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‣More than that by dynamjoonics_

‣Total- (72/100)

◗Title - (2/5)

The title was quite common. I couldn't see the relationship straight up but I assume it's somehow about the friendship between the two main leads. Maybe this shows that friendship is more than just that. Plus it's clearly written in the blurb, so I'm almost sure about my assumption is true. But still, I think there should be a confirmation in the blurb like writing it down and confirming it. Showing the relation with the title is a good way to present a blurb too.

◗Graphics - (4/10)

It feels like a rough draft, the font need to be in the middle. Placements are not okay. And the subtitles are long.

◗Blurb - (4/10)

It's too lengthy. Also, it reveals a lot which I will rather prefer reading in the book even though the story hasn't been processed to the point mentioned in the blurb. The last question just didn't fit right because a lot of things are going on in the blurb and I just lost excitement. I appreciate that it didn't have any grammatical errors.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (14/15)

Except for a few negligible errors, there were no major grammatical errors. Good! Just the way it should be as it was coming from a character's pov. I like the way it was just her and her feelings in the book.

◗Character development - (13/15)

It's going in one character's pov so yeah, it is explaining her very well though I believe that the side characters are not getting much attention because it's written from one perspective. There was not much character development yet. I could connect well with the characters.

◗Writing style - (13/15)

The writing style is good, still, I'll like to see the story written in the author's pov; it's easy to understand and outline every aspect and character of the story.

◗Plot - (9/15)

The plot was something common, try adding some intriguing sub-stories. But must agree that the things were executed very well.

◗Pace - (8/10)

It's going well till now. Keep up the same pace.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

Overall, I felt it was cliche though some of the parts make you just don't wanna stop reading, it's one of them. Improve the blurb and povs. Good luck

‣Chances at Love by stopperbuns

‣Total- (69/100)

◗Title - (2/5)

Not so unique, but good for a love story.

◗Graphics - (5/10)

The colour combination of fonts and background is not pleasing to me. But other things were good.

◗Blurb - (7/10)

Enough for a good blurb tho it felt a bit unsettling, like playing safe. I can see your creativity, still blurb needs more drama.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (10/15)

Grammar is good, vocabulary needs to be expanded. Very common words which just make the book simple, synonyms can be helpful and creative. Also, the writer said English isn't their first language, but I must say, they worked hard on it as the grammar is impressive in the book. Just add more variations.

◗Character development - (12/15)

There's one thing I found is using "you" in the character's pov, it's not right.

The main character is built very emotionally and it is a very good thing to attach their own feelings to the book. It always helps.

◗Writing style - (7/15)

Look, you need to learn one necessary thing, do not use so many time skips. Like, writing that in bold is not what you find in good novels. Read some detailed books where writers skip time with their words. This book is not meant to be written as a play, I'm sure this both comes into the romance genre so I will expect it to be written in a way I could have my time to digest the writing.

Plus, don't write emotions after dialogue, we need to write such details as expressions or movements if there are any. There's a lot you need to add after a dialogue, just to make it easy to imagine for the readers otherwise the dialogue feels plain.

◗Plot - (13/15)

Not so unique but something which I connected with and I really love it. I went emotional at times.

◗Pace - (9/10)

As it says slow burn in the blurb, it provides enough to process in a chapter.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (4/5)

I love the story, your writing needs to be improved. I need more details about the places, after the dialogues.

Melodies by @nirzaara

‣Total- (74/100)

◗Title - (3/5)

Unique in the sense of my less exploration, anyways the word is pretty common but never heard of any book title sharing the same. It did pique my interest. I don't wholly like the title but it's short and attractive. Clearly, the first chapter shows the relation to the title. I'm sure in future will get more relative.

◗Graphics - (5/10)

I don't like the box around the title. Other than that, I can't see the subtitles and the name of the
writer is too short when there's more space, just a bit more visibility wouldn't hurt. It is relatable as it shows Vkook, I guess it was enough for a Vkook fanfiction.

◗Blurb - (5/10)

A problem I see - the introduction of Tae as a model, if that thing will not be there, then people will be more curious Also, the author wrote the idea of 1st chapter in the blurb, it might be enough for others but as a judge, I need some more.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (13/15)

There weren't any grammatical errors, great! And the dialogue delivery was good as well. The vocabulary was the way it should be.

