🔖 The Obsessions That We Hide
Author : AngelDirectioner15
Reviewer : srabonyislam
⚫ COVER : 10/10
I love the cover. It's unique just like the story. Good job with the cover.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
As your cover you did a good job with your title. Title perfectly justify your story. It is also unique and amazing.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
Blurb was interesting. It was described well. There was a uniqueness in the blurb which can attract readers easily.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 9/10
As your story guideline was unique, I found it really creative. And also, the way you describe every situations I love that. Good job.
⚫ PLOT : 14/15
The plots have unique elements and this uniqueness make your plots more interesting. I love all plots. Try to try to make your plots more well arranged.
⚫ CHARACTERS :10/10
The way you describe characters and their situations I loved it. I can feel every situations of characters while reading . Amazing job. Loved it.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 14/15
Your grammar is good. Try to use better vocabulary. And be more careful with your spelling.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 3/5
You didn't replied all comments. Try to reply all comments. In every chapters their were many comments by one person, so try to reply at least two comments.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
Overall I love the story, you did a good job with creativity, plots, characters. I absolutely loved it. Their were some tiny mistake I mentioned earlier try to improve that.
⚫ TOTAL : 94/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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