AlienboyfriendTae

-Reviewer Katha-

BOOK COVER[9/10]:
The cover is minimalistic and attractive. The font used is also pretty and matches the vibe/feeling of your story.

TITLE[9/10]:
This is just my theory, but I thought that the title had an inner meaning to it. By reading the blurb, we get to know that the female lead is a mess. On the other hand, the male lead is an alluring man. So, you merged the two adjectives of both lead characters and made the title a beautiful phrase.

I repeat again, this is just my theory and something that stands out to me.

BLURB[13.5/15]: 

The blurb was written beautifully and summarized well. The dialogue you provided at the beginning gives the readers an idea about the personality of the individual character. I feel that is a great achievement for a writer. The summary afterwards adds more interest to the already building curiosity to know even more about the story and the characters.

However, in the last paragraph - "when the fire and storm cross..." - you started the sentence with lowercase letters, which is grammatically incorrect. I would've not pointed it out, had you written the whole story in lowercase letters, but since the rest of the paragraphs are all following the correct method of capitalization, this one paragraph caught me off-guard. I assume it's a typo error and unintentional, but you should correct the mistake once you get the time.

But overall, the blurb was really good.

STORYLINE[20/20]:
I'm not saying I'm a fan, but that's exactly what I'm saying.

Back to professionalism, your writing is immaculate. You have carried out the story in the perfect pace, providing information at every interval and at a regular amount, i.e., not too much nor too less. The suspense build-up in the story is also really well-managed. There hasn't been a single chapter or portion of the story where I cringed or needed to stop reading (the only times I paused was when I needed to go to the bathroom). I also like how you add the perspectives of both leads to avoid any confusion.

Another plus about your writing is that you have made hilarious scenes with a sober usage of words and sentences. There was originality in the story and not cringey, delusional aspects.

I'm highly impressed.

DIALOGUE DELIVERY[14/15]:

What I loved the most were the dialogues. Every dialogue in the story perfectly represented the speakers' personality ,and that's an important aspect that should be kept in mind.

None of the dialogues were useless or unnecessary, but in fact, were rather important and needed.

CHARACTERS[9/10]: 

Your characters were beautifully portrayed. To be very honest, I love strong female characters and Kwon Leona was the perfect depiction of a "boss bitch". Okay, wavering from professionalism.

Your description of the characters was absolutely amazing. We get a clear picture of them, their expressions, and activities really well.

Another thing that is important for authors is to give equal attention to the side-roles/characters. They may be "side-roles/characters" but they are important too and influence the main-leads. You have successfully fulfilled that criteria by depicting the side characters perfectly the way they should be.

GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY[18/20]:

Your grammar, too, is great, but I noticed a few errors, ones which are most likely to be typo or unintentional errors. For instance, I spotted a double-inverted comma at the end of a sentence, where it shouldn't be. Regardless, those mistakes can be fixed if you go through your story again minutely and spot them out.

About your vocabulary, I literally have no words. The usage of words and detailed description of every little part of the story, is just... mwah!

TOTAL[92.5/100]

WEAKNESS AND STRENGTH: To be very frank, you don't have a weakness. Just a little bit of proof-reading to the whole story and reducing even the smallest of typo-errors would make it a masterpiece.

Your strength (I suppose you could say), is your creativity and vocabulary. The trope of the story is neither very common nor too rare, but you have added to it a flavor of your own writing style, and that's highly appreciated and impressive. The detailing and wording in every paragraph was so immaculate and perfect, I loved it. The suspense, too, was a great tool to keep your readers hooked. To quote a bit from your own story, it was like sex, you can't get enough of it.

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