participants,
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۰ ۪۪۫۫ · 🩰 so, the winner of this category is~
I M POSSIBLE by ViniShah2

review

vocabulary and grammar: (9.5/10) barely any mistakes

emotions(14/15): i felt all the emotions perfectly

closure and sense of finality (14.5/15): amazingly done, not a very cliche happy with 2 kids kind of ending, i loved it.

flow (9/10): amazingly done with like 1-2 ups and downs but amazing.

total: 47/50

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COUNCIL OF GODS by Dark_Ghostie

vocabulary and grammar (10/10): amazingly done.

emotions (13/15): there werent any emotions.

closure and sense of finality (10/15): i didnt really feel like it was the closure.

flow (9.5/10): small but smooth.

total: 42.5/50

MY PAST by xxfrozenhibaxx

vocabulary and grammar (8.5/10): good with a few tiny errors.

emotions (13/15): wasnt very emotional, it was just actions.

closure and sense of finality (13/15): it was okay, felt more like the climacteric, plus secondary last chapter. it did not gave a sense of closure, it was more like a second last to me.

flow (8/10): flow was wobbly, and quick paced.

total: 42.5/50

HARD TO LOVE, HARD TO LOOSE by dwarkaratna

vocabulary and grammar (8/10): minor mistakes in grammar, could definitely use better vocab.

emotions (10/15): felt bland, i didnt really feel any emotions, it was just action and actions, no emotion.

closure and sense of finality (13/15): there was closure, but not the sense of finality.

flow (7/10): too quick paced.

total: 38/50

ROMANTIC STORY by aurora_2604

vocabulary and grammar (9/10): pretty good, with little to no mistakes in grammar, vocabulary could be better but overall, well done!

emotions (14/15): the emotions were good but it felt a little monotoned to me, i was looking for more.

closure and sense of finality (13/15): it was good, felt complete, although just the ending didnt feel connected to the story, it felt like the start of another book related to this one, it was good.

flow (8/10): a little quick paced, but it was good.

total:: 44/50