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- Reviewer Aera -

𝙱𝚘𝚘𝚔 𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛: 6/10

The cover is a Jungkook fanart from the blood sweat & tears music video and I don't exactly think it's that eye-catching personally, and it doesn't serve the genre of the book, something defining a ghost, or a shadow would make a good cover, having something with a darker theme sounds beneficial.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎: 7/10

I will admit, the title isn't ordinary, something you would not see in everyday stories, Dancing with his ghost is eye-catching but changing it up to something more creative, or something that defines the character would look good on this story.

𝙳𝚎𝚜𝚌𝚛𝚒𝚙𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗: 9/15

I usually don't say this, but descriptions like this usually don't suit my taste if I say this as a reader. They don't exactly look appealing to the eye. I recommend, giving a short summary of the story and characters and adding a few quotable dialogues from the book.

𝚂𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢𝚕𝚒𝚗𝚎: 16/20

The whole story is based on, a Korean show called Angel's Last Mission: Love if my memory serves me right. The original story is as incredible as it is, but you adding your own twist was a treat to me. In future books as well, let your creativity flow, because this was amazing.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜: 9/10

I love the characters because they portray all kinds of people. I think that the female protagonist can be a little bratty at times, but in the end, we all come to recognize her agony. Also, what exactly is up with Giselle? I'm ready and bound to have an outburst over how nasty she is. FYI: +1 for making the female protagonist a savage in Chapter 4.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢: 13/20

At first glance, because of your writing style, the page looks fancy. However, when you read through it, there are a ton of mistakes and it seriously ruined my whole flow of the book. Both grammar and vocabulary mistakes have occurred time and time again, and I would like you to proofread the whole book, given the fact there seems to be mistakes in every sentence.

𝕋𝕠𝕥𝕒𝕝: 60/100

𝑆𝑡𝑟𝑒𝑛𝑔𝑡ℎ𝑠 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑊𝑒𝑎𝑘𝑛𝑒𝑠𝑠𝑒𝑠:
The book's biggest strengths are its characters and storyline. The characters are real-like and the storyline is incredibly beautiful and touching. The book's biggest weaknesses, though, are the grammar mistakes and the description. Overall, you have a lot to fix with them both. I believe in you though, you can improve yourself in the coming days.

BelEspirit-

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