◗Character development - (13/15)

The emotions and actions of the characters were portrayed well. About character development, I felt Jimin improved a bit and got guts. The characters were written very well and I could easily connect to them.

◗Writing style - (13/15)

I feel like the writing style can be more descriptive. Though the conversation is on point! I like casual
words that feel comfortable while reading, and the friend zone is the safest place.

◗Plot - (10/15)

The plot was common for me but everything was executed very well in the story. Talking about originality, I don't really see it coming, many romance books have the same plot.

◗Pace - (9/10)

Perfect!

◗Overall Enjoyment - (3/5)

Lastly, It sure was a good read. I like the comic timing.

Not Sure by @Smile_209

‣Total- (35/100)

◗Title - (4/5)

As the blurb indicates, she has options and she's not sure what she'll pick so it's clear and not so
cliche, good job.

◗Graphics - (5/10)

The fonts are not evenly placed plus they aren't too clear. The content of the blurb is represented well in the cover by the two guys in it, just improve the font.

◗Blurb - (6/10)

Why so much information in such a flat way, I didn't get excited to know who she'll choose. The
blurb might be decent for this kind of story, but no, you will need to improve the way you place
the cherry on top, shouldn't be on the right corner or the left; put it right in the middle and that's what I mean when I say improve your writing, please.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (5/15)

'……' Using a lot of dots is unnecessary and grammatically incorrect. There are other mistakes too. Some sentences confused me a lot.

◗Character development - (3/15)

It's ironic how Jungkook is in the role of a writer and the story lacks a lot in writing. Plus, there are only statements in the book, only conversation going on and I don't feel any word they say. Again
I'll mention that it's like reading two friends texting each other which is not suitable.

◗Writing style - (2/15)

I genuinely dislike your writing style, it brought tears reading almost zero description of surroundings and more necessary stuff. The way you used names to dedicate their dialogues, it's just such a chatty type of writing and I'm sure this category doesn't want you to write a story in such a way. It cannot be said that I'm reading a novel, not even a novella. Please learn from some fellow writers. In a book, adding pictures for a better experience is appreciated still, you can not just put images and just it - no, buddy write down the colour of walls if the scene is situated in a room T^T

◗Plot - (5/15)

A very common plot. The things weren't executed well in the story.

◗Pace - (5/10)

Pace wasn't suitable at times. Emotions aren't there what should I write… I'll be neutral. 

◗Overall Enjoyment - (0/5)

It was not my type of book. I'm sorry T^T. You need to improve your writing. Good luck!

‣Mr Casually cruel by shutupmalfoy7

‣Total- (67/100)

◗Title - (1/5)

Not so unique, in this fanfic world there are a lot of casually cruel Jungkook's. I could imagine a cliche storyline with the help of the title which does not benefit the book.

◗Graphics - (4/10)

The fonts are hard to detect, 'u' in cruel is blending with the background. A bold font could have been better. The background picture portrays a different kind of Jungkook, the blurb says that jk is craving love but on the cover, he's shown in a very erotic and sensual way which just does not fit right to me. For the outer look, you should consider choosing one theme, this can mess up with people's heads and they might take jk as a playboy instead of the female lead.

◗Blurb - (4/10)

Blurb is fine, I feel the basic plot is very much revealed. It's problematic when your book has
only the chapters surrounding the blurb, if the book would have been a completed one then it
might fit right to include the basics of the plot but now your book has only content which is already written in the blurb, it makes the story predictable and nothing surprises the reader.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (9/15)

There are many mistakes and errors. Vocabulary is also not very advanced however it provides enough understanding.

◗Character development - (11/15)

I do see that Jk is falling for his girlfriend which is slightly shown through words but nothing in detail about any development in characters yet. The character's emotions are expressed very well tho.

◗Writing style - (13/15)

A good one, couldn't see any major problems in here.

◗Plot - (13/15)

The plot now is slightly different from what I read in normal 18+ fanfiction, it's about a Playgirl now. Tho I don't like reading about a Playgirl it slightly makes me laugh at how differently we imagine males and how it's not real, we don't get what we want, like it sucks. So the plot is a little different though it falls in the same college au, so it ain't much different than the other. I'll give good points for the concept of this book.

◗Pace - (8/10)

Pace is okay, keep it up.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (4/5)

Enjoyed it a little.

