Author : dreamcatcher0105

Reviewer : Ouryoaie

• COVER : 10/10

The cover fits the exact same scene from the character's stand point and it's good enough for the story.

• TITLE : 10/10

The title was just one word. Simple and yet it portrayed what the story was about.

• BLURB : 9/10

Hmm, the blurb seems to play on emotions instead of the story itself. As it focused on a few moments of the characters life, it was well phrased.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

The creativity was there and it was very good, however, I kind of fear the image the story is trying to get across.

• PLOT : 12/15

It doesn't really have much of a plot; or rather, a simple one, but it was well laid out and really touching.

• CHARACTERS : 10/15

What I really appreciated was the way you portrayed the kind of person your main character was without going into a long monologue of unnecessary detail. You even managed to draw out the emotion here and it was exquisite.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

I rarely see this and I really appreciate the fact that your grammar was just perfect. From your choice of words down to the littlest details with punctuation. This was well written and it was a smooth read.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

I have never actually seen a reader give so many comments within a single chapter and to be honest, it's a bit alarming for me. I could have sworn I saw over thirty from a single user.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

I know the main character went through a really disturbing experience and it was a touching read, and it showed some insight on what happens in some people's lives.

• TOTAL : 94/100