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Finally, we are back with the results of the last category, OT7 category. It was very hard for us to choose one among the three books, each book was having a neck to neck score. But as mentioned before, we were bound to choose the best one only. And here we are.
Before the results, let me tell you, you all did great and don't be disheartened if you didn't win. You did your best! So, don't think otherwise.
Let's reveal the winner!!
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Winner (Ace)
Book - Phenomenal
Author - __blue____
Judgement of first judge - badestbitchhh_
Title:- 3/5
The title was unique and suitable for the plot but, I think it could have been better. It might catch one's attention for the tiniest while but if it is modified and look up on, it can be changed to something intriguing which will later help in clouting and recognition.
Cover:- 2/8
It wasn't that attractive but was accurate for the theme of the book. The color blending was not good which made the fonts stand out from the picture used in the cover; giving a warm vibe. The sizes and placements also need improvement.
Blurb:- 3/7
The blurb seemed a bit interesting and inviting however, it didn't really create a conflict that urged me to read the book right away. It was relevant to the plot but, the words and description can be changed along with the order of writing it. There were no specific grammatical mistake but one of them could be changed for having a better flow of reading.
Starting:-Β 8/10
The starting was not that interesting but it had the essentials that was required to read the book further ahead. The description was pretty good too, which made it comprehensive and easy to connect.
Plot and Idea:- 17/20
The plot was pretty awesome and was executed quite well. I must say, good work right there. I have rarely passed/read through these kinds of plots and it was quite unique. The plot pace was not slowed according to what I read, but sometimes...I felt like it was rushed/too fast for the characters and events.
Characters and Emotions:- 12/15
The personalities/characters were well described and comprehensive. There were some major changes but the description of some of the changes seemed a bit cramped up. It could have been a bit better.
The emotions were expressed quite meticulously but some improvements are needed.
Writing Style:- 9.5/15
The format was correct and the author went with the flow they started with, it was quite good and attention worthy but again, there were grammatical mistakes. The tone needs some improvement, at times the description or way of expressing a particular thing was rushed which broke the flow and connection for me. The words used were neither too complicated nor too simple.
Grammar:- 15/20
The grammar needs a bit of improvement, it was almost flawless but some mistakes were spottable easily. The tense was quite good but there were some minor mistakes at times.
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Judgement of second judge - burrito_in_bed
Title:- 4/5
The title is unique and related to the plot. However, I didn't find it attractive or intriguing.
Cover:- 5/8
The cover was pretty and gave away the right vibes. However the font style and size could be changed to make it better.
Blurb:- 6/7
I personally found the blurb very attractive. It captures the readers interest and intrigues them.
Starting:- 8/10
The starting was a little boring, however it gave all the per-requisites to reading the book properly. The characters were introduced properly and the emotions were captured well.
Plot and Idea:- 18/20
This is plot I've never seen or read before. A completely different trope dealing with a variety of things. Overall- the plot is great and not one of the overbaked plots that one can find on wattpad. I enjoyed it a lot.
Characters and Emotions:- 13/15
The character development was on point- right from the first chapter. The emotions were captured well too. The descriptions were great and hooking. However I felt there still is room for improvement. In a few places- the description seems a little rushed.
Writing style:- 11/15
It is unique and different- hooking and attractive. I enjoyed reading the book because of all the vivid descriptions. However I think there are a few places you can still improve things in. People prefer reading polished and even descriptions. In you book, the descriptions are slow at some points and fast at the others. This gives a feeling that every part has been written by a different person.
Grammar:- 18/20
Almost perfect grammar. I only found a few minor punctuation mistakes. A little bit of editing and you're good to go.
Β Β Overall Average:- 76.25/100
Congratulations to the winner!! β€οΈπ
Other Amazing Books -
β’ It's Gonna Be You - 51.75
β’ Unidentified Darkness - 53.5
Thanks to everyone for participating and those who didn't win please don't be disheartened cause for me, everyone is winner. So let's learn and keep writing amazing books.
The winner is requested to PM me for the sticker and other prizes. Thank you. β€οΈβ€οΈ
Yours Truly,
SeeSaw Fam.
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