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Cover: 4/10

The cover isn't exactly relevant to the title. It's too spacey and requires something that can catch the eyes of a reader. First of all, I'll suggest you select a more suitable picture, increase the font size for the title and place it in the middle or down in the middle (according to the picture chosen). Then you can consider changing the font like, "love" to some cursive font. About the author's name... due to the font and size, it's not properly visible. It's as if we know something is there but we can't figure it out. For this, I'll suggest you change the font and place it in the bottom corner or just below the title (whichever way suits more) and maybe increase the font size by a few.

Title: 3/5

The title is relevant to the blurb and story. It basically describes the theme of the book. Although it isn't revealing much, it gives out an obvious ending to a reader's mind. One must read the book to find out of course, but many might think of it as a cliché and leave. I'll suggest that you come up with a title that's more catchy and relevant or, edit your blurb accordingly.

Blurb: 5/10

The blurb is fine but it could be changed. It describes everything until the 7th chapter and I didn't find it intriguing. I'll suggest making it a bit shorter and excluding sensitive information which may reveal the story like, "but that wasn't the only Soulmate Bonding case she had. Along the way, she too got her own case. And now, she can experience soulmate bonding first hand." You can either frame it in a way that's more intriguing or remove it. When readers reach that part, it becomes obvious... and since we know that the person would be Min Yoongi by the title and cover, it's easier to guess.

Plot and Twists: 17/25

As of now, there was only one twist I encountered. I didn't expect it to go like that so it was quite interesting and kept me curious about finding out what will happen past these 7 chapters. The plot is well-thought and I like how there were no plot holes till where I read. But, most of the parts were kind of obvious/guessable so I'll suggest you change the tone of a few chapters.

Characters and Emotions: 4.5/10

I won't say the emotions were precise but on point. The description was acceptable but I wasn't able to imagine the characters... They or at least the main characters should have a description on how they look like. Same with the emotions... When you describe them, make sure you're writing meticulously. I am not sure on how the characters develop but till the 7th chapter, there were no developments since it was early, except for the time when the protagonist got restless due to the bonding part. So, I guess there would be some character development after this.

Writing Style: 9/15

The descriptions were on point and like I said, I was hooked onto the book with curiosity to find out what will happen in the end but, I'll still suggest you to change the tone of writing and write more meticulously. There were a few grammar mistakes and syntax issues which broke the flow but, otherwise... It was alright.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 13/20

The vocabulary was good enough with neither too complicated, nor too simple words used.

There were times that the ellipsis were wrong. It consists of only 3 periods (.).

Then, the usage of comma. In the line, "Namjoon seemed to be doing a bit better, after being reassured by her." There was so need of it. Too many or incorrect placement of comma or any punctuation mark can break the flow of reading.

In chapter 6, I felt like the syntax was rather complicated. An example: 'I found my phone rather easily, once I turned on the light.' This could have simply be written as, 'Once I turned on the lights, I found my phone rather easily.'

While stating a precise time, remember to use colon (:). As noticed, you used period and didn't mention if it was morning/noon/evening/night.

Reviewer's thoughts: 3/5

I liked what I read but, I would suggest you read books that have advanced grammar and try writing incidents from your daily life as meticulously as possible. It will help you get a sharper mind and a broader knowledge of both aspects.

Strength & Weakness: I won't say anything in particular but, just know that...practice makes perfect.

Total - 54/100

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