🔖 Philophobia
Author : TheOfficialBadGirl
Reviewer : srabonyislam
⚫ COVER : 6/10
The cover was too simple, it can be more nice and attractive. It doesn't reflect the storyline. Also, the font can be changed. You can write 'Philophobia' in on line. Try to make it more attractive and colorful which suits the story line perfectly.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
I love the titel. It's perfect for the story.
⚫ BLURB : 10/10
Blurb was perfect lengthy. It can attract readers easily. I love the blurb. It made me jump to the story. It was interesting.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 10/10
Author is creative without anu doubts. I found every plot creative. The way author described all scenarios it was really creative.
⚫ PLOT : 15/15
Plots were nice and well arranged. Story matched with real life. It was sad, depressed but loving and inspirational. I love the story.
⚫ CHARACTERS : 7/10
All characters were nice but, there were lack of enough description about all 'Adien' also Zaya's mom brother and father. All characters need more description. It will be make your story more nice.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 15/15
I didn't found any grammatical or spelling errors. Well written story.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 0/5
There were no comments.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I love the the story, it was realistic and inspirational. I really did enjoyed the story and, I will read all chapters till the end. There were some lack in the story I mentioned earlier need to be improve.
⚫ TOTAL : 80/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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