Judge taexsarang_

‣I M Possible Love by ViniShah2

‣Total- (94.5/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

The title was very good! After reading it for the first time, I was confused. But as the story slowly
went on, the title started to make sense. It was a very unique title. I have never once read a
story with a title like this.

◗Graphics - (7.5/10)

The graphics were undoubtedly very good, it did catch my attention but not that much. It didn't
match the vibes and theme of the story quite well. It would have been better if all the main leads
were placed correctly, I mean the leads' pictures were different in size.

◗Blurb - (9.5/10)

The blurb was perfect! It was just as it should be. It was very interesting, most of the readers will get hooked on the story.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

I didn't find any grammatical, punctuation or tenses error. It was perfect. The dialogue delivery
was perfect and it had an accurate sentence structuring too. There were not too many unfamiliar words but it was just the way it should be.

◗Character development - (13.5/15)

The emotions and actions of the characters were portrayed very well. The development of Jia's character was good. After facing a horrible experience like that, she moved on quite well. All the characters had their flows. And all of them were portrayed very well.

◗Writing style - (14.5/15)

The writing style was very good. It was very descriptive. I was able to understand everything
and also got along with the writing style.

◗Plot - (15/15)

The story was going on and on and I almost thought that there was no plot. But in the last
chapter when Jia was thinking about Jimin, I actually thought she got married to him not Yoongi. But I was so wrong. She never married him, it was Yoongi. Honestly, I never expected this
because of reading Jia's perspective.

◗Pace - (9.5/10)

For a short story like this, the pace was perfect. The author was able to express the emotions at the correct pace very well.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I enjoyed the story way too much for my liking. You had written the story very well. Good job!
Just edit the graphic a little. Like, correct the size of the photo of the characters and also do lighten the background a bit.

‣Solus Snippets by Katopark

‣Total- (99/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

The title was one of the most unique titles I have ever read. It matched the story very well
and it also caught my attention at the very first moment.

◗Graphics - (10/10)

The graphics were excellent!! I don't think I have to say anything more. It was very very very good.
Well done!

◗Blurb - (10/10)

The blurb was perfect! It was very intriguing.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

The author's grammar and vocabulary are awesome. I mean, not a single mistake was there. The author has a great amount of vocabulary. And it was really impressive. It had so many unfamiliar words which made the story more and more interesting. The dialogue delivery was excellent too!

◗Character development - (15/15)

The characters were portrayed very beautifully. Both Taehyung and Fores were uniquely
portrayed. They did have flows. And Taehyung's development was good too. After losing his
mother, he has undergone great development.

◗Writing style - (15/15)

The only thing I can say is wow! Like, it was very very very good. I could feel everything throughout the story very well due to good writing.

◗Plot - (15/15)

I never expected the story to take a turn like that. First Fores died and then Taehyung was literally hallucinating everything. It was great!

◗Pace - (9/10)

I felt like the story went a little too fast. Other than that, everything was accurate and good.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I loved reading the story so much!! The storyline, plot and other things were written very
beautifully. Keep it up, author!

‣Fire and Ice by MyWorldIsAReverie

‣Total- (97/100)

◗Title - (4.5/5)

The title was interesting. It did relate to the story so much as it revolved around Taehyung being
the ice prince and Jungkook being the fire one.

◗Graphics - (8.5/10)

The graphic was good and matched the story well. Everything was good. But it wasn't much enchanting.

◗Blurb - (10/10)

Just perfect! Not too long nor too short which can make the readers skip the book.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

The author's grammar and vocabulary were wow. No mistakes were there. And there were a lot
of unfamiliar words. The dialogues were excellent, the sentence structuring was accurate too.

◗Character development - (15/15)

All the characters were beautifully portrayed. I could literally connect with the characters. The
emotions and actions of the characters were so realistic.

◗Writing style - (15/15)

The author's writing style was fantastic. It was very descriptive and I could imagine all the
scenarios that might happen if it's in real life. It was very intriguing.

◗Plot - (14.5/15)

It was really good. It did have originality. It was described very well too.

◗Pace - (9.5/10)

The pace was perfect, no problem at all. The author was able to portray the emotions and
actions with the correct pace very well.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I'm not a taekook fan nor I do read stories which include any ships at all. But to be honest, I enjoyed the story very much. You're very talented. Keep it up!

