mochi_archer

-Reviewer Semi-

Book cover :: 10/10

Title :: 10/10

Description :: 15/15

Story line :: 19/20

Characters :: 10/10

Dialogue delivery :: 15/15

Grammar & Vocab :: 20/20

Total :: 99/100

Strengths and weaknesses:: Well, it's a very incredible story with a great plotline in my opinion. Starting with the review, the cover is really pretty. There is nothing for me to say about it other than how pretty it is. It suits the story well, suits the theme, so it's a decent cover.

The title is also great. It's a really attractive title and I say it would do just the job of inviting readers to your book, just like the cover.

About the description, it's a good description but the part of the conversation you have used in the description is kinda blurry. I also kind of felt it would be better if you could use a more specific and also one that can make some curious would be better for the description.

The storyline is really good. Loved reading it. It also had some uniqueness and uniqueness is the main thing that is needed in a storyline. The story had a good amount of twists.

Characters are also good. I don't think you have many drawbacks for me to point out, your book is amazing and I'm pretty sure other readers will love your work too. The characters are intriguing actually.

Dialogue and delivery are also good. It went very well. Dialogue and delivery is a very important factor in a book and you have done it greatly.

About grammar and vocabulary it also looks good. There were no mistakes other than very few typos. It's also rare. The grammar you have used is really good as well as your vocabulary. Most people lose their interest in reading a book when there are a lot of grammar mistakes and you don't have them so it's good to work. Well, that's all I gotta say, again your work is amazing, it's going well. I wish you luck in continuing the book and completing it. <3

Yang_semi

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