Book Title: You And Me…. Meant to be

Author: Jkloveskooki

Reviewer: Anika

• TOTAL MARKS- ①⓪⓪

|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ.

2/5

Judging by the votes, there are many readers but the number of interactions are very less, one or two comments per chapter.

|- 10 ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴄᴏᴠᴇʀ.

5/10

The cover is quite artistic and the theme is  appealing which made the cover eye-catching but the choice of style and position of fonts ruins the attraction. Bold text doesn't suit there, I know you positioned them above so it won't block the view of the faces but still there are many ways for fonts other than keeping them in just one line. It's better if you take advice from a graphic designer regarding this but I will just give suggestions. Place "You And Me" above without bold or italic style. The font should be attractive, whereas place "Meant To Be" Below Taehyung with signature type font style. That's just my opinion, rest is up to you.

|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴅᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ.

-2/5

The book description is very long, its summary of the main plot and its quite intriguing and attention-grabbing. Just by reading the blurb, the reader can tell the story plot is more than romance as it shows the sub-genre is mystery and thriller. There are some punctuation and spelling mistakes. The correct spelling is "nobody's" instead of nobodies. The last two lines inviting the reader to look forward to the journey of the story have the same mistake too, the correct word is "their'' not "there" both words' pronunciation is almost the same but their meanings are hugely different. "Their" is an adjective which is used for relating to them or themselves especially as possessors, agents, or objects of an action, meanwhile "there" is an adverb to indicate something in or at that place. The punctuation mistake is the number of dots you used at the end of sentence are less than 3 or more than one (ellipsis) And dot isn't necessary before question mark.

|- 10 ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴛɪᴛʟᴇ.

-6/10

The title is simple and long. Punctuation such as dot isn't relevant, it's not even an ellipsis. And instead of Slash (/) use vertical bar (|) to separate the shipping name from title. Make sure the first letter of the shipping name should be capital.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴘʟᴏᴛ.

8/10

The plot is rare in an emotional and interesting way. I have read many ships but this is the first book which shows huge tension between Taekook before things get better. The climax is rare too, both of their partner's death and their backstory is quite interesting.

•|- ②⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ ᴀɴᴅ ᴠᴏᴄᴀʙᴜʟᴀʀʏ.

-8/20

There are many spelling mistakes, also you confuse the words whose pronunciation is almost the same. Make sure to check dictionary and see their difference plus meaning

1. Chapter one,

Its been two year of there marriage

Reviewer: Its "their"

2. Chapter one, 

Hold him by his (waste)

Correction: Waist

3. Chapter one,

I (tired) waking you up so many times

Correction: Tried

4. Chapter one

Eunwoo said while (creasing) Taehyung's hair.

Correction: "caressing"

5. Chapter one

The movie they (where) watching

Correction: Were 

6.Chapter one,

He want nothing more than to (leave) a peaceful life

Correction: Live

7. Chapter one,

So from then ownward

Correction: Onward

8. Chapter 5,

Oh common, I will pay you double

Correction: Come on

9. Chapter 5,

How (greatfull) he was to her...

Correction: Grateful

10. Chapter 7,

He is an employee in my company and also a major (stoke) holder

Correction: Stock

11. Chapter 12,

(Peice) by (peice) both of their heart fell apart

Correction: Piece

12. Chapter 12, 

maximum time they use to have (luch) together

Correction: Lunch 

13. Chapter 15, 

Don't take that girl's name in (fort) of me ever again

Correction: Front 

Replace "Take" with "Say"

14. Chapter 18,

Sir actually I was never (intrested) in (corporate) job

Correction: Interested, cooperate.

15. Chapter 19,

I hope I have not hurt you, because that was not all all my (intension)

Correction: Intention

16. Chapter 19,

This is not the place (were) I belong....

Correction: Where

17. Chapter 21,

If felt like people are laughing at his (flooishness)

Correction: Foolishness

Spelling Mistakes:-

1. Chapter one,

Eunwoo chuckled (listing) to Taehyung

Correction: Listening

2. Chapter 4,

(Offocurse) the ring was for him

Correction: Of course

3. Chapter 8,

The emotion he (fets) right now was so overwhelming 

Correction: Felt

4. Chapter 14,

You (felt) me in the darkness

Correction: Left

5. Chapter 14,

You were someone I used to (fell) lucky to have...

