Author : abihaatif22

Reviewer : wwenqing

🌼 COVER : 7/10

Cover is very simple. It could have been a better one, that would perfectly give a sense about the story. But, it's good enough for the book.

🌼 TITLE : 10/10

Title perfectly matches the book. Gives a very rough sketch about the story.

🌼 BLURB : 10/10

Blurb is very simple, but in my opinion, it suits very well with the story. I found it very interesting. Can easily attract romance lovers.

🌼 CREATIVITY : 7/10

The story is quite good and interesting as well. But, I felt the plots were a bit rushed. Also, author could explain the character's emotions more.

🌼 PLOT : 12/15

Like I said, I felt the plots are a bit rushed. You can take your time and explain everything perfectly. For example, Sarah and Daniel's all the encounters. Their emotions could be described more.

🌼 CHARACTERS : 8/10

Characters are good. I really liked Jen's character and also, Sarah's. But your characters misses a little description. Since there is already a cast list, ypu can just add a bit description about them.

🌼 GRAMMAR : 15/15

No grammatical errors.

🌼 COMMUNICATION : 5/5

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🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15

Overall, I honestly think the story is really good and fun to read. Writing style is also quite neat. In my opinion, you can describe everything with more details. It'll be more enjoyable to read. Also, if you make a book cover that matches well with the story, it can attract more readers.

🌼 TOTAL : 86/100