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✧ JUDGE : charulotta ✧

Alchemy of soul : The lost Relic by strawberry1d

BOOK COVER : 4.5/5
The cover appears to be much eye-catching as the both main leads are visible in vibrant colour. Even their dress gives hints about the time period of the story. It definitely attracts many readers. It will be better if the fonts are bigger and easier to view.

BOOK TITLE : 5/5
Though I know it is inspired by a k-drama but the book title is perfect for the storyline and plot. Viewers can guess about some supernatural concept in it.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 9/10
Every line of the blurb gave me hope of something different and interesting.The way you gave a description of your character, it’s so appealing. I was mesmerised by your writing style and wanted to know more.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 9.5/10
Very first chapter was slow but it was interesting enough to keep me reading from start to last. The impression on the characters was strong to continue.

PLOT : 19/20
I haven’t seen the kdrama or known the plot so that’s why I don’t know whether it is similar or not. But to me it is unique and original. As a fantasy genre fan, this is my comfort zone. There might have been some plot holes but it doesn’t matter to the story as much. Readers must be dazzled at first as the story moves slowly but eventually it becomes interesting.

CHARACTERS : 10/10
The character shows their emotions in a genuine way. Their struggle to express or suppress their inner desires made me think. As the story continues, they are opening up more. I like it.

STYLE OF WRITING : 10/10
There is nothing to say about it. It is absolutely fantastic.The way the author described every emotion or the characteristics of any role and situation perfectly match. The vocabulary is just chef's kiss. Especially your choice of adjectives. I was full into the writing style of yours.

PACE : 8.5/10
The storytelling is a little slow and maybe it's hard to concentrate at first but it is needed for the plot to establish everything in their spot. So, it’s okay to go like this.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 10/10
There were no mistakes as far as I know. I could not find any grammar errors or any spelling mistakes.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 9/10
Overall this book is good for reading and improving your reading skill. I loved this book. I just want to tell you to quicken the pace of your story.

TOTAL : 94.5/100

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Welcome to Australia by Yeahidonthavethink

BOOK COVER : 4.5/5
The illustration of Jin on the cover was calm to the eyes. The fonts were visible and perfect. Even you can predict the profession of Jin through this. I liked it.

BOOK TITLE : 5/5 
The title suits the plot perfectly and indicates a great story of unknown things. It is not very common so I think it will attract more readers.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 9/10
The blurb was written beautifully with some of the quotes and some obvious things that are going to happen soon. I liked the way you described this. Well done.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 9 /10
At first we see an average Australian girl living a monotonous life along with her father and brother. And suddenly an unexpected male figure appears and gives a mind blowing turn to the story. I was surprised and satisfied with it.

PLOT : 19/20
I actually loved the plot. It was a new experience for me to learn new things about a country and the people of it. It gave me scope to read something new. I’m looking forward to seeing how the story goes. Also you made me visualise some scenes with genuine emotions.This is the best part.

CHARACTERS : 9/10
Along with both main leads the supportive characters are also interesting. They serve new ideas. Their possibilities of living a good life and expressing their emotions are on top level. There are just a few chapters so I prefer not to comment on their development.

STYLE OF WRITING :10 /10
I like this type of story where you can smell artistic writing with fancy vocabulary. Author has put much effort into making it more beautiful. I like to appreciate this.

PACE : 10/10
Pace is good still now.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 9/10
There were a few punctuation mistakes but you can fix them. Otherwise everything is good.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 9/10
The story was enjoyable and some scenes were extremely creative. I would like to read more. Keep it up.

TOTAL : 93.5 /100

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Just A Fan by taesimpforlife

BOOK COVER : 4.5/5
The picture of Namjoon on the cover gives the perfect hint of the story where he is an actual idol, all charismatic on his own. The fonts are also in bright colour visible to all. It blends well. It can be more professional with artwork or something like that.

BOOK TITLE : 5/5 
I think when a fangirl is seeking a good fanfic it will surely catch her attraction. We all want to live a life like this. So, it is exciting to read something like this. And the title gives the actual vibe. Also goes perfect with the storyline.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 10/10
Not so long, not so short. It starts with a quote from the book and it is the simplest way to gain readers.You also added some details of main characters mixed with a little mystery. It can increase anyone’s curiosity.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 9/10
It was enjoyable to read this. When the female lead reached Korea I was so excited to see what happens next.The story goes well with my imagination.