Correction: Feel

Grammar and Vocabulary:-

There are many vocabulary errors, I only picked few to show you but all I can say is that you should read many english books to prove your vocabulary and grammar.

Chapter 3,

Rose shouted on her boyfriend 

Reviewer: You did preposition mistake here, its "at her boyfriend"

Chapter 4,

I missed to Tae Tae

Reviewer: its "I missed you"

Chapter 5,

He was finally talked to all the workers

Reviewer: Helping verb "was" isn't necessary.

Chapter 2,

He haven't talked to his parents (form) last two years

Correction: Since

Chapter 2,

With that Eunwoo went towards his car to go towards the city

Correction: to drive toward the city

Chapter 2,

A faint come in sound came from the room

Correction: A faint sound came in from the room

Chapter 3,

He always felt his parents has enough money so he need not to work

Correction So he don't need to work

Chapter 15,

"Thanku Mom"

Reviewer: Don't use short form for writing, such as cuz, tho etc and also above sentence should be written as "Thank you"

Chapter 19,

Yoongi was really happy but same time concern to,

Correction: Yoongi was really happy but at the same time concerned too. 

Punctuation:-

Chapter one,

"Why did not you woke me up, you know that you are first thing I wanted to see as I get up?" Taehyung said with pout.

Reviewer: Taehyung "Asked" not said. Its a question.

Chapter one,

I am sorry did you just said I did not woke you up

Correction: I'm sorry, did you just say I didn't wake you up?

Reviewer: Add question marks in interrogation dialogues.

Chapter 2,

Eunwoo hugged Taehyung.... he is amazed

Reviewer: The dots shouldn't be more than three. It's called ellipsis

Chapter 2, 

"Why don't you talk to them" Eunwoo said with a concern look.

Reviewer: Same mistake, add question mark (?) At the end of interrogation dialogue and use "asked" for the action tag.

Chapter 10,

"Si_sir they..." with that she started crying

Reviewer: Commonly minus (-) is used to indicate stuttering, instead of underscore.

Chapter 10,

What are you doing with someone other phone,.... 

Reviewer: Don't use different type of punctuation at same time. Use only one of them, comma or just a dot/ellipsis 

Chapter 10,

Tae what happened, everything ok?, why are you behaving like this

Reviewer: Don't add a comma after the question mark. Also add a question mark at the end of the dialogue because it's obviously a question.

Chapter 19,

"And where will you be living" Jimin asked being all concerned

Reviewer: You forgot to add a question mark here again. Kindly correct this mistake everywhere in the book.

Apostrophe:-

You always forgot to use Apostrophe (') to show possession with a singular noun

1. Chapter 3,

He went to his girlfriend house

Correction: Girlfriend's

2. Chapter 5,

He came to countryside factory to check on workers problem

Correction: Worker's

3. Chapter 20,

(Cant) his hyung see how much his is going through

Reviewer: Add Apostrophe (') between letter (t) and (n) of word "Can't"

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs Fᴏʀ ᴘʟᴏᴛ ᴛᴡɪsᴛs ᴀɴᴅ ᴀᴛᴛʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ.

-8/10

Every small event and incident along the storyline in the plot, whether they are emotional or not, were really creative ideas. They fit perfectly with each other and the pace was balanced. I really loved the rising action and climax that was between Taekook regarding the fashion designing company and rumours about their partners 

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴇᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ᴅᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴍᴇɴᴛ.

-8/10

All the characters are the best. I like how they have different careers, emotions and personalities without being cliche at all and how they are linked to each other in some way. I love how Taehyung and Jungkook have completely different personalities. Taehyung trusts his husband even though they were not together for longer than Rose and Jungkook as they were childhood friends. But still Taehyung didn't accept the fact his husband cheated on him. Meanwhile Jungkook literally believed it and hated Rose. Love between opposite personalities usually attracts readers most.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴠɪᴛʏ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏғ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ.

-6/10

Even when the vocabulary wasn't great, everything was very detailed such as emotions, dialogues or inner-thoughts of the character. The emotions were well-defined and as a reader or reviewer, I was able to feel them. In other words, you still succeed in expressing your character's  emotions through your writing.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏᴘɪɴɪᴏɴ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋ.

7/10

The book is really great and I had a good time reading it. It was very enjoyable, so continue writing it because you are one of the best authors, you just need some improvement in your writing skills that's all.

Total Marks: 60/100