𝖠 𝗁𝖾𝖺𝗋𝗍𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗈 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗃𝗎𝖽𝗀𝖾, silverxbeauty & Kanye_Ariel, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗂𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖽𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗐𝗂𝗌𝖽𝗈𝗆. 𝖢𝗈𝗇𝗀𝗋𝖺𝗍𝗎𝗅𝖺𝗍𝗂𝗈𝗇𝗌 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌—𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝖻𝗋𝗂𝗅𝗅𝗂𝖺𝗇𝖼𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝗎𝗅𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 1𝗦𝗧 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥𝗦 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱ 

_reichii » Calathea

Engaging Hook (20/20)

Clarity of Plot (17/20)

Magical Allure (19/20)

Character Introduction (17/20)

Intrigue (20/20)

➦ Total: 93/100

Recommendations for improvement:
I have nothing to recommend or advice. This book has a very very unique story that I really really enjoy. It is also well written in a way that doesn’t leave you confused.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 2𝗡𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

wordywonders » Against the dark

Engaging hook (12/20)

Clarity of plot (20/20)

Magical allure (15/20)

Character intro (13/20)

Intrigue (20/20)

➦ Total: 80/100

Recommendations for improvement:

The synopsis is amazing, gets right to the point, and it might be a little long, but it has to be able to put all the info the reader will need. All I would suggest is a quote at the start about the dark arts or, as I feel like it would add more interest!

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𐔌 . ⋮ 3𝗥𝗗 𝗣𝗟𝗔𝗖𝗘 𝗪𝗜𝗡𝗡𝗘𝗥 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

Gise_lliana » On the land, In the Sea

Engaging Hook (15/20)

Clarity of Plot (13/20)

Magical Allure (20/20)

Character Introduction (15/20)

Intrigue (16/20)

➦ Total: 79/100

Recommendations for improvement:
I would advise writing in passive form instead of using colons to show who is speaking. This way, your book will be more readable and be able to show physical and emotional gestures of the characters as they speak.

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𐔌 . ⋮ 𝗡𝗢𝗕𝗟𝗘 𝗣𝗔𝗥𝗧𝗜𝗖𝗜𝗣𝗔𝗡𝗧𝗦 .ᐟ ֹ ₊ ꒱

Vedikha_Writes »  The Inheritance

Engaging Hook (12/20)

Clarity of Plot (16/20)

Magical Allure (0/20)

Character Introduction (16/20)

Intrigue (15/20)

➦ Total: 59/100

Recommendations for Improvement:
The story itself is very unique. One thing I want to point out is the Korean romanization and translation. I would advice sticking with one or the other. If you want to use Korean, have the translation at the end of the chapter, not in the middle. In all honesty, it isn’t even needed because the book is definitely situated in Korea.

The plot and writing style is well done. No issue with that or spelling.

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7Bibliophile3 » Champagne Life

Engaging Hook (19/20)

Clarity of Plot (17/20)

Magical Allure (0/20)

Character Introduction (18/20)

Intrigue (17/20)

➦ Total: 71/100

Recommendations for Improvement:
The first chapter seems like an introduction page as opposed to it being a first chapter.

The plot of the story is not bad at all, I would suggest impressions two chapters into one. The chapters are quite short on their own and you have written the story in a way that there is this hook it has on the reader at the end of each chapter.

I would also recommend adjusting the writing in a way that there won’t be any need for bracket inclusion.

The romantic tension between the two characters is very very well written.

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KimSoojin1112 » Entangled

Engaging Hook (13/20)

Clarity of Plot (15/20)

Magical Allure (18/20)

Character Introduction (15/20)

Intrigue (15/20)

➦ Total: 76/100

Recommendations for Improvement:
I would recommend making the diversity of powers more clear because I got confused on what the reason or derivation of powers were based on.