‣Halazia by UltraAquarian

‣Total- (94.5/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

Well, I have never read a story with such a unique title. It instantly caught my attention. It was
related to the story too.

◗Graphics - (6/10)

The graphic looked kinda messy and it also looked intimidating. It was not alluring. And it also
did not relate to the story completely.

◗Blurb - (9.5/10)

The blurb was really good. It was just how it should be. It did not have any grammatical mistakes. It wasn't too lengthy nor too short either.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

The author's grammar and vocab were mind-blowing. The dialogue delivery was good and also the sentence structuring was accurate too. I met with a lot of unfamiliar words too. And I also liked how you used the Korean sentences.

◗Character development - (14.5/15)

The emotions and actions of the characters were portrayed quite well. I could sometimes
connect with the characters. Everything was portrayed greatly.

◗Writing style - (15/15)

The author's writing style was very very good. It was descriptive. And I got along with the writing
style very quickly too.

◗Plot - (14.5/15)

Well, I never expected the thing that happened in the epilogue. It just got me more hooked. Things were executed really well in the story.

◗Pace - (10/10)

The pace was perfect for a short story like that. The author was able to portray all the emotions
and actions at the correct pace very well.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I'm not an Ateez fan nor have I ever read any Ateez fanfiction. But I enjoyed reading this book. The author's storyline was very good. Keep it up, author!

‣Je T'aime Imbécile by strawberry1d

‣Total- (92/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

The title was Wow. It was something I have never read before. Very unique and pretty. And also
it matched the story and its theme totally.

◗Graphics - (10/10)

The graphic was very eye pleasing and catchy. And the colours went very well with the story's theme. Also, the font was good too. The graphic was done very neatly.

◗Blurb - (7/10)

The blurb was very good. It did entice me to read the story. But mentioning all the achievements
there made it kinda long.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

Grammar and vocabulary were to the point. The delivery of dialogue was very good. The sentence structuring was perfect too.

◗Character development - (15/15)

I loved how the emotions and actions of the characters were portrayed. The characters have flaws. I could connect with the characters too.

◗Writing style - (15/15)

The writing style was excellent! I got along with the writing style soon, mind-blowing! Everything was perfect.

◗Plot - (12/15)

I loved it though I felt like it wasn't that intriguing. The things were executed well in the story, overall.

◗Pace - (8/10)

I felt like the story was progressing slowly. And also the length of the chapters were quite long which might get some readers bored.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I loved reading the story. It was great! But omit the achievements in the blurb as it was making it too long. Apart from that everything else was good. Keep it up!

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‣The Blood Dawn by SamTaefics

‣Total- (77/100)

◗Title - (4/5)

The title is great, but I have heard this title before as well.

◗Graphics - (8/10)

I like the graphics. Especially, the use of that red box. It gives off mystery and horror vibes to me. It's good.

◗Blurb - (8/10)

I like the blurb, but, there are a few errors. There are some lines where the spacing is improper and other errors as well.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (11/15)

Well, the grammar is a bit improper. There are some mistakes in the punctuation. I suggest looking out for them. I haven't seen any spelling errors so far, but there are a few grammatical errors.

◗Character development - (9/15)

I think the emotions of the characters aren't portrayed well in this book. For example, while leaving for the mission, Taehyung's reaction and physical response weren't enough.

◗Writing style - (9/15)

The writing is good, but there are some words I've seen which confuse the reader. For example, in the first chapter, 'entered the button' could have been 'pressed the button'. As I already said, there are a few publication errors as well. So, that adds up to the writing style.

On a side note, the writing style wasn't detailed, but I liked it. It was enough to create the proper scene in my mind while reading it.

◗Plot - (15/15)

The plot was something new and it was indeed interesting.

◗Pace - (9/10)

The story is progressing neither too fast nor too slow. It's rather going at a normal pace.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (4/5)

I suggest working on the grammatical errors and the punctuation part. I also suggest working on the emotional side of the characters. That makes the characters more real.

You can include a third-person point of view if that can help. Overall, the book is great. The plot, I liked that the most. It's something new and unique and actually pretty real. I can see this happening in real life, to be honest.

‣Simper In Metanoia by SongYeEun2500

‣Total- (92/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

The title is unique. I loved it. It explains a bit of the story as well.

