Author : gucci4dtae_x

Reviewer : SavySagittarius

• COVER : 7/10

The cover is good but looks more like fan art than book cover. But it surely attracts so let it be.

• TITLE : 10/10

The title is perfect and by what i understood matches perfectly to the story. It's kinda a synonym of what I understood the story is about!

• BLURB : 6/10

It was good but very short and not much informative about the story genre.. A bit more points can be made. Maybe by introducing the main characters in 3 points each.

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

Your story was creative. It had good attracting points and was unique. Good job here. You had good vocabulary too.

• PLOT : 12/15

The plot sounded interesting in prologue but it kinda deteriorated as the story went by.. It became a bit confusing in POV's like in your chapter two, it's not written whose Pov that was in the starting of the chapter. Though I understood later but got confused. As the first chapter ended with jimin chasing his sister and next was taehyung running to the bus stop. and i was thinking how did jimin's sister get to the bus stop? She was cooking pancakes! So, you can edit that.

• CHARACTERS : 6/10

The characters were strong but lacked in introduction of their qualities and appearance.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

No mistakes found. Great job!

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

Good work here by being polite and replying and engaging with your readers.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15

The story was great. Keep in mind the pointed out errors and everything will be fine.
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• TOTAL : 82/100