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-Reviewer May-

𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 2/10

The picture used was okay but it didn't give the romantic vibes anticipated. Using vectors wouldn't be a reasonable idea, in my viewpoint. Since it was a Jeon Jungkook Fanfiction, I would recommend going for a Jungkook who appears sentimental with the colors of rain, like grey, blue or anything that gives those "rain" vibes. Not only was the picture too blurred, but the fonts used weren't satisfactory either. You need to do an aggregate revamp of the book.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 3.5/5

It was really cliche but it was attractive. It sounded like the title of a Korean drama for romance enthusiasts but I would still propose going for a more distinctive one.

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 3/10

It wasn't presented that adequately. I was really confused as to what was being said. So, I am incapable of telling you to do anything but to alter the way you wrote the entire blurb and only keep an intriguing dialogue or a small, unique scene from the book and then a short synopsis of what the book is mainly about. Be cautious, don't disclose the plot twists.

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 18/25

The plot didn't appeal to me much from what I had read in the blurb but I hope you augmented your own whiff of uniqueness to it and made sure to give good twists. I can only think of normal scenes and it's okay to incorporate the ordinary ones if you make sure to use rare scenes alongside.

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 5/10

Your bad grammar and indigent vocabulary don't allow emotions to be portrayed well and the characters seemed monotonous and typical, with nothing special about them. I would suggest adding humour to the female or one of the male leads and making one of them "so done with life" and the other very "down to earth". Such a mixture will be nice for a cliche plot.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 9/15

It's simple, not that attractive for me. I would suggest doing an upgrade on your diction and the way you exemplify your chapters and sentences as well.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 6/20

Your sentence configurations are wrong. Your grammar is kind of discernible but the tenses are all mixed up. Get your book edited by someone if you think you don't have good grammar.

The vocabulary is not rich either. I would suggest reading books or paperbacks of renowned authors.

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 1.5/5

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 48/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 :: I didn't see any strengths from your side which is actually a bad thing, but I believe you have the potential and just you have to work on your grammar a lot, and writing style too. Due to them, I wasn't able to relish the book that much and also, the look of the book needs to change. I strongly suggest a book revamp. These are your weaknesses. 

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