◗Graphics - (7/10)

The graphics are good, but the font looks odd in the title, to me.

◗Blurb - (8/10)

The blurb is eye-catching. Though, certain fonts you used, it kind of makes some words not really readable.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

There are no grammatical errors and the vocabulary is pretty good as well. It's easily understandable.

◗Character development - (14/15)

I love the characters! They're not bland and actually seem realistic. They have flaws and are portraying their emotions quite well. The characters changing after certain phases are completely visible.

◗Writing style - (15/15)

I love the writing style. As I said, it's not complex and is easily understandable and it's easy to imagine the entire scenario.

◗Plot - (15/15)

The plot is something unique and I like that. Most of the time, it's the guy making mistakes and the girl suffering but here, it's different and it excites me to read further.

◗Pace - (8/10)

The pace of this story is going at a normal range. And it did manage to explain everything efficiently at the right time.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

Yes, I did enjoy reading this book. Hopefully, the author completes it soon.

‣My Last Days Of Silence by kooksholland

‣Total- (92/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

The title is unique. Gives a slight idea of the story.

◗Graphics - (7/10)

I think the cover is simple but suits the plot.

◗Blurb - (9/10)

The blurb looks interesting and makes us want to read the story.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (15/15)

I didn't see any grammatical mistakes so far and the vocabulary is good as well.

◗Character development - (15/15)

The character development was seen. The characters were portrayed excellently. I felt what the characters felt.

◗Writing style - (15/15)

I love the writing style. As I said, it's not complex and is easily understandable and it's easy to imagine the entire scenario.

◗Plot - (13/15)

The plot is not something different. There are many plots like this. But the feel of this plot, the writing style and all in total hits different.

◗Pace - (8/10)

Neither too slow nor too fast.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I cried after reading this book. This book was a total emotional rollercoaster. Even though I imagine the ending to be something else to not feel sad, I really enjoyed this book and it has my heart.

‣Destined by Bangtan_cute_person

‣Total- (85/100)

◗Title - (3/5)

The title does relate to the story, but it failed to catch one's interest. It's something I've seen a lot which is being used as a title for many books.

◗Graphics - (8/10)

I like the cover and the royalty vibes it gives. The cover gives me an idea of the setting of the story.

◗Blurb - (8/10)

The blurb has what it needs. Some interesting short scenarios and eye-catching sentences. It wasn't too short or too long.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (14/15)

As far as I read, I didn't encounter any grammatical mistakes. The usage of words is simple and easily understandable.

◗Character development - (12/15)

The characters are piping my interest. Although I'm not very fond of the name Y/N, I think she's doing a pretty good job. The other characters are portrayed well, as well.

◗Writing style - (13/15)

The author's writing style is quite descriptive. Huge paragraphs made me wonder if I'd be able to read effectively, but the plot and the setting had me hooked to the core.

◗Plot - (13/15)

Although I have seen this plot somewhere before, in a different setting and a different light, this plot makes things different.

◗Pace - (9/10)

The story is progressing at an optimum pace.

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

Yes, I enjoyed reading this book and I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.

‣The Cupid Complex by 4everSherlocked

‣Total- (90/100)

◗Title - (5/5)

The title is something new. It gives me a hint of what the story is gonna be like. I like it.

◗Graphics - (8/10)

The cover suits the theme and the plot your story has. Also, the banner in the first chapter is beautiful.

◗Blurb - (9/10)

The blurb of this story managed to catch my attention. It's of the perfect length and keeps the reader hooked.

◗Grammar & vocabulary - (14/15)

I didn't come across any grammatical errors and I find the vocabulary quite insightful.

◗Character development - (12/15)

The characters are relatable. They're not simple and they do make mistakes in this story, which tempts me to read it even further.

◗Writing style - (13/15)

The author's writing style is in 3rd person's pov, something which I'm used to. Thereby, it was easier for me to imagine the scenarios.

◗Plot - (15/15)

I haven't seen this plot anywhere, honestly. It's mostly about the grim reaper, and rarely about Cupid. So, this was an interesting read.

◗Pace - (9/10)

The pace is reader-friendly i.e. it's going at an optimum range. Good job!

◗Overall Enjoyment - (5/5)

I enjoyed reading this book. The characters, the plot and the setting are just awesome. Will surely read it completely once I get time.

Good luck!