Author : dlcroisette

Reviewer : Ouryoaie

• COVER : 10/10

The cover is just lovely and fits the story. The placing of the font and text was very simple but good and I like how it also matches your other books. The title will surely attract audience of this genre and is very fitting.

• TITLE : 9/10

I am not exactly sure how this title fits into the story and I am guessing you have a reason for using it. However, it matches your other stories and is a fitting title for books belonging to the romance genre. I am not entirely sure it can attract reader's attention when heard, but it's good enough.

• BLURB : 10/10

Your blurb is a typical romance blurb and straight to the point. I love how you didn't waste time on any unnecessary description and at the same time, managed to draw in readers to read the book.

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

I loved your subtle description; that of the environment and that of your characters. Your writing style was also very good. I wouldn't say it is unique as I have seen a lot of romance novels like this, but you did beautifully well in indulging your readers with the characters' lives. In other words, most readers would not want to put the story down once they start.

• PLOT : 13/15

The plot is simple but really interesting, depending on the obstacles you put in your character's way. I like how you also foreshadowed what we are to expect in the blurb and I loved how you narrated the story as it was gripping enough to transport readers into the story.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

Unlike a lot of books, I like how you subtly described Emily and the other characters characteristics. You also did well in portraying their emotions and making a reader invested in them. I couldn't find anything with your characters as they were realistic as possible, even making your readers invested in the story. They were well thought out.

• GRAMMAR : 14/15

Your grammar was neat and beautiful and although I was barely able to find any, there were a few missing punctuations, especially your comma.
Upon reviewing a list of witnesses to be called to testify she found his name.
Using the comma after the word "testify" would help break the sentence and not create confusion within some readers. However, it's barely noticeable. Honestly, that might have been the only part and a funny example of me trying to not give you back an empty review.
Your grammar is very good.
But another thing with your dialogue. I noticed how well you applied its punctuation, but there were parts you might have left out.
Flashing him a smile, the receptionist greeted Finn energetically. "Can I help you?"
As an action along with how the dialogue was expressed, a comma would have been more suitable in this situation; the same way you use it after a dialogue, it can be used before.
Flashing him a smile, the receptionist greeted Finn energetically, "Can I help you?"
The word "greeted" played a role there as other words could have been used where a comma would have been required; said, requested, suggested, and so on.
Apart from that, you are good to go.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
(With Readers)

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

Your book is very simple and well thought out. Although I am not exactly a fan of romance unless it's unique, I loved your story. I couldn't find any issues with it and it was very simple and yet interesting to read. It is a truly lovely read and I hope you finish the book soon because it simply sucked me in.
I enjoyed reviewing this and I will continue reading the book at a later time as it's very good.

• TOTAL : 94/100

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