Book Name: Those Unsaid Words

Author:  wild_imaginator16

Reviewer: Suzy kpopcharmseu

Cover: 03/05

It's good but not exactly eye-catchy. The font can be improved a lot, especially their arrangement and the font + color choice of the author name. The main title can be moved slightly up so that it fits in the space above the girl's head. 

Title: 03/05

A good and apt one but I would love to see a little sophisticated one with hidden meanings. Also, 'Those unsaid words' is a very common title, how about you go for something really poetic? A title that could give off those intriguing vibes. A title that could describe the feeling your book provides, something like euphoria or serendipity (this is just an example, since these titles are common as well I would suggest you to go something of this sort). 

Synopsis: 07/10

Short and clear. I would advise you to make a special chapter for reviews and highest ratings instead of adding it in the description. Also, do add a few lines of your poems, just to give a gist of what's ahead for the readers. 

Execution: 08/10

I loved the pace, the poems are short yet satisfying. They start and end with proper rhymes and descriptions, yet, you do have more room for improvement. 

Plot: 15/20

I'm impressed by your splendid titles and themes you chose for each poem. You didn't fail to include many important topics and I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you. The poems don't just revolve around love stories or social problems, it gives enough spotlight to all the aspects of life, a whole package of happiness and sorrows. I personally loved few of your poems the most which are mentioned below: 

An imaginary city

Dreams of the woman prisoner 

Writing Style: 15/20

Simple and sorted. You are creative with your thoughts and descriptions. The only reason why I didn't give you a full score is because the poems do lack poetic devices, this doesn't mean they are not good but not aren't the best as well. I'd like to rephrase, you did use poetic devices but it would be great if you use more of it. Of Course excess usage will just ruin the beauty of the poem but you can still use more of them. 

Grammar & Vocabulary: 13/20

In the first poem 'Alone', there is usage of 2 periods (dots), if you are using an ellipsis then you must use 3 dots, not less or more than that.

The spaces are distracting and random, I would advise you to work on them and make it look more arranged. 

In the 3rd poem, somewhere near the ending, you used a quotation mark at the beginning of the sentence but not at the end.

In 4th poem, 'I spotted a tree in a distant with my naked eyes' : it should be distance not distant 

In the poem, 'Her Demons', there's a phrase that goes like 'filled with fighting and tears' . I believe using 'fights' instead of fighting will be better.

Learn more words, keep widening your vocabulary because it will always come handy when you're writing poems.

Total: 64/90

Final Note: It would be great if you could possibly change your cover to something more aesthetic and dull, a vintage theme would do as well. Work on the space used after sentences and always keep on enriching your vocabulary. Goodluck.