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Finally, the wait is over~~

A heartfelt congratulations to all the participants. I hope you gain knowledge from the reviews which I'll be posting in this chapter.

All the stories are amazing and I really loved reading/judging the books.

✯ NOTE ✯

As it's a ONESHOT category, I thought it'll be better to not judge the books according to the 'Judging Criteria' I've made for the Novels. Instead, here I'll be talking about the points which I thought really worked and in what places the author can improve themselves even more. And judged the books accordingly.

✯ JUDGE : taetebts ✯

Book : BTS (maknae) smut shots
Chapter : Save Me - pt 1 & pt 2
Author : armykoyola

↠ What worked : 25/25
I really liked how the author started the story and showed Jimin's longing and love for Y/N. Everyone's character was described beautifully. Jungkook being Jimin's best friend and helping him out, Jimin being caring and understanding with Y/N and Y/N being able to overcome her fears was excellently shown. And Y/N's boyfriend really made me mad at him which shows the author's capability in their writing. The pace wasn't too fast nor slow. The ending was so sweet and wholesome. I really enjoyed reading the story all along. The plot was common yet presented originally.

↠ What didn't work and Advices : 22/25
Firstly, I would suggest the author to add more description while explaining certain things and maintaining the consistency throughout the end. I liked when you described their emotions but I felt you could've added more details into it. Mainly some more details on certain areas would manage the flow of it.

Secondly, I would suggest you to write the dialogues more in a paragraphic way rather than the way you did in the first chapter. As an example -

y/n - someone might see us having sex in university.

y//b/n - but you don't mind people seeing you like this. Do you? I want everyone to know their lovely senior is a cum slut who is a cock lover woman.

y/n-no! you can't.

That is the reason I liked part 2 more than part 1. Part 2 was more good and explained. I know you can definitely edit some parts which you feel like needs correction and as I've read your other stories, I know you can edit/write them in no time also in a more appealing way.

There were few silly mistakes along with grammatical errors which were easily noticeable. And I believe, you can always proofread and edit them, so don't worry about it.

I loved the book and I wish you all the best for your future.

TOTAL : 47/50

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Book : Tales of Heart
Chapter : Hesitant Hearts
Author : aurora_2604

↠ What worked : 25/25
First of all, I really liked the writing style the author possesses. It was so easy to read yet so good that the readers would want to re-read it again. The plot might not be the most unique one, however I really liked how you made your own scenarios throughout it.

It started like a normal 'come-out' story yet some places really left some effect on me. I liked how the author explained everything in a third person's pov and it was so naturally beautiful. I liked how you described their emotions, their hesitations, their needs and love for each other. The tension you created is really impressive. Hats off to you for that. The chapter was smooth going, realistic and lovely. Can make anyone feel better by reading it. I really loved the chapter personally, I read some other chapters too and I can tell the author has a really good way of explaining scenarios. Which is one of the main required things whenever it comes to writing a story like this. The pace and the flow of the paragraphs were great. Also, the length was perfect for a one-shot and nothing else to say about the plot. It was good in its own way. You did an excellent job at word building.

↠ What didn't work and Advices : 24/25
There weren't any major grammatical mistakes that needed to be fixed. But even if there were a few little hiccups here and there, they were hidden by the greatest descriptions. I noticed, you've repeated same words twice or silly mistakes like-

"I know." Taehyung choked out and and (you wrote 'and' twice) smiled through his tears before leaping into Jeongguk's lap to hug his best friend.

None of them were to (here it should be 'too') deep, none too personal or heavy.
You could write this line as - "None of them were too deep neither personal or heavy" or something like this.

Was he was really doing this? "Can I um, try something?" He whispered. (here the latter 'was' was not needed)

As you can see, there were some really silly mistakes like these and I know it was maybe a slip of your mind and can be easily corrected at any time. Also good luck with your new chapter updates, I'll be looking forward to them.

TOTAL : 49/50

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Book : Let's go on a strange date
Author : shinhaari

↠ What worked : 25/25
I could get an overview of what the oneshot gonna be from the blurb itself, however I liked how the author described each one of their dates along with plotting some sweet and realistic scenarios. It was original and beautifully written. The chapters were sweet and sometimes cute. I liked the simplicity and the message you wanted to give along with the story. I really haven't read any books like this before, so it really interested me. I like your way of writing, it was easy to understand and good enough to catch the reader's attention.

↠ What didn't work and Advices : 23/25
I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes, however I would like you to focus on the punctuation part. And it's always appreciated to proofread your chapters thoroughly before posting. As a writer myself I know, even if we proofread it more than once we always come across a silly mistake or two whenever we view the chapter as a reader. So, it's totally alright.

The next thing which I would like to share is the depth of the plot. As it's a oneshot, everything was laid out perfectly but I felt a little lack of descriptions sometimes. The scenarios were great, there's no doubt in it and I know it may have sounded better in your head rather the way you wrote (which I can feel as a writer myself) it. I wanted to know more about Jungkook and Y/N's past and how they fell in love, so it could create more impact on the readers to understand their current (understanding) relationship.

Everything was laid out perfectly and I would suggest you to add a little more details or a para or two which would show about their past and how they fell in love with each other. It's just what I felt while judging your book and as a reviewer I would advise you to focus on more details. And I wish you all the best.

TOTAL : 48/50

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Book : Melody of Serendipity
Author : Yoongleskookiee777

↠ What worked : 25/25
The staring was great. I actually got a vibe of one of my favorite animes 'Your Lie in April' which I thought the author got inspired from. The story seemed similar in the starting but I liked how the author made their own turns in it. The thoughts and inner monologues of the characters, as well as their dialogue and feelings, were all expressed by the author in such a captivating and beautiful manner. The vocabulary was standard yet easily understandable. Which immediately made me engrossed. The author's style of writing is very beautiful and original. You did a fantastic job at world building all along.

↠ What didn't work and Advices : 22/25
Even though their feelings, Jimin's and Min Y/N's were explained thoroughly, I felt the lack of plot in the end. The starting was beautiful, the emotions were explained beautifully yet the ending seemed abruptly fast. I'm aware of the fact that it was a oneshot yet I feel like there needs to be a strong plot. I would suggest, you can add a little more plot or a twist in it would work in an effective way. I was really looking forward to some hook but sadly I couldn't find it. However, the ending was beautiful. I won't spoil it more here as others will be reading it too. The plot wasn't unique yet it was a fantastic short-story. I would really appreciate it if you take my suggestions in a positive way and work on it.

And lastly if you haven't watched 'Your Lie in April' till now, you should really give it a try as I saw how passionately you described Music and their passion all along with it. Everything was beautifully presented. Well done.

TOTAL : 47/50

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Now let's wholeheartedly welcome our winners (★^O^★)

• ONESHOT CATEGORY RESULTS •

✧ FIRST PLACE WINNER ✧

Tales of Heart by aurora_2604

-49/50-

✧ SECOND PLACE WINNER ✧

Let's go on a strange date by shinhaari

-48/50-

✧ THIRD PLACE WINNER ✧

Melody of Serendipity by Yoongleskookiee777

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BTS (maknae) smut shots by armykoyola

-47/50-

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