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GoldenieTwilightie » Engulfed

Engaging hook (15/20)

Clarity of plot (2/20)

Magical allure (14/20)

Character intro (20/20)

Intrigue (12/20)

➦ Total: 63/100

Recommendations for Improvement:
The synopsis is too long. We want the synopsis to get to the point and be not long. The synopsis doesn't get to the point. Maybe you can start it like how she gets kidnapped and finds out she has a mermaid tail. Overall the synopsis is catchy I just would ask you to make it shorter

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strawberry1d » Starstruck Secrets

Engaging hook (10/20)

Clarity of plot (20/20)

Magical allure (13/20)

Character intro (5/20)

Intrigue (15/20)

➦ Total: 63/100

Recommendations for Improvement :
The synopsis brings the romance and action right to it. I feel the love, the actions, the tension. I love how you portray this and how it caught my eye right on!

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EyesDucking » Imperfectly Perfect

Engaging hook (5/20)

Clarity of plot (6/20)

Magical allure (8/20)

Character intro (20/20)

Intrigue (5/20)

➦ Total: 44/100

Recommendations for Improvement:
This synopsis wasn't that good. Even though it shows the characters, it doesn't show the actual storyline, which is a big part of a book. Of course, yours is romance, so you need both characters in it., but are they gonna face problems? Secret potions? Family secrets? These are things you should think about adding.

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shinhaari » Let's go on a strange date

Engaging hook (15/20)

Clarity of plot (15/20)

Magical allure (14/20)

Character intro (13/30)

Intrigue (11/20)

➦ Total: 68/100

Recommendations for Improvement:
The synopsis is beautiful, it gets right to the point and shows how the book is a romance. It shows what the plot is and both of the character's importance. I feel their connection just towards the synopsis

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𝗋𝗈𝗎𝗇𝖽 𝗈𝖿 𝖾𝗇𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗍𝖾𝖽 𝖺𝗉𝗉𝗅𝖺𝗎𝗌𝖾 𝗍𝗈 𝖺𝗅𝗅 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗐𝗂𝗇𝗇𝖾𝗋𝗌! 𝖳𝗈 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗋𝗒 𝗉𝖺𝗋𝗍𝗂𝖼𝗂𝗉𝖺𝗇𝗍, 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗇𝗄 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗃𝗈𝗂𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗆𝖺𝗀𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗅 𝖺𝗐𝖺𝗋𝖽𝗌 𝗃𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗇𝖾𝗒. 𝖱𝖾𝗆𝖾𝗆𝖻𝖾𝗋, 𝖾𝗏𝖾𝗇 𝗂𝖿 𝗏𝗂𝖼𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝖽𝗂𝖽𝗇'𝗍 𝖿𝗂𝗇𝖽 𝗒𝗈𝗎 𝗍𝗁𝗂𝗌 𝗍𝗂𝗆𝖾, 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 𝗌𝗁𝗂𝗇𝖾𝗌 𝗐𝗂𝗍𝗁 𝗂𝗍𝗌 𝗈𝗐𝗇 𝗎𝗇𝗂𝗊𝗎𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝖾𝗅𝗅𝖻𝗂𝗇𝖽𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗋𝗆.

𝖯𝗋𝖾𝗉𝖺𝗋𝖾 𝗒𝗈𝗎𝗋𝗌𝖾𝗅𝗏𝖾𝗌, 𝖿𝗈𝗋 𝗌𝗈𝗈𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗍𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗌𝗎𝗋𝖾𝗌 𝗈𝖿 𝗌𝗍𝗂𝖼𝗄𝖾𝗋𝗌, 𝖼𝖾𝗋𝗍𝗂𝖿𝗂𝖼𝖺𝗍𝖾𝗌, 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗉𝗋𝗂𝗓𝖾𝗌 𝗐𝗂𝗅𝗅 𝖻𝖾 𝗎𝗇𝗏𝖾𝗂𝗅𝖾𝖽 𝗂𝗇 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖼𝗁𝖺𝗉𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗌 𝖺𝗁𝖾𝖺𝖽!