PLOT : 19/20
There are a lot of stories with the same kind of plots but still it seems appealing. It was fun to explore more and more.Story of Both sides of the characters made it more interesting. When they started to feel the feelings of love that time was beautiful. You gave a good effort to make it more soothing for readers.

CHARACTERS : 9/10
I like the appearance of every character, how they act with the circumstances and get themselves mixed with each other.Y/N sometimes seems carrying secrets with her and this adds more interest in the story. As it is an ongoing book, I’m hoping to observe more development of the characters.

STYLE OF WRITING : 8/10
Your writing style is casual but to be honest sometimes it feels immature. When you are writing a book you should keep in mind that a novel needs more detailed explanation and also with some fancy vocabulary.

PACE : 10/10
The pace seems perfect to me.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 7/10
There are some grammar mistakes like misuses of verbs and prepositions. I was confused as somewhere you addressed y/n as you and somewhere she. You should correct that.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 9/10
The story was enjoyable indeed and I’m still looking further for the mystery y/n carries with her. Good Luck.

TOTAL : 90.5/100

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Two sides of a coin by Seamlesslove

BOOK COVER : 4/5
The cover is attractive yet it should have more neatness.But the fonts are good to see and I hope it can gain more views through this.

BOOK TITLE : 4/5
It gives a mysterious vibes and suits the atmosphere of the story.You can tell there is more to explore as the story continues.But it is too common.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 9/10
The blurb starts with some quotes but it is not written by whom they were made.You can add this.Overall it is standard with a little description and doesn’t give any big spoilers.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 9/10
Prologue was well written and it captivated my attention.There was a huge mystery along with love, lust and hate.I don’t know what will happen next but I am waiting for more.

PLOT : 18/20
This type of plot is confusing and hard to understand. Many readers can’t find out what’s happening but this story is perfect. Not so childish and not boring at all. But you can improve by adding some more details and all.

CHARACTERS : 7/10
In the mystery crime Genre, all characters are full of surprise and this gives the actual vibes. I liked their dialogue delivery. But the emotions of the characters somewhere didn’t show well. I would suggest you make them more expressive.

STYLE OF WRITING : 9/10
Writing style was neat and cool. They blend perfectly with scenery. It was easy to understand.

PACE : 9/10
The pace was good and on point.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 9 /10
Though it was tough to find errors there were some. You need to be careful to choose preposition.There were no spelling mistakes in my eyes.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 9/10
This is not my genre but I liked reading this. A new experience indeed. Keep improving your writing skill. Thank you.

TOTAL : 87/100

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Young Again by namjaaaa122223

BOOK COVER : 3.5/5
The cover was simple and even there wasn’t the story's title written on it. And also I don’t think it goes well with the story. It doesn’t fit. It felt like you just picked some random photo up and got it done. So, I would suggest you create a good cover for it.

BOOK TITLE : 3/5
The title isn't unique but I could relate it with the plot.

BLURB/DESCRIPTION : 5/10
It is so short, and doesn't give enough information about the storyline or the plot. You can not earn attention with a simple line. Maybe it can be a little bit more descriptive.

FIRST IMPRESSION : 7/10
To be honest, it doesn’t give me any unique punch. And when I was reading the very first few chapters I was getting restless by the grammatical mistakes and wrong spellings. I would suggest you edit them when you get time.

PLOT : 17/20
If I talk about the plot, it is unique and somehow gathers readers. A single dad bringing up his children on his own, this type of story can engage more readers. But I think the description of any situation could've been more interesting. I will suggest that you work on it.

CHARACTERS : 8/10
I could not find any character development. I think you need to work hard on the growth of each character. In most of the parts Namjoon was delivering dialogues and only Namjoon’s emotional feelings were shown. You should add more characters to show their feelings. It will help with balancing the story.

STYLE OF WRITING : 7/10
I understand it is a fanfic still a reader wants some peaceful stuff where there are some random things in your writing. It was more like a screenplay along with some dialogues.

PACE : 8/10
The pace was okay. At first it seemed too slow but with reading further it was used to. But I suggest shortening your story by removing irrelevant scenes.

PUNCTUATION/GRAMMAR : 7/10
As I said before there were a lot of spelling mistakes. Even somewhere the grammar was wrongly used. You have to use proper verbs after 3rd person and it will be better if you avoid short forms in story writing such as tbh or like this.

YOUR IMPRESSION : 7/10
I am not so satisfied with the book. I was captivated by the title and plot but your writing style needs to improve more. I know you will do better. Best of luck and keep updating.

TOTAL : 72.5/100

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