plot, it is very common. If I search up the word on Wattpad, a ton of
books will show up which causes the story to get lost in them. The author should opt for a title that makes
their books stand out.

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 2/10
There are many grammatical errors in the blurb which make it less appealing. The execution of the wording can be better. The blurb reveals a lot of important stuff of the story which the author should save for the
inside of the book. I suggest the author edit the blurb, get rid of the grammatical mistakes and only give
hints about the plot or stuff that would be intriguing without giving away too much information.

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 10/25
Since Jungkook and the girl's part of the story has such a huge impact on the story, I think the author should write a chapter showing what exactly happened between them and their story and what Jungkook went
through after she committed suicide instead of creating such a huge time skip right away. The storyline
didn't end up being as cliché as I thought but its execution still made it appear cliché. What I mean by that is that the twists the author has used for the story such as the teacher making one of the leads sit with the other, them being neighbors, and the truth and the dare part are clichés. On the mention of the truth and dare, I think Jungkook accepting the dare was unrealistic. Jungkook could have easily refused to do it, especially considering the personality given to his character.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 4/10
There is some development in Jungkook towards Jisoo and his actions match up with his character well almost all the time. As for Jisoo, her character is a little confusing. Through her talks with Jimin, it looks like she has at least some bad intentions (the plan) towards Jungkook but when she is with him she seems to forget it all. I suggest the author take it slow from her side or show more conflict in her emotion if she does hold a grudge against him. I suggest the author describe the emotions and feelings more because it became a little hard to understand what the character was feeling at times and hence it became hard to understand and sympathize with their feelings behind their actions. The author can do that by being more descriptive about the character's thoughts.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 4/15
The author's writing style and sentence structure are simple which can get bland after a while. I suggest the author to use metaphors and etcetera to make their writing appealing. Some sentences could have been structured better. The author should also focus more on the descriptions of the characters' emotions and
surroundings, it will help to make their writing attractive and easier for the reader to imagine the scenes and feel the emotions. Point of view changes ruin the flow of the story and seem unprofessional when done too much. Usage of pictures should also be avoided.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 4/20
The author has confused tenses a lot and has misused words (seat for sit, etc). There were many missing
punctuations and other grammatical mistakes as well. The author's vocabulary is minimalistic so, I suggest the author use a few complicated terms/words once in a while to keep things interesting.

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 1.5/5
The most intriguing part of the story was whatever Jimin and Jisoo are planning. There are a lot of things to improve in the book and I think if the author works on them, the book will be much better.

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 30.5/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 ::
I would say that the strength or the hook in the story is the 'plan' between Jimin and Jisoo. As for the
weakness, the author should edit the book and get rid of the grammatical errors and change a few things that
dragged down the score.

-Yoonshooky

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