
♥︎🏆Paranormal Batch One 𝐑𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬🏆
Paranormal batch one has been judged! If you would like to know your scores please pm me. Thank you to everyone who participated and congrats to the winners! And without a further a do... the results!
Judge: KeiraKnox1
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🏆The Results🏆
First Place:
Title: Starborn
Author: starpolaris
Final Score: 96/100
Review: I see your cover everywhere on
other books, although that isn't your fault.
It is pretty generic, however, and doesn't quite match the story. Your blurb is kind of boring, although the story itself has some intrigue. I suggest spicing it up a bit. I am absolutely in love with your first chapter. Although you have a few punctuation and homophone errors, everything about the chapter was amazing. The same goes for your other chapters. The descriptions were on-point and carefully crafted.
Second Place:
Title: Wingless
Author: CharnayMarie
Final Score: 95/100
Review: Your cover is beautiful and really
matches the title and theme of your book. The title is nice and matches the story and is unique. The synopsis is amazing, although it starts to get cliché near the end. But it's interesting enough to hook me in and make me wanna read. Your narration is well-developed, and I like the originality and thought you put into this book. It's so unique and I love it. Although, we have run into a few grammar/
punctuation/spelling problems, but they're pretty minor.
Third Place:
Title: Awakening the Unknown
Author: sdaniel325
Final Score: 92/100
Review: I like your synopsis. It flows really
nicely and attracts the reader. Although, I'd like a little more information on who 'the enemy' is. The cover is mysterious, and I have no doubt I would pick it up off a shelf in a store. The text in your prelude would be more suited as a synopsis. It's hooking and amazing and deserves to be the first thing the reader sees when checking the book out. Watch out for redundancies such as in the first sentence
where chest is only needed once. But other than that, your descriptions were artfully crafted and I was absolutely hooked to your book.
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Once again thank you to all who participated!
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