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BOOK: THE SAGA OF MAFIOSO
AUTHOR: JohanLiebert33

starting: 8/10
writing style: 10/10
impact on readers: 8/10
action: 13/15
was it too slow to be action?: 4/5
spelling errors/vocabulary: 10/10
enjoyment: 8/10
overall grammar: 9/10

total:: 70/80
the way it was written, i loved how the author played with the words. the is one of the best action scenes i have read. i loved how everything was expressed in a interesting manner. there were no grammatical errors and i thoroughly enjoyed it.

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BOOK NAME: A MEMORY OF STARFIRES
AUTHOR: Aravis-Brightspell

starting: 8/10
writing style: 10/10
impact on readers: 8/10
action: 12/15
was it too slow to be action?: 4/5
spelling errors/vocabulary: 9/10
enjoyment: 8/10
overall grammar: 9/10

total:: 68/80
i thoroughly enjoyed the writing of the author, the words have been expressed extremely well. the vocabulary is great there are hardly any spelling errors and the descriptive way of writing really put it all together. it was perfect for a action scene. i like how the sword scene was expressed really well. overall i would say this chapter would be a extremely good suggestion for the best action scene!

BOOK NAME: BROKEN WITHOUT YOU- A RAY OF HOPE
AUTHOR: Kmytho

starting: 7/10
writing style: 9/10
impact on readers: 5/10
action: 10/15
was it too slow to be action?: 3/5
spelling errors/vocabulary: 10/10
enjoyment: 8/10
overall grammar: 10/10

total:: 62/80
i loved this chapter personally, it us indeed true the strength of an angry mother is extremely strong. i loved the starting and how it was expressed. there were hardly any errors and no grammatical error. there wasn't much action but a reader would definitely enjoy it just like how i did. it's a good recommendation of a book.

BOOK NAME: MAFIA'S LOVE STORY
AUTHOR: AD_ot7_killergirl

starting: 5/10
writing style: 5/10
impact on readers: 5/10
action: 7/15
was it too slow to be action?: 3/5
spelling errors/vocabulary: 5/10
enjoyment: 6/10
overall grammar: 7/10

total:: 43/80
the book had a lot of grammatical errors. the first chapter itself the word boil was written as boli. personally i would say this book has extremely less action. your writing style is extremely well, you have a lot of creative ideas for the book but i would recommend rewriting the grammar a bit. i have to say the concept of your story is pretty unique ,i would love to give it a second read.

BOOK NAME: CHANGES IN THE LIFE
AUTHOR: Jisoo_The_Beauty

starting: 7/10
writing style: 8/10
impact on readers: 8/10
action: 10/15
was it too slow to be action?: 3/5
spelling errors/vocabulary: 8/10
enjoyment: 7/10
overall grammar: 9/10

total:: 60/80
i loved the starting, it gives a unique vibe to the starting. i loved the writing style of the author, the grammar was extremely good and as a reader myself i personally felt curious after the first chapter. the words have been expressed really well!

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