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✧ JUDGE : Hells07dealer ✧

Sacrificed bride Intelligentwwh

BOOK COVER : : 4/5
The cover is beautiful but it can be more creative and enhanced.

BOOK TITLE : 5/5
The title is perfect and sits very well with the story. There is no doubt about that.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 10/10
The description is short, attractive, interesting, and straight to the point. One look at the description will make the reader start reading the story.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 9/10
The book did have a great first impression, I fell in love with the first chapter itself and now I am very interested to read it further.

PLOT : 17/20
The plot is interesting. It has a unique plotline, and I loved it. It's my first time reading a story between a dragon king and a human. I have read a lot of Ships Stories, but this sure has a unique character and plot.

CHARACTERS : 8/10
The characters are amazing, especially Taehyung's. I love his 'loving' and 'can do anything' nature for Jungkook. Would love it more if you can make Jungkook a little bit stronger.

STYLE OF WRITING : 8/10
The style of writing is good, not very professional but very easily understandable and interesting, and good for a fanfiction.

PACE : 10/10
The pace is going good according to the story. Not too slow or fast, a perfect pace.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 8/10
There are very few grammatical mistakes and the vocabulary is simple but good. You have taken amazing names for new characters.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 10/10
Overall, the story is amazing. The plot, the characters, just everything, and I am eagerly waiting for its next part. Would love to read it till the end.

TOTAL : 89/100

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All's fair. In love and war by LouTaekoo

BOOK COVER : 3/5
The cover is not that attractive, and it's making it look very plain. The pictures are good. However, the editing could be more better and defined and it's better if you use some filters

BOOK TITLE : 3/5
The title is good but the way it's written is wrong, because it sounds better as in it is- "Everything is fair in love and war. Though, the title truly relates to the story.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 9/10
The description is good, interesting, and attractive, it piques the reader's interest and leads them to read further. It gave away the perfect amount of spoiler without actually spoiling anything.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 7/10
The book did not have a great first impression in regards to a cover and title, but your story is really good. It's not a very common plot. It was a perfect mixture of emotions.

PLOT : 16/20
The plot of the story is good, simple and well written, not anything out of the box but yeah, the topic is unique. Have not read a lot of military based fanfictions. Though the plot could be more interesting. You have tried your best, though. I felt really sad for Jimin's death and Namjoon. His pain truly resembles the families whose members are in the army or military, and they have lost them. I literally cried while reading it.

CHARACTERS : 9/10
The characters are very well described and written. I loved Tae's sassiness and flirting skills. But maybe if Jungkook has bashed Jaehyung or let Tae bash him a little, it would have been more appreciative. But overall, I loved the characters. My favorite ones are Namjoon and Jimin. Because even though they were not the main lead, anyone can feel just an immense and a different connection while reading about them.

STYLE OF WRITING : 8/10
The style of writing is good, but it's quite messy sometimes.

PACE : 10/10
The pace is going well and after every chapter, you would want to read more.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 8/10
There are a few grammatical mistakes that can be corrected through proofreading, and I loved that you used real medical concepts and described them very well.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 8/10
Overall, the story is amazing and I really liked it.

TOTAL : 81/100

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Whether I remain there or not, you remain somewhere in me by bapoon

BOOK COVER : 1/5
The cover is not attractive, and even the spelling of 'whether' is wrong as it's written as 'wether'. It would be better if you could change your book cover as it has a spelling mistake.

BOOK TITLE : 2/5
The title is good but it's too long, the line is beautiful and you can use it in description, and you can go for a shorter title but it's your choice, sorry if it sounds wrong.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 9/10
The description is good, interesting, and attractive, making it feel like a reader should read it further. Though I didn't understand the second paragraph of it. The first paragraph surely represents Namjoon whereas in the second paragraph about Yoongi as you have not given any idea about Yoongi previously. But then, since the story's ongoing, I am sure you must have planned something.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 7/10
The book did not have a great first impression in regards to a cover and title, but your writing style is truly appreciative, and it completely changed my mind. It's true that never judge a book by its cover because I really liked the book.

PLOT : 17/20
The plot of the story is so interesting that I can conclude from the story till now and I really appreciate how you have written a beautiful thought at the end of every chapter and it is making me more interested in reading the next chapters. The plot is laid out perfectly and has a lot of twists, and I really want to know about Jaehwan, his brother, and who is the boss.

CHARACTERS : 9/10
The characters are very well described and written and lovely, though sometimes Taehyung's behavior is too possessive, but that's okay considering he cares for Namjoon and likes him. I really loved the development between Yoongi and Namjoon. This is my first time reading and NamGi ff, and it truly impressed me.

STYLE OF WRITING : 6/10
The style of writing is good, but it gets a little confusing whenever you change the pov from bts to Jaehwan and his brother, are they part of the story or not like there is something but maybe you should write Author's pov or Third person's pov before you start writing about them. Also, when you write a dialogue, leave a line after and before that so the reader can clearly see its dialogue as you are writing in center align. Sometimes, it seems like a paragraph only.

PACE : 10/10
The pace is going well according to the story. Not too slow or fast, a perfect pace.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 8/10
There are a few grammatical mistakes that can be corrected through proofreading.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 10/10
Overall, the story is amazing. The plot, the characters just everything, and I am really waiting for the next chapter. I hope you update it fast, and yeah, make sure to change the cover. It's really important.

TOTAL : 79/100

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Escapism by Kalapika1

BOOK COVER : 3/5
The cover is beautiful but maybe too flashy according to the story.

BOOK TITLE : 5/5
The title is perfect and surely matches with the story. A simple and short yet deep title.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 10/10
The description is short, attractive, and interesting. It gives the perfect spoiler of the storyline without messing up.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 6/10
I can't say much about the first impression, you have good ideas but they are not laid out properly.

PLOT : 14/20)
The plot is interesting from what I have read till now, and the story is going on well. It has a lot of different emotions and twists and a lot of backstory, and I am really interested in knowing their past more deeply.

CHARACTERS : 6/10
The characters are okay, not very detailed and explained. For example, I can't understand a thing about Jin's step brother Namjoon, like his personality, he is abusive and a bully or is there more to him? Like all the characters, they need to be more developed and explained.

STYLE OF WRITING : 6/10
I would advise you to please make a little bit of change in your writing style. Sometimes, it is really hard to understand the plot. Make sure to mention whenever there's a change of pov. It's not very much needed in novels but sometimes it can be helpful in fanfictions to give more stability to the story. Also, put the dialogues in quotation marks or write them separately line by line. I am recommending this not as a writer's pov but instead a reader. It will make it easy for the readers to understand.

PACE : 8/10
The pace is okay in my opinion. However, It's a little slow according to the story. But as the story is still ongoing, I can't say much.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 10/10
There are almost no grammatical mistakes, and I am truly impressed with your vocabulary. You have used a lot of words that are not only unique, but fancy and attractive and surely attract a reader's mind. And it is very good that you have provided a mature chapter warning.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 9/10
Overall, the story is amazing. You have great ideas, and your vocabulary and grammar are also perfect. Even your way of writing is correct, but it is not easy for everyone to read. Many of us can read the story as we have grown to acknowledge and understand from being long on wattpad but many new readers who are new to the app, might not understand due to your way of writing, and again everyone has their own way of writing so it's okay if you want to keep it as it is.

TOTAL : 79/100

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Romantic story by aurora_2604

BOOK COVER : 5/5
The cover is perfect and matches completely with the story. The font is perfectly visible, and its aesthetics perfectly meet with the story.

BOOK TITLE : 3/5
The title is a romantic story, but I don't think that it matches anywhere with the story. I don't mean to hurt you, but the way Jungkook forced Taehyung even if they fell in love later, it is not at all romantic.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 8/10
The description is good and well written. The length is perfect for description. It surely makes me want to read the story. It is interesting and attractive and gives a perfect amount of spoilers.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 7/10
I had very high expectations from the story from reading the first chapter, it was very interesting and I loved the way Taehyung was willing to do everything for Hoseok, though they did not end up together but it did show True love. Their relationship was not only centered in physical needs but emotions and trust.

PLOT : 7/20
I am sorry if you don't like my judgment but I don't believe that forcing someone, or being obsessive and trying to force them to get pregnant without letting other people know and then calling it love is not real love. There were few loopholes, Jungkook said he would do anything to make Tae happy and then calling Tae, making him drunk and having sex without protection to make him pregnant so that he leaves Hoseok was not at all right. I get it that it is a FF, but in reality if someone does this, you and I both know that it will be seriously wrong. This was the only flaw in your story other than that I loved the story and its plot.

The plot is appealing and interesting. It does not contain any other loopholes and after reading your story I can tell one thing and that you have amazing ideas and creativity for the plot but I would really be happy if you can take my advice into consideration. Sexual harassment though not in starting but in many places and obsession, is not a term for love.

CHARACTERS : 9/10
All the characters are very well written and described, but there's one flaw which I have already mentioned. And it is not even a flaw. calling it a 'flaw' is wrong of me. We all have come to think that these things are common in love because of these terms being common in many FF's. I loved the way you made Seokjin and Hoseok's characters. I seriously liked them. I felt a lot of sadness when Hoseok let Tae go but still it was amazing.

STYLE OF WRITING : 10/10
Your style of writing is truly appreciative . Everything is laid out perfectly, and there is no problem in reading. It matches with the story and is easily understandable. The dialogues are perfect and make proper sense.

PACE : 8/10
The pace was good, but maybe you could have woken up hoseok earlier, but still, the pace was perfect, and I am really waiting for the epilogue.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 9/10
There were very few minor grammatical mistakes, and the vocabulary usage is very good. It's simple but perfect.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 6/10
The story was good overall and interesting but maybe if their relationship was built more on both physical, emotional and trustworthy instead of just physical and if Jungkook actually cared for him not only for his body would have been more good. Being intimate with someone because they don't have any way out even when they have flu and fever, I don't have anything else to say on this.

TOTAL : 72/100

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Baby Steps by NamJinsLostBaby

BOOK COVER : 1/5
The cover is nothing but just a single picture of Jimin. There is no creativity or even a little editing. It would have been better if you used all the 3 members as you have written as it's a vminkook book. But placing only Jimin on the cover, it seems a little strange.

BOOK TITLE : 3/5
The title is good and did match with the story, but you can try for more suitable titles.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 2/10
There is no description present. There are only 2 lines that are not enough to interest your reader or make it interesting and attractive.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 3/10
The book did not have a good first impression for me personally. There was no creativity and attractiveness in the Title, Cover, or Description, which just made me lose interest. I would not have read this book if it was not the case that I had to judge it considering these points. I would suggest you check out cover shops for your cover. You can find many brilliant cover shops. Make a summary or prologue of your story and use it as a description if you don't have any idea right now by editing it accordingly.

PLOT : 15/20
The plot of the story was good enough. Your ideas are good, you just need to improve the way you display them.

CHARACTERS : 7/10
The characters are not very well described and need more development for readers to understand it easily and make the story more attractive and interesting.

STYLE OF WRITING : 8/10
The style of writing is good.

PACE : 8/10
The pace is going well, and after every chapter, you would want to read more.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 8/10
Not so many but there are a few grammatical mistakes that can be corrected through proofreading.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 5/10
Overall, the story is good, and I am sure you can do it better. All the best.

TOTAL : 